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From what place?
From corners of a mind,
Where thoughts interlace
In what way?
In manners by which
Many hearts will sway
For which one?
For souls that dare
To shadow the sun
Till what time?
Till the day when
There’s left no rhyme
To where next?
To galaxies of verses,
Governed only by text
**Posted for Friday Flash 55, hosted by G-Man… Please do check out the other creative writings as well… :)**
moondustwriter said:
Kavita
I love the interface here. Like a student and a professor or a child and a parent
What a great discovery of the universe
Moon love
hope you know how much I appreciate you
Kavita said:
Gee.. Moon, thank you!!! Your love and appreciation are most valued!
Yes, this conversation can applied to so many a pair! Mine was between an interviewer and a poem.. π Glad you liked what your read…
Have a lovely Monday, my dear friend…
gospelwriter said:
Nice Q&A 55! I especially like the middle answer:
For souls that dare
To shadow the sun
Oh yeah!
Kavita said:
Poems are for those that DARE π So glad you liked those lines, gospelwriter!! I had felt very nice while writing those lines myself π
Thanks for your kind words…
Have a lovely week ahead!
Jingle said:
love your creativity in a fun and beautiful way..
very brilliant 55.
way to go!
π
cheers!
Kavita said:
Yippee!! Thanks, Jingle!! And I love reading your comments… they always make me feel very nice…
A very happy Monday to you, sweetie! π (hugs)
cindy said:
It’s a lovely piece Kavita, I love the galaxies of verses π
Kavita said:
You know Cindy, The idea for this poem began with a thought that crossed my mind – “galaxy of verses”.. these 3 words somehow just seemed to cross my head, while i was in the shower :)…and then, the rest of the poem just happened…
I am so glad you liked it…thanks!!!
Happy New Week! π
Gally Lines ~ LestISmiteThee.wordpress.com said:
Sweet little poem, Kavita :3
Kavita said:
Awww…thanks, Gally!!! Glad you enjoyed the read…
A Happy Monday to you sweetie.. (hugs)
ram0singhal said:
divine….always true to name…..
.having no question is enlightenment….
having many answers is wisdom…….when questions become
answers that is freedom….
love all…
Kavita said:
Oh wowww.. Ram.. thank you!! That’s a compliment that I feel doubly nice about… THANK YOU!!!
And yes, I love and believe in the religion of freedom…
Glad you liked this piece, Ram.. your words are so soothing to the eyes and mind..
Love and Best Regards..
ram0singhal said:
divine….one of the best blog…..worth time…bless you……
visit my new blog…..http://nature0wonderama.wordpress.com/
all inspirations…..photo feature blog….
love all….
Kavita said:
Oh wowww .. thanks for this AMAZING compliment, Ram… I am so honored and humbled!!!
Thanks for notifying me of your new photo/picture blog… I saw some posts, and they are so vivid and inspiring!! Will leave comments there in a few months… and add it to my BlogRoll as well!!
You are too kind, Ram…
Love and Best wishes to you…
Megz said:
wwooowww
brilliant one Kavi π
loved it π
awesome rhythmic flow π
Kavita said:
Aww..thankooo Megzie!! Sooo happy you liked this teensy one… I too kinda liked the way it turned out…
Happy Monday, girl!!! (hugs and kisses) π
Fact finder said:
Your answers are simply superb. My heart is filled with a genuine warmth and satisfaction. I believe you have great potential in the world of words…
Kavita said:
Hubby, with your love and encouragement, I feel like I have touched the sky… I just want you to be with me… Love ya!
heartspell said:
This a great 55… long live the written word of Kavita. Iwould like to share some awards with you bestowed on me via Jingle, because I love coming here to read your work. I am never disappointed….
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/
Enjoy…they are well deserved and Happy Weekend, my magnificient friend!
π Heartspell
Kavita said:
awww.. HeartSpell, you leave me stunned and smiling!!! π Thank you for your kindest words of appreciation for my work, and for the beautiful award!!! I am really glad you liked this poem.. REALLY! Gee.. I know I say the same things in my replies, but that is actually how I feel when I read your comments.. it’s just so nice to be loved and appreciated, that one doesn’t find words enough to thank!!!
MWAH!!! And hugs to you!!!
Hope you had a lovely weekend…
Enjoy a fabulous week ahead!!! π
tracyhsays said:
This one is different…I like the style. I want to be one that dares to shadow the sun π Well done, My Friend. A very fun, thoughtful read.
Kavita said:
hehehe.. it was different alright! π
Oh..and you sure dare to follow the sun in your heart, Tracy!! Poems are FOR you, and you are for poems!!!
Thank you for stopping by to comment, and I am so happy you liked this one…
Have a fantastic Monday, my friend! (hugs)
Someone Is Special said:
Brilliant 55
Please visit this page to receive your awards…
http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/p/awards.html
–Someone Is Special–
Kavita said:
Hurrraaayyy!! Thanks for the awesome awards!!! You are tooo kind!
And am very glad you enjoyed this read….
Thank you once again!! I am humbled…
I hope you have an awesome week ahead!!! (much love)
Someone Is Special said:
Hi
I had tagged you, visit the tag here
–Someone Is Special–
Kavita said:
Hi..
oh wow.. thanks for tagging me!!!! that’s very kind of you… I too will definitely answer these ans “pass this along”…. awesome!!
Have a great week ahead! π
buttercup600 said:
Till the day when..thereβs left no rhyme…those words summed it up for me….I just anwered the question I read between the lines of your poem….that is for how long I will write….I loved this Kavita….you have taken me on a wonderful ride…and into a world that only we will know….thanks my dear friend…I know you’re busy on the other side writing as well, I just saw your comments before…I send you love through the universe…and see you on a page????? Love you girlfriend …Mwah xxxxx
Kavita said:
You understood it right, Amanda! π
According to me, this is what a poem would say/answer, if ever interviewed! π
Read your Q-A post! π And now I am thinking of answering those myself! It’s awesome!
Looove to you too sweetie… Hope you are having a ROCKING MONDAY!!! π
stilekke said:
….lovely words…..for sure…
Kavita said:
Gee… thank you Stilekke!!! Glad you enjoyed the interview π
Have a great week ahead, my friend…
brian said:
may you never reach the end of you galaxies…smiles…
nice 55…
Kavita said:
Aaahhh.. I take that as a REAL blessing from you, Brian.. thank you!!! You are too kind…
Glad you enjoyed this read, my friend
Hope you had a fabulous weekend…
Enjoy a great week ahead!
Shravan said:
The poem is meaningless from out but deeply meaningful.
Do u remember me? I am Shravan. My book ‘Values of Humanity’ Has been published and is available on I-Proclaim bookstore.
Kavita said:
I remember reading your work, Shravan… Great to learn about your book being published!! Congratulations!
Thanks for stopping by my blog… glad you liked this read, and found it worth your while… it was tribute to every poem in the world, ever written or ever conceived!
Have a fabulous week ahead!!!
Jannie Funster said:
I too am fascinated by that shadow the sun line. Very evocative and visual.
Such big questions. Such a big universe filled with love unfathomable.
xo
Kavita said:
absolutely! And sometimes, poems find and bring answers to some deep and otherwise tough questions…don’t you think? Glad you liked the read, Jannie… Thank you for your kind words here… I really appreciate it!
Have a lovely week ahead, my friend… (hugs)
Nessa said:
I like the way you ended with a question.
Kavita said:
Oh Nessa… I had ended it with an answer.. but these web browser glitches made the formatting go haywire.. So I’ve changed it now! So you will see 5 questions and 5 answers too π
I hope you still enjoy the poem (with the answer at the end :))
Have a lovely week ahead, my sweet friend..
claudia said:
that’s really coolβ¦.till the day when there’s left no rhymeβ¦hope that day will never come…
Kavita said:
Aaahh… thanks a TON, Claudia!! I too hope so…
Glad you enjoyed the read, girl…
So, Cheers to writing!! π
And have a fantastic week ahead!!! (hugs)
Harshika said:
wow!! amazing π
nice write π
Kavita said:
Yaaayy.. thanks H!!!! Glad you liked it!!! π
Happy Monday, sweetie!!! (many hugs)
Eric Alder said:
Interesting 55, although I’m not so sure I like how all the questions are “Mr.” and all the answers are “Ms.” – but it’s your piece, to write as you see fit.
(I just know that I – a “Mr.” – have plenty of answers… and my wife has LOTS of questions!)
Kavita said:
hehehe.. I see where you’re coming from, Eric!
Well, this was an interview of a poem.. and I somehow thought a poem to be female…Further, I didn’t want to confuse the reader by making the interviewer female as well.. so I had to make him a “He”… And hence, this piece π
I really felt liked I owed you an explanation here π
As for questions and answers, my hubby will agree with you.. hehehe
Have a great week ahead, my friend!! π
pravin nair said:
Hi Kavita,
this is well done..I liked the verses and the way you have used the words here..
Thnks for the share π
Kavita said:
woohoo.. thanks a ton, Pravin!! Glad you enjoyed the read… π
Good luck for your recent book, and best wishes for many many more…
Have a great week!
Thom said:
So creative this is. What a beautiful 55 my friend. Very well done π
Kavita said:
Yaaahooo.. thank you, Thom!!
I figured this is what a poem might have to say, if interviewed ..So glad you enjoyed the read π
Hope you are having an awesome week!
Thom said:
And have a great weekend π
Kavita said:
Oh I did, Thom!! Thank you π
Hope you had a fantastic weekend yourself!
reedssss said:
brilliant
outstanding
remarkable
audorable
these all words are 4 u
ur a grt poet for me
everyline has it’s perfect place:)
Kavita said:
My my my!!! Girl.. I am flying on your words…. thank youuuuu
I am so very happy you liked this one.. mwaahh!!!
Have a lovely week! π (many hugs)
tekia said:
Simply wonderful Kavita π love the wisdom of Ms. Answer: “in manners by which many hearts will sway” and “to galaxies of verses governed only by text”- awesome lines. Bravo to a great poet!!
Kavita said:
Oh… I am humbled by your kind words, Tekia.. thank you, my dear friend!!!
I thought this is what a poem will have to say, if she were ever interviewed π Glad you enjoyed the read!!
Hope you have a SUPERB week ahead…. (MANY HUGS)
Val said:
Very spiritual and deeper when read more than once. This is my kind of poem. π
Kavita said:
yaaay.. thanks a bunch Val!! Glad to see that this is your kind of a poem!!! I am happy I could write something that appealed to you… yipppeee !
Hope you are having an awesome week, my friend..
Jamie Dedes said:
The linear vs. the intuitive is how I read this?? Yes?
Lovely. Well done, Kavita, as always.
Kavita said:
Oh yes… that’s one way to look at it!!! When I was writing, I was thinking of it as an interview of a poem… so yea, in a way, your interpretation seems so much aligned with mine… yaaayyy!!! Thanks a ton for reading into the lines and words, Jamie… you are always so thoughtful… I really appreciate your comments and insights..
Glad you liked this poem…
Have a beautiful day/week, my dear friend… (hugs)
Ollin said:
I loved this piece. You’re quite a poet! π I love that the rhyme of the poem didn’t feel forced, it felt very natural, and there was nothing that stopped the flow. Good work!
Kavita said:
Oh wowww!!! And this is quite a compliment, Ollin… thank you so much for your kind words… and I am extremely delighted to know that you really enjoyed this poem…
The idea for this poem had originally spurred from the word “next”.. I was just wondering what rhymed with it, and I thought of “text”, and then the rest just flowed into my head :)…We have really strange ways of thinking..don’t we? π
Have a fantastic week ahead, my friend…
ds said:
Nice! Creative and thought-full. I don’t believe you will run out of rhymes…
Kavita said:
Ooooohhh.. That’s the best one can wish for me… Thank you so much, DS… that really means a LOT to me!! I am very glad you liked this poem…
Have a fun week ahead, my friend…
jannatwrites said:
I loved this poem, simple and beautiful. The picture was cool, too π
Kavita said:
Wasn’t it?!?!?!? Thank you sooo much, Janna… your words just made me grin wide!!! Cuz that’s how I had thought after I was done writing this poem!! Yaayy…
And that image?! That took a lot of hunting π But as soon as I saw this one, I just KNEW that it would perfect for this piece…
So I am VERY glad you liked this poem and the picture… thank you once again!!
Have a gorgeous week, Janna!! Take care.. (many hugs)
Dr. Madan Goyal said:
You always push me to write
Though it is a really big delight
You create awonderful scene
And sleep with you in dreams
http://drmadangoyal.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/surgeons-handicap/
Kavita said:
Awww…thanks, Doctor.. I am very happy to see that you are constantly inspired to write poems… it’s lovely!
Glad you enjoyed this one…
And I hope you are having a wonderful week…
Abhishek said:
True .. very true..
The last two lines ….
How just some text can give produce something so powerful….
Kavita said:
hehehe.. and to think that I started off this poem with a hunt for a word that rhymed with ‘next’!!! π
Glad you enjoyed the read, Abhi…. Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation….
Have a super fabulous week ahead! (hugs)
Lua said:
“the galaxies of verses ”
Lovely Kavita- it made me smile! Thank you for the sweet little poem π
Kavita said:
Awww.. anything for you, Lua… your warm writes always get me thinking.. this is just a teensy one from me π
Glad you liked it.. thank youuuu!!!
Have a beautiful week…. (many hugs)
Chloe said:
This is so creative Kavita! Captivating! Well done for another awesome poem π xx
Kavita said:
Yippee!! Thank you, Chloe!!!!
Glad you enjoyed it… it had started off as a thought in my shower.. as word that culd rhyme with “next”!! Can you beat that?!?!? π I am really weird.. I am now beginning to believe it myself! hehehe
Hope your weekend was WOW!!! Have a fun day/week ahead, girlie.. mwahz and hugs..
Chloe said:
Ah, next is such a difficult word to rhyme with isn’t it? I can only think of vex….but maybe that came to mind because you vex me ‘cos you’re such a brilliant poet π haha
It’s amazing where inspiration comes from though isn’t it? It’s also amazing how inspiration can dry up – which is what I’m going through at the moment. ah…but it’ll pass π
I think I agree with you – yes Kavita, you are VERY weird! lol…but in a nice way of course!
Have a lovely Thursday my friend π xx
Kavita said:
This is like the AWESOMESTEST comment ever!!
I like being called ‘weird’.. kinda makes me feel like I am different and all that… I see you are a Capricorn yourself… if so, same pinch! I suppose this ‘weird’ thing is a Capri trait π
It really is amazing how n where inspiration comes from…!!! Geeee.. let’s not even get there! phheewww
LOVE YA, Crazy Chloe!! You are too too toooooo good! And I so love our chats…
Oh by the way… Mickey? What about him?
Chloe said:
Mickey is doing okay and he sends his regards! lol…I think the mice are slowly going away….I’ve not seen any…just their droppings which is GROSS!!! haha. I’m not too worried about them anymore – I think the novelty has worn off! Ha – been there, got the t-shirt!!!!
Ah, so you’re a capricorn too…might explain why we get on! Or why we can get away with calling one another weird!! haha
Oh, since my last comment, I found some inspiration from somewhere to write a couple of poems…
I still don’t know where you get all of your blogging energy from!! You rock!!! I love our chats Tooooo π You are so much more responsive than Stormy, my little dog π xx
Kavita said:
Woohoo.. way to go, girl!! Keep writing… Don’t let the inspiration “wear off” .. if you are anything like me, then you had better get to the poems RIGHT AWAY, before the words decide to go on a stroll .. you know what I mean..?
And I m more responsive than STORMY?!?!?? PLEASE… I am sure Stormy gets tired of your energy at times!! π
Mouse droppings…eeeewwww!!
Me just wrote a poem.. looking for a title and a picture to go with it now.. after that, I will post it.. yaaaayyyy
Waiting to read your already!! π
deadpoet88 said:
Wow, I really like this one. The title give it a lot of perspective too! Good one Kavita, keep them coming!
Kavita said:
Heheheh.. I had to REALLY think before finalizing on this title, DP.. Glad you liked it!
So, a SPECIAL THANK YOU for that !!!!!
With encouragement from you, I am sure I can keep writing, with the hope of entertaining readers in the process as well… thanks a bunch, DP..
I hope you are having a great time off… Relax, and have a superb week ahead!
siubhan said:
“for souls that dare/to shadow the sun”–amazing, my friend. π
Kavita said:
heheh…thanks a ton, Siubhan.. I too though these lines felt/sounded mystical and groovy.. I hope I didn’t overdo it though! π
Glad you liked them, S…. thank you!!
Have a lovely week ahead!!! (hugs)
frayedges said:
Galaxies of verses governed only by texts- lovely. That would be dreamy. Now I have an award for you! http://frayedges.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/butterfly-award/
Pass this on to 1 to 10 friends π
Kavita said:
Dreamy indeed!! Just like this lovely butterfly award you have for me.. THANK YOU so much, Lisa!! You have no idea how much I adore butterflies.. so this is very special to me!!
Glad you enjoyed the poem enough to give me this lovely award .. yaaayyyy
Have a gorgeous week ahead, my friend…(much love)
mstevensson said:
I really enjoyed your question and answer format to this one! Reads off very well π
Kavita said:
Yaayyy…thanks a ton, Mark!! Kinda liked the output myself… π Had never expected to end up with such a poem! And am so glad you enjoyed it !!
I hope you are having a fabulous week, my friend! (hugs)
tasithoughts said:
Always amazing what you write…
I also wanted to let you know of some recognitions I gave you. See:
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/some-special-poets-i-admire/
Have a great Sunday!
JP
Kavita said:
Oh wowww.. that’s a treat to read, JP.. thanks!!
And a HUGE THANK YOU for the special mention in your post… I am humbled and honored by your gesture… This is awesome!!
I did have an awesome weekend, and I hope you did too!
Have a fantastic week ahead, my friend… (many hugs)
Tony Single said:
Was the whole thing worth reading? Of course! But this:
For souls that dare
To shadow the sun
I’m heartened that you dare to do this, Kavita. π
Kavita said:
I soo look forward to your comments, Tony! They totally cheer me up!
As for the dares, hehehe… we can only dare, and in the process, sweat a bit! π
Glad you enjoyed the read, my friend!! !
Have a fun week!! (hugs and love)
Anky0112 said:
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Anky0112 said:
okay I wanna say that… I associated it with Mr. lover’s questions- miss. beloved’s answers and i kinds found it romantic π
a poem is always a love of a writer… amazing piece…
P.s- hope u understood my previous blank comment.
Kavita said:
you smart girl!!! I TOTALLY got what you meant, in your previous comment! π
And I was smiling to myself… and then, in the next minute, you sent this message, and then my beliefs were confirmed!! π Thank you so much, sweetheart… You are such a fun and kind soul to have around!! MWAH for that!!! And many hugs too!!
And you are the only one that saw (and mentioned) this was a poem about a a poem!! THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU… Yes, to me, this was an interview of a poem!! I thought, every poem anyone has ever written deserves a teensy tribute! π And hence this!
Glad you liked what you read, Ankita… LOVE YA LOADS!!!!
Hope you are having a gorgeous and fun week! π π
Kavita said:
hahahahaha
Cheryl said:
What a brilliant 55. The questions, the answers, the way you presented it ~ dynamic.
Kavita said:
Wowww… I am so glad you found this poem dynamic and interesting, Cheryl…. thank you so much! You are so very kind and appreciative!! Your comments are most valued!
Have a beautiful week ahead, my lovely friend…
Many hugs to you!!! π
Alethea said:
the last two lines were fantastic…. and “For souls that dare
To shadow the sun”. You are such an amazing poet:)
Kavita said:
Awww… Gee, Asmita!! I am flattered!! Thank you so much, dear girl….
I am so pleased you liked and enjoyed the poem! Yaaaayyyy!!! Thanks again for your sweet words for me and my work… your kindness is most appreciated, sweetheart!
Have a splendid week ahead!! (loadsa love and hugs)
surbi said:
loved it again… are you hoping to publish a book of poetry.. pls do so.. you are the best!
Kavita said:
Woohooo!! Thanks Surbhi… I hadn’t really thought of it…
But this encouragement is really making me think π You are too kind, girl.. thanks again!!!
Really glad you enjoyed this poem, sweetie… Take care…
Trisha said:
Just fantastic. wonderful piece of discussion.
Kavita said:
Yaaaayyy… so glad you enjoyed this interview, Trisha! I just LOVED the idea of interviewing a poem .. heheh..
Thank you for the appreciation, girl… I am very happy to see your comment!!!!
Many hugs to you…