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Image Credits: Me (for the photography) and Hubby (for being my model)
Holding a light, and guiding through
Paving ways, they throw a cue
That steady gaze; the knowing looks
Flipping leaves, of us helpless books
With dancing flames, they spill out fire
They burn me down; Like I were a pyre
A glance, a wink; a flash, a glare
Telling me things, no lips could dare
Sedate and grave; Unflinching calm
A force they bear; Loud as a storm
A sweep or two, of lashes dense
Making me melt, and matters tense
Wisdom, charm, and dreams that soar
Warmth and cool, they’ve these and more
Open or not, it is the same
When faced with them, peace shirks in shame
I dive into, those eyes so brown
Deeper than seas, yet I won’t drown…
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
The eyes have so much power to communicate…how well you say that in your poem.
Thanks.. (um.. can I address you as Martin?)
The eyes have some communication powers indeed…
Just want to say what a great blog you got here!
I’ve been around for quite a lot of time, but finally decided to show my appreciation of your work!
Thumbs up, and keep it going!
Cheers
Christian
Gee…thanks a ton, Tweda!! I am glad you liked this piece so much… Your appreciation means a lot to me!
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you won’t drown,
Glad to read that….
Hubby will save me from drowning, Ji 😉
heheh
lovely flow,
well delivered and the rhythm is perfect!
Thanks for sharing!
Happy Wednesday!
Aww….thanks a ton, Jin!! So happy that you enjoyed this poem… it really is special to me!
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Greetings from a first time reader. Loved the imagery in your poem. Playing with themes in this manner reads very easily, much like a call-and-answer sort of vibe. I look forward to reading more of your work.
crb.
Oooohhh..thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation and encouragement here, Caribbean!!! Your comments really made me VERY VERY happy….
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Not a problem. I’m a total poetry nerd so I spend waaay too much time reading and writing. Your poetry caught my eye and there was no way I couldn’t stop to comment. Nothing better than to find other poets who are willing to share their work with the wider world. Can’t wait to read some more of your work, so keep up the writing! Stop by The Fools Back Pocket sometime, I update a lot so there is usually something new to peruse. Enjoy the weekend,
crb.
crb.
Thanks for understanding, CRB… You are a poetry nerd eh?! Sounds awesome!!!
If there is anything that’s as good as writing poetry, it’s reading poetry!!! 🙂 So I will definitely head over to your site and check it out!
You have a wonderful weekend yourself…
What can I say–I love your work, so amazingly written!
Oh my my !! Thank you for this compliment, thoughtsnotlost! I am flattered!! I am so so soooo happy you liked this poem…
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Wonderful poem!=D and lovely image ^^~
Whooppiieee!! Thanks a bunch, R!! (many hugs)
And that image was actually clicked by me.. (blushing) 🙂
the eyes say a lot, and you tell almost all in ur words 🙂 good one Kavi..
Eyes sure do say a lot, Leo!! As for what I said, well, it was just an attempt.. I am sure I missed out a lot ! 🙂
Glad you liked this one, buddy…thank you so much!!!!
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Not the first nor last visit of mine. Loved the line “A glance, a wink; a flash, a glare
Telling me things, no lips could dare”. Great poem.
Hurraaaayyyy… thank you Penelope!!! Your comment made me feel very good..
I am thrilled that you enjoyed this poem so much!!! Thanks again..
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
wow
A glance, a wink; a flash, a glare
Telling me things, no lips could dare
wonderful expression of love …. cheers!!!
Gee… thankoo, Wiser! Love brings out the best of expressions one has in them! Don’t you think so ?
Glad you liked this poem…
Have a lovely weekend, my friend!
What communication you have made with words.. They burn me down; Like I were a pyre..!! So intense.. Touched by every word that you spoke..
Happy Rally Sweetheart
xoxox
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My sweet girl, with your comments, you make me blush ! Thank you so much for your kind words, darling…
Hope you had a superb Rally yourself! Happy weekend, sweetie.. xoxox
Love the flow and rythym of this write Kavita
..as always I’m left pondering the rest of the story…I like that.
Aww…don’t ponder too hard, Dennis.. the eyes will have “read” it anyway 🙂
Glad you liked the poem, my friend…thank you so much!!!! Your encouraging words here mean a great deal to me!!!
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Kavita, lovely image and poem.. I am short of words…
Happy Rally…
Rhyming Waters
–Someone Is Special–
Gee…thank you so much, SiS… just this comment of yours made me feel very nice… goes to show that you really liked the poem.. and I am very happy that you did!
As for that image, heheh… the model posing for me, is my super sweet hubby… 🙂 Glad you liked the image as well! I take that as encouragement to try out some more photography 🙂
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Beautiful… I enjoyed it. Loved the words…
“A sweep or two, of lashes dense
Making me melt, and matters tense”
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay – sharing a verse every day about love, longing and life
Gee..thanks a ton, Shashi!! Glad you enjoyed this piece…
Eyes do indeed have a way of speaking for themselves, and listening too!! Don’t you think? Once again, thanks for your kind words here…
I will definitely check out / follow you on twitter as well. thanks fro the id..
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
awww such an adorable poem…
beautifully penned gal 🙂
loved the photographa too 😀
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ooohh…thanks a ton, Raji!!! Glad you enjoyed the read AND the picture! The eye in the picture is dear hubby’s ofcourse! And I wouldn’t be fair to the poem if I put any pic up there other than the subject’s!! 🙂
Thanks again!! 🙂
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
The eyes very often say what the lips don’t. Great poem.
You can say that again, Kim!! The eyes speak a different story altogether (which usually is the truth!) 🙂
Glad you liked the poem, my friend.. thanks fro the visit, and the thoughtful words here…
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Wow loving the rhyme pattern Kavita; the whole thing just flows so effortlessly.
Great poem! 🙂
Kiera xxx
Yaaayyyy…thank you so much, Kiera!! Not everybody likes rhymes… but I LOVE ’em!! So when somebody appreciates the rhymes in my poems, I feel so so so happy about!! I am really very glad you enjoyed this read, Kiera…. thank youuuuu!!! 🙂
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
I love the last line. What a way to end it. 🙂
It really IS an ocean, River… phheeewww.. Thankfully, I know he won’t let me drown .. So, I am good 🙂
Glad you liked the read, girl….thank you so much for the appreciation..
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Beautiful Kavita… Quite lovely. Love and Light, Sender
Ohh..thanks you so much, Sender… gee.. I am very glad you liked this one!!
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Eyes and words– a powerful pair– nicely written!
hehehe…that’s an awesome way of looking at it, Marilynn!!! Thank you so much… I am glad you enjoyed the read, my friend..
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Kavita,
I think you are LOVELY!!! and i feel I should use another word just as you mentioned how often you use that word while on my blog…yet, its the perfect word to express one of the ways I experience you!
This is a beautiful poem…and the eyes, oh, the beauty of the eyes…Diving into them.
Until next time…
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Annie, you make me blush with your words, sweetheart!!! (blink blink…turning pink pink :))
Thank you so muchhhhh for your “loveliness” !! You are so kind to me!! I am flying all over the place!! 🙂 I am very happy that you liked this poem+pic so much!! The subject in the pic is my hubby ofcourse (and I am so crazy about those eyes, that THAT pic was a must!! :))
Glad you liked it! Yaaayyyyyy
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (in-laws visiting).. 😦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
love it..love it…. I believe in the power of eyes. In fact it was that which sent out the initial sparks when I first met her;-)
Awww….then you understand perfectly well how they (eyes) work!! Phhheewwww!! Amazing…no?!
Glad you liked this poem so much, Keshav! Thankooooo..
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Have a great weekend, my friend…
what a brilliant poem! indeed, the unspoken words conveyed through one’s eyes are far more powerful than the spoken words. well done, kavita!
Indeed, Bing! Eyes can speak waaaay louder than words (or even actions, for that matter!)!! No?! 🙂
I am very glad you liked this poem, my dear friend.. thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words here.. they mean a great deal to me!!
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (in-laws visiting)..
Have a great weekend, my friend…
First, Kavita, so good of you to post commet on Musings of a Passanger explaining how to link to Rally so we can find her. Kind and thoughtful. 🙂
Yes, indeed, the eyes do have it and you have said it so well. And they do hold the light …
Happy Rally, Kavita.
Gee…anytime, Jamie!
And thank YOU for your kind and thoughtful words at my blog! Your comments are something I always look to! They seem to point to /highlight those aspects of my poems that I myself have an inclination towards! And I feel very happy when someone points out something good about those same aspects! And you are a re one of those “someones” 🙂 Glad you liked this poem, J… Yes, eyes do a hold a very very unique power indeed!
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply (and reduced blog visits) though… I was/am kinda caught up at home (in-laws visiting)..
Have a great weekend, my friend…
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I liked it true.. but would have to visit again to get to the root..
I am:
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Thank you Purvi.. it’s so sweet of you to say that.. Glad you liked this poem..
I will be visiting you very shortly myself…
Take care, my friend.. 🙂