Sing me a lullaby
With your sweet voice
And drown down all echoes
Of even the most thundery noise
Weave me a blanket
Of your soothing arms
And hold me close to you
Far from world’s grave harms
Breathe me a kiss
Of your tender care
And save me from dying
From an attack of despair
Recite me a story
From your soul’s page
And lightly open my mind
To the wonders of a new age
Build me a home
With your affection
And watch my eyes shine
While I look in your direction
*~*Posted for Magpie Tales – Week 45… For other lovely takes on the above picture prompt, please do click on this link here…*~*
Gemma @ Greyscale said:
A sweet and lovely lyrical request!
Kavita said:
Aww..thanks a ton, Gemma…
xoxoxo
dancingfreak said:
wow!!
such a beautiful poem!! π it really touched me π
your best write ever!! π
keep rocking!!!
Kavita said:
Aww…thanks a ton, Harshika sweetie… xoxoxoox
Emmanuel Ibok said:
Sweet, really!
Cheers!
Kavita said:
heheh…thanks, Em … Cheers to you too!!! π
Berowne said:
Nice rhyming; well done.
Kavita said:
Gee..thank you, Berowne…
Lyn said:
There’s nothing like having a beautiful reason to hope..just so lovely..thanks!!!
Kavita said:
Aww..thank you so much, Lyn dear… am really happy you liked this piece
deadpoet88 said:
Aww, what a lovely poem! Really enjoyed it!
Kavita said:
Thanks a bunch, dp sweetie…
hope hayduk said:
this is really a lovely piece. a musical rhythm to it and nice flow
enjoyed it very much! thank you
and thank you for your visit and comment on mine
like the falling snow effect. would love to put it on my blog, how do you do it?
π
Kavita said:
Gee..thanks a heap for the kind words, Hope…
As for the snow effect, that was a temporary feature enabled by WordPress… alas, it’s no longer there.. I was loving it myself …
gautami tripathy said:
Beautiful writing!
a picture
Kavita said:
Thanks, Gautami.. xox
Myrna said:
What a beautiful response to this prompt. Your words evoke feelings of tenderness and yearning for the safety of love. It’s beautiful.
Kavita said:
Aww..thank you so much, Myrna… very happy you liked this one..
penpusherpen said:
a mothers love reciprocated…I enjoyed the read…xPenx
Kavita said:
Aww..thanks a bunch, Pen… so glad you enjoyed this little innocent one…
willow said:
This is really lovely, Kavita.
Kavita said:
Aww..thank you, Tess! Your pictures are so inspiring…
budhaaah said:
This poem I have loved the most till date Kavita. It was so beautiful.
Kavita said:
Aww..now that’s quite a compliment, B.. thank you!!!
~L said:
this is so beautiful!!!! the musician in me want to put a melody with this…. you really are so talented!!!!
Kavita said:
Ooooooh…how sweet is that!!! Sing it out aloud, my dear…. (and please don’t mind if I croak along too) π
But seriously, your kind words made my day!!! THANKOOO
moondustwriter said:
Very reflective
lullaby to building me a home
so much expected from a babe
Kavita said:
Isn’t it now? Glad you liked it, Moonie…
Mary Bach said:
Oh, that’s really lovely.
Kavita said:
Gee..thanks, Mary.. very kind of you..
Helen said:
I loved this ……….
Kavita said:
Aww… thanks a ton, Helen!!!!
xoxo
gospelwriter said:
I love your take on the image, Kav – the whole thing like a soothing lullaby to rock the child in us to sleep…
Weave me a blanket
Of your soothing arms
…
Recite me a story
From your soulβs page
Beautiful!
Kavita said:
Yaaayyy..thanks, Ruthie.. your encouraging comments always keep me motivated to write more!! THANK YOUUUUU
slpmartin said:
Such a beautiful poem…it has a feeling of tranquility to it.
Kavita said:
Thank you so much, Charles… such must be the language spoken from a child’s eyes.. don’t you think ?
Ram Santosh said:
this is beautiful!! i was wondering if it could be made a song!
Kavita said:
Woohoo! Thanks, Ram… try singing it… and lemme know.. π I would LOVE to hear it sung…
Ollin said:
Bravo again! Kavita. Btw, since you are a poet you might want to chime in with your favorite poems of all time back at my blog. I would love to hear your recommendations, and I’m sure my readers would too. π
Kavita said:
Ohhhh… thank you ever so much, Ollin!! That’s very kind and generous of you…. I would love to do so!! But by favorite poems, do you mean from the ones I have written myself? Or in general, my fav. poems by my fav. blogger friends? Either way, lemme know how and where to do it, and I would be most eager to!
Sumit Sarkar said:
“Sing me a lullaby”
“Weave me a blanket”
“Breathe me a kiss”
“Recite me a story”
“Build me a home”
All the first lines of each stanza put together form a small poem… π
The last four lines are simply superb…Great work…
Kavita said:
hehehe… so glad you read it that way, Sumit… that’s EXACTLY how I intended it to be read when I had written this one.. thanks for understanding, S..
Ollin said:
Oh I mean in general. Like I mentioned I enjoy Frost, Lorca, and Kipling. Just wondering what famous or nonfamous poets inspired you and share them with my readers. You can leave a comment on my blog: http://www.thecourage2create.com The post is titled: “3 poems you must read before you die.”
On a similar note, however, I was considering you for a guest post in 2011. If you are interested you can use my contact page on my blog. I was thinking either you can write a poem or talk to my readers about how to be more poetic in your writing.
Kavita said:
Oohhh… both the prospects sound most exciting! I would be delighted to give my favorites on your blog post!! And thanks for the invite for the guest post! That’s most kind of you, Ollin.. I considered myself honored!! I have never done such a thing before.. so it’s really up to you whether you want me to write a poem for/on your blog, or have me talk to your readers about my poetic escapades and muses… π
Thank once again for your kind consideration! π Gee… I am gloating already!!
Ollin said:
Maybe you can do both? Well anyways, why don’t you contact me through my contact page and we can discuss the details. π
Kavita said:
Will do… VERY soon!! Year end, new year, birthday… all around the corner.. So, I am kinda excited about all of that for now π
Ollin said:
No worries. Yeah once the holidays are over we will discuss. Happy Birthday and Happy New Year!
Kavita said:
Gee… thanks for everything, Ollin.. I have been super lazy in replying (for the past month or so).. my apologies for that π¦
haisley said:
very sweet kavita…..
Like your comment in my blog…. Keep it up!!!!
Kisses,
Haisley
Kavita said:
Awww…. thank you so much, Haisley… you are very kind…
xoxoxo
Teresa said:
This is wonderful. A poem of love and protection. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/16/mother-and-child/
Kavita said:
Thank you so much, Teresa… you are too sweet..
Shigune Matsui said:
Cool poem! I did mine on mother and child bonding. Here’s my Thursday poem http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/20-days-of-winters-harvest.html
Kavita said:
Thanks for the kind words and the link, S… much appreciated!
L said:
Lovely poem. It took me back to the days when my boys were infants, and I held them while they slept. :o)
Kavita said:
Awww…how sweet is that!!! Glad my poem brought back fond memories, L…
Much love to you, my dear..
Jingle said:
super peaceful and wonderful piece..
magnificent magpie.
Happy Friday!
Kavita said:
Thank you so much, J… your words are much appreciated, my friend..
Someone Is Special said:
Very beautiful poem kavi.. Picture is awesome..
–Someone is Special–
Kavita said:
Aww..thanks, SiS..
The Reason You Come said:
This sounds like a lullaby itself , pleasant-sounding and beautiful!
Kavita said:
hehehe…thankoo, Reason… I hope you didn’t doze off reading this one…. WAKE UP, GIRL!!! π
Loviez to youuuuuuuuuuuu…
signed .............bkm said:
A beautiful Christmas Lullaby…..thank you….bkm
Kavita said:
So glad you enjoyed it, bkm.. thanks!!!
jannatwrites said:
Being a mom, I loved this tender poem about the bond (from the child’s POV). Nice π
Kavita said:
Aww…coming from you (a mom), that means a lot to me, Janna.. thank you so much… π
xoxox
Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved said:
A sweet, tranquil warmth to this. Thank you. A fine Magpie.
Kavita said:
Thank you so much, J… (kisses and warm hugs to you)
Katherine said:
Such a soft and gentle refrain. I quite like your take on the Magpie prompt.
Kavita said:
Gee..thanks a ton, Katherine… very sweet of you to say that… much appreciate it, girlie..
mstevensson said:
Lovely and nourishing. Really presents a happy picture of the relation between two people in an almost maternal way. I enjoyed read this one.
Kavita said:
That bond is indeed quite special…isn’t it, Mark?! Well, I am glad you enjoyed this one, my dear.. thankooz…
Carrie Burtt said:
Kavita this is beautiful!! π
Kavita said:
Awww…. thanks a ton, Carrie…
xoxox
ninotaziz said:
Dear Dear Kavita,
Merry Christmas!
http://poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.com/2010/12/merry-christmas-one-and-all.html
Kavita said:
Aww….thank you so much, Nino…
Wish you a WONDERFUL New Year, my dear!!!
xoxoxo
~L said:
I read this and going of notes and a melody… You are very talented!!!!!
Kavita said:
Gee…that’s very kind of you to say, Layla… thanks a ton!! I am flattered!! I really appreciate your words here, my dear..