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Emotion, Er..., Friday Flash 55, G-Man, Gently uttered, Hesitant, Hushed, Peace, Release, Secret, Sigh, Silence, Soft murmur, Sound, Unnoticed, Whispers
Image credits: titiavanbeugen@DeviantArt
Fractals of breath
So carefully measured
Glazed with time
Cherished and treasured
Released with poise
Cosmically sublime
In rolling spasms
Of a soundless chime
Distilled and pure
Like aqueous glory
Untouched and safe
From a misquoted story
Caught in space
Aloof and withdrawn
Amorphous in form
Like scattered dawn
The uncelebrated magic of a sigh…
**Posted for G-Man’s Friday Flash 55… Check it out and see what others had to say in EXACTLY 55 words!! The variety is amazing!! **
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
I just saw this poem. As I have already said, the experimentations with structure is what keeps you apart. Poem in 55 words! 😉
Oh maaaann.. thanks a bunch, Mihir… we a re but a result of our “experiments” .. aren’t we 😉
Glad you liked this one…
Nice, all I can say is this flowed so smoothly, I felt like I was in a dream! Awesome pic too! I wish my vocab was this well refined,lol. I need a thesaurus.
Oh now now, Paulo… I am flattered 😉
Thank you soooo much, my friend… you ARE back from your dream now though… aren’t you!? 😉
Umm… will send you a thesaurus REAL SOON…. hheheheh
Glad you enjoyed this one, P!!!
I really like your rhymes K!! You do an amazing job with them in this one! They all flow so smoothly! The last line caught me off guard, I had to read it all again. Overall very well crafted!
Aww..thanks a HEAP, Mark… you do realize that I am SO inspired by your rhymeful works…don’t you!? 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this one so much, my friend… it gives me immense pleasure to see a fellow-rhymester like my work… (sigh ;))
Thanks again, M…
You make my weekend a very happy one!!
Salute to a creative wordsmith.
hahah.. you flatter me, Sammie… and frankly, I feel honored! Thank you ever so much, my friend…
smiles…and i just wonder what made that sigh…perhaps some beautiful words…nicely played kavita
hehehhe… you say the nicest things, Brian.. thank youuuuu!!!!! Now YOUR words here totally made my day!! 🙂
Have a great weekend, pal..
perfect rhyming words..
the last line is fun and divine….
Happy Friday!
Gee…thanks a ton, Jin.. I really appreciate your words here…
xoxox
Muted, recital?
Soundless- chyme?
I hear all the words sung as a song while I heaved a sigh after reading this.
Do you know how hypnotic these words are? That image is just spinning my mind..
Really, I feel dizzy as I write this- completely possessed. I see myself getting sucked in a vortex..
Isolated Eternity!!
can’t see m..o..r..eeeee!!
Whheeww.. that’s quite a compliment there, Liv… I am gloating, floating and… HEY!! Just help me get back to Earth..will ya!?!!? 🙂
And… thank yoooouu-uuuuu-uuu (from far up in the sky).. BRING ME BACK!!! 😉
Yes, the image (thanks to DeviantArt) was just perfection for the words… good thing I “found” it!! (sigh ;))
Obviously a sigh is NOT just a sigh…As time goes by.
Loved your 55 Kavita.
Very nicely written.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
And obviously, you are such a sweetheart, G-Man!! (sigh :))
Thanks for these kind words, my friend… you have a FANTABULOUS weekend yourself!!!
xoxo
Scary, how good this is.
Aww…thanks ton for the appreciative words, Friko.. I am humbled by your kindness
xoxo
nicely done….the words swirl in graceful harmony.
Gee.. glad you enjoyed this swirly ride on a sigh, MM… thanks so much for your kind words…
what a lovely marriage of words and picture
oooohh.. thanks a bunch for your lovely words here, Lime… so glad you liked this one..
“The uncelebrated magic of a sigh…”
Magic, Kavita!
Aloha from Waikiki
Comfort Spiral
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Aww… thanks, Cloudia… glad you enjoyed this sigh.. 🙂
‘Fractals of breath’.. lady you are amazing! Lovely poem.. And as someone said above.. I was thinking of the ocean while reading this and the last line threw me off..so had to read it again..and then it became those soap bubbles in the sunshine.. I love the imagery your poetry evokes.
PS: please teach me English.
Dhaamiiiii..thank you so much, dear!! Your kindest words here made me feel like I was flying up there somewhere… I am so so happy you liked this poem, my sweet friend…
hehheheh.. you thought of the ocean while reading this huh?! HOW SWEET!! I actually wanted to see the different things that’ll come to mind while reading this… yaaaaayyyy And Ocean felt GOOOOODDD 😀
And soap bubbles? How awesome is that!!
Thank you once again, girl… you just made my Friday evening PERFECT!!!
Have a lovely weekend…
xoxoxo
P.S: As for English, I just attempt my hand at it… REALLY happy you liked it here 🙂
Positively brilliant. A perfect mastering of word and phrase.
http://timkeen40.wordpress.com
Whhheww!! Quite a compliment there, timkeen… thank you ever so much, my friend!!
Your appreciation for my work here really means a ton to me!!
xoxox
Oooo, lovely.
hehehe..thank you so much, my friend!! 🙂
xoxox
really nicely written. “theuncelebrated magic of a sigh” – i absolutely love that line. 🙂
Awww.. thank you, Dishlicious… am very glad that you liked this one so much!! And I JUST LOVE your pen name!!! 😀
xoxox
That’s the most beautiful way to capture an expression , each line could define a sigh in the true way. Loved the words you chose, very nicely picked and presented. 🙂 🙂
In the meantime , I would love if you would have a look at this :
http://bitsbj.blogspot.com/2011/03/wishful-thinking.html
Thanks! 🙂
Gee.. thanks a bunch for your kindest words of appreciation here, Bandan… really, it means a great deal to me… (sigh.. :))
And yes, am off to read your right away!! 😀
sigh…
nice mix of words swirled around your pic.
heheheh… thank you sooooooooo much, K… your comment made me..well.. sigh…
xoxoxo
ohhh wowww this is an amazing write … the last line made me speechless..
brilliant.
Ooooooohh.. Raji, lotsa hugs to you for this sweeeeeet comment, my dear… Totally made my Saturday!!
Thank you sooo much!!!
xoxoxo
A very interesting poem.
Gee…thanks, Dr. FTSE 🙂
“Like scattered dawn…” what a marvelous line!
Yaaaayyyy!! SO GLAD you liked that line, Charles… Thank you!!!! I could somehow picture it perfectly for a sigh… and then, later, when I was looking for a picture for this poem, I made sure to look for one that actually looked like a scattered dawn…. beautiful and bright… and yet, like a sigh…
Booyyy… it was a tough hunt! 🙂 But I liked what I saw 🙂
I love “the uncelebrated magic of a sigh”.
(sighhhhh)…. thanks, Alice…
Glad you do… 🙂
xoxo
Beautiful! You have captured it well, this uncelebrated magic of a sigh – and in such a magical way too. And the image is quite breathtaking… I love the idea of carefully measured out fractals of breath.
Yaaaayyyy… you made all those connections between the poem and the picture!! And I soooo appreciate that, Ruth…
Really happy you enjoyed this poem-picture combination so much!! Thanks a ton, lady!!!
Lotsa hugs coming your way…
xoxoxox
such a unique poem with such unconventional theme 🙂 it’s worth reading it. enjoyed thoroughly. 🙂
Woohooo!! Thanks for saying, Dr. B!!! You brought a HUUUUGE grin to my sleepy face 😀
I am very happy you enjoyed reading this poem… really, your comments made me feel very proud about this little sigh of mine 🙂
Very nice, my friend– I could feel mine inside at the last 2 lines.
AWww….that was the sweetest thing you could have said, Marilynn… thanks you ever so much!!
xoxoxo
A truly amazing capture of the different descriptions of a sigh. One cannot define a sigh, yet you effortlessly convey all the connotations of that indistinguishable human expression, nay animal expression.
I bow to thee, o master of words!!
Ooohh… I am flattered, hubby!! Thank youuuuu … (sigh)…but you hear that from me all the time.. don’t you now?! 🙂
Kisses and hugs to you!!!
I could go on n on reading this post .. so so so beautifully rhymed and imagined 🙂
Aww..thank you you so much, N… I kinda had a feeling that you would particularly enjoy this poem a lot.. and I WAS RIGHT!! Yaaaaaaaaayyyy
Am very happy you did, sweetie… mwaahhz and hugs!!
A soundless chime…a misquted story…oh I hear this muted recital loud and clear. Another beautiful 55. Love your work, Kavita!
Awwww… you are such a sweetheart, Belinda!! Thank you so much for liking and identifying with this poem…
While writing it, I just felt as if our sighs go wasted most of the time… and hence this one 🙂 Glaaaad you enjoyed it….
xoxox
Bravo! What a fabulous celebration of a sign. Outstanding choice of illustration.
Altogether well done, my dear.
Awww… coming from you, these words mean THE WORLD to me, Jamie.. thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu
(sigh) … I just couldn’t help it 🙂
A truly BREATH taking SIGH!
Aww… now that’s such a sigh-evoking comment, JP…thank you sooooo much, my friend..
I am attracted to this poem. Does that make sense? It pleases me and I want to go read it again…
hahaha…it makes A LOT OF sense to me, Lydia!! And it pleases ME to see that it has pleased you enough to make you want to read it again.. now does THIS make sense?? Whheeww.. I am just excited that you liked it so much! 🙂
Thank youuuu!!!
xoxo
The flow in this was absolutely divine…like a sigh…:)
Awww.. thank you sooo much… this really means a lot to me, girl…your saying so does!! (sigh)
xoxoxoxo
“Cosmically sublime”
that is the perfect description of this poem… really, of all your writing.
“The uncelebrated magic of a sigh…”
how true. and how much meaning can be behind a sigh.
great image to go with your words, Kavita, but you always do an excellent job in pairing images with your poems.
i love this! one of my favorites. ♥
Oh my god!! That’s the highest compliment EVER on this poem, Dani… I am honored that you liked it so much!!! Thank you (from the bottom of my heart), girl…. (teary eyed…really!)
I think this poem holds a special place in my heart as well…
Oh..and as for the pictures, I hunt them down usually from DeviantArt.com… they have an AMAZING collection there!! But yes, I do spend hours trying to get the most appropriate one for my poem.. and I am happy to see that you like how they fit my poems, Dani… REALLY!!
Once again, a heartfelt thanks!!!
xoxoxo