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Flying carriage, Gateway to dreams, Journey together, Love, Magic carpet, Thursday Poets Rally Week 27
Come on, my dear, rest on me
For I’m as plush as can be
Repose upon my fibres soft
Soon I shall take you aloft
Now that you’re here and perched
Pardon me if I lurched
I have begun this jolly ride
‘Tween white clouds, you will hide
Farewell to ground have been bade
My oh my! Are you afraid?
Please trust me, do not worry
For I will be in no hurry
This smooth drift in mid-air
Wind blowing through your hair
For your face lit with smiles
I could fly a million miles
Tell me when you want to land
I’ll guide you, just hold my hand
Back to earth, here we are
My love, on you, I’ll leave no scar
I hope you had a lovely time
For this, from you, I’ll take no dime
Come to me whenever you wish
Off we’ll go, to skies we’ll swish…
** The above poem is my entry for Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally – Week 27**
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….this is lovely uplifting feel good stuff……well done!!!!
Thanks a bunch, Stilekke!!! And your immediate comment was very uplifting to me… thank you so much!
Glad you liked the poem… Enjoy the ride 🙂
Have a great week!
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Wonderful.
I fly all of the time in my dreams but it’s usually in a card board box.
Hhow sweet is that, Ness!! A cardboard box!! One of these, you might find it “borrowed” by me 🙂
Glad you liked this one.. and thanks for the sweet comments..
Happy Weekend!! 🙂
Magical 🙂
And congrats on the award!
Woohooo.. thank you (for both), Cindy!! 🙂
Have a happy weekend..
I’m inching closer to the top of the comments list. Heh heh… 😛
Hey, congrats on the award, Kavita. It is well deserved! And this poem brought a big, goofy smile to my face because it made me think of riding on a cloud like it was a magic carpet. Now, how cool would that be? 😉
wowww.. you really are inching closer to the top, Tony!!! LOVE YOU FOR THAT!!!
Thanks for sweet wishes… And keep that goofy smile pasted to your face! You will find me on an adjacent cloud, waving out to you.. 🙂
Yea, COOOOL indeed! You could toon it up!
Happy weekend, T… and hi to Cass too!! 🙂
wow!!! such a lovely poem 🙂
i’ m already flying 😀
yaaaaayyy… I just saw you behind a cloud up there 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this one, Harshika… so sweet of you!!
Happy weekend, sweetie 🙂
wonderful poem Kavita…
loved the fantasy filled ride that you had taken us into
hehehe.. glad you enjoyed the poem (and the ride), Raji 🙂
Thanks a ton for your kind words…
Hope you have a gorgeous weekend!!! (hugs)
Fantastic! It comes across to me as something a Siren would coo seductively into the ears of a seafarer he looks over the vast ocean dreaming of seeing something that he could touch.
Oooohhh…now I LIKE that perspective too… VERY MUCH indeed!!
Thanks for sharing your view, my friend… it was most interesting and appealing!! Glad you enjoyed the read 🙂
Have a great weekend!!!
so dreamy and quite fantastical 🙂 for some reason reading this gives me the urge to watch Aladdin…
heheheh… too dreamy eh, Siubhan? We all need those once in a while though…no?! 🙂
So…did you watch Aladdin? 🙂 Glad you enjoyed this one… and thank you for your sweet insights… they are most appreciated!
Happy weekend, my friend.. (hugs)
This is a feel good poem (which is important for me right now as I don’t feel all that good). I really enjoy the feelings provoked by this poem. Be Inspired Today! Love and Light, Sender
Oh.. I am very glad to have posted a poem that appealed to you, Sender.. really glad!!!
Thank you so much for your kind words… I much appreciate them!
And I hope you have a GREAT weekend!! (many hugs)
Very beautiful poem indeed.. I loved it..
Do stop by Sweetened Waters
–Someone Is Special–
Wow… thank you so much, my friend… I am so glad you liked this one!!!
Oh, and I did read your poem, and commented on it too… it was lovely!!!
Have a wonderful weekend…. 🙂
I hope you had a lovely time
For this, from you, I’ll take no dime
Come to me whenever you wish
Off we’ll go, to skies we’ll swish…
magical moment …
wow,
I love the flow of your words, they rhyme and give me a divine time…
🙂
outstanding poem!
hehehe… Glad you enjoyed the ride, Ji!! And for someone as special as you, I can give many more rides, FOR FREE!! 😀
Thank you sooo much for your sweet and encouraging words, sweetie…
Have a fabulous weekend!!! 🙂 (many hugs)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/
pick three awards from my post,
pass them to 1 to 10 blogging friends with whom you believe that they deserve them.
have fun!
Take good care.
Sure, Jingle… by this Sunday night, I should be done with accepting and passing these wonderful awards… I am soooooo far behind 😦
Thanks for understanding, Ji…
Many hugs to you!!! You are an amazing friend to have!
You too take care, and have loads of fun!
I am thrilled about your participation,
you always give poets the best possible encouragements and
you truly into other people’s work…
keep up the excellence,
on the best possible result, u may want to scan all participants to visit or read to meet the requirement, we have half a dozen FRESH ones and they deserve encouragements…
thanks a ton.
your talent rocks!
🙂
🙂
Aww.. that’s so NICE to see, Jingle.. Reading other poets’ works can sometimes give you a lot of insight into many things… it’s very inspiring for the reader! I enjoy doing it, as much as I enjoy writing…
And thanks for the appreciation, Ji… I am honored!
I have visited maaaaaannnny fresh poets…and BOY!!! They Rock!!!
Shine on, girl…. (mwahh) 😀
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/08/55-what-is-it.html
I am out of town tomorrow most of the day,
Will read your 55 later…
here is mine.
have fun guessing what is IT!
Read your 55, Ji… hehehe.. too cool!! Commented too, with my guess 🙂
Have a fun and relaxed weekend, sweetheart… mwah!!!
what a refreshing and inspiring piece… i love it!!!
yaaayy… did you ride my carpet??? I hope you enjoyed it 🙂
Thanks for your sweet words, PinkLady…
Have a lovely weekend!! 🙂
I really enjoy the rhythm of this poem!!! thanks for sharing!
http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/attention-deficit/
Thanks a ton, Ms. Peaches…glad you enjoyed it.. 🙂
I really love the 2nd stanza of this piece! very nice. thanks for sharing
http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/attention-deficit/
Gee…thank you so much, girl… Glad you enjoyed the jolly ride… 🙂
A very happy weekend to you!! 🙂
What a soft, lovely ride that must be! Mmmmm! 🙂
Hope you enjoyed and had a safe ride, Eric 🙂 It was soft alright…what with the clouds et al..
Thanks for your kind words, my friend..
Have a superb weekend! 🙂
Kavita
This is lovely and I like the rhyming form!
Pamela
hehe…thank you so much, Pamela… very glad you enjoyed it…
Have a great weekend!!! 🙂
Oh, I want one! Lovely ride, Kavita.
hehehe..you can borrow this one, Patti.. 🙂
Glad you enjoyed the ride, my friend…
Have a wonderful weekend!
lovely poemmmmmmmmmmmmm kavitaaaaa
thank youuuuuuu… 🙂 Hope you enjoyed the soft ride, Rida! 🙂
Kavi, the celebrity poet? 🙂 liked it.. u deserve it.. 😀
and regards the poem.. hats off.. or shd i say “carpets off” to you 😀
liked it a lot.. ur imagination is astounding! 😀 well done!
heheheh… thanks, Leo.. the award ROCKS!! Me so proud and honored to have it!!!
Glad you enjoyed the poem too… so, did you ride the carpet? how was it? 🙂
Have a splendid weekend!!!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/happy-birthday-2-lisa-plus-happy-belated/
Help visit 5 to 10 poets from the list to wish them Happy (Belated) Birthday,
take the butterfly award,
share with 1 to 10 friends…
🙂
DONE!!! 🙂 You rock, Jingle!! 🙂 Thank you for the butterfly award…it’s really special, cuz I love butterflies!!!!
Happy Friday!!
Nicely done. Poem has a light and airy quality to it that I enjoyed.
Gee.. thanks a ton… I am very happy to see you enjoyed the poem… (AND the ride :))
Have an awesome weekend!
nicely played kavita…love has a way for transporting you to some pretty amazing places…even allowing you to feel weightless and flying…smiles.
You can say that again, Brian! Love’s really a magical carpet of sorts 🙂
Glad you enjoyed the read… and thanks for reading into the inner meaning of this poem… it really was very nice of you…
Hope you have a fantastic weekend, B 🙂
I love the feeling of flying I get from this :3 Well done!
THANK YOU, Gally!!! Hope you enjoyed the ride as well.. 🙂
Have a splendid weekend…. (hugs)
very nice, airy
Hope you enjoyed this weightless ride, Jessica 🙂
Have a fun weekend, my friend…
Dear Doll congratulations on the award so well deserved my dear poet and..love this poem as well, reading you is complete bliss for me..
‘Come on, my dear, rest on me
For I’m as plush as can be
Repose upon my fibres soft
Soon I shall take you aloft’
Please do take me aloft..your writing sure does take me 🙂 x
Wild Rose/Julliette
Yaaaaayy… thank you for your sweet wishes and loveliest words, Julliette!!! I sooo love reading comments from you… they make me feel so nice and cheery, like the onset of a lovely weekend… thanks once again, my dear…
I’m very glad you liked this poem… and for you, I have no limit on the number of rides!! Join me WHENEVER you wish, sweetie… mwaaahhh!!!
Have a super gorgeous weekend, oh Wild Rose… (many hugs and kisses flying your way – ON that carpet) 🙂
Kavitha …your words are like the magic carpet..goes well with that lovely picture 😉
suja
heheheh.. thank you Suja…glad you liked the poem (and the ride)…
The amazing picture is all thanks to photobucket.com! 🙂
Hope you are enjoying a terrific weekend, sweetie… (many hugs)
Thanks for being so kind today to come and visit me. I am glad you stopped by. What an amazing write you are..
Aww… thanks for your kind words, Amy… Glad you liked what you read here…
I hope you had a FANTASTIC anniversary celebration… and may that extend itself into the weekend as well 🙂 (much love)
Beautiful, romantic and magical!!! I especially love these lines:
“This smooth drift in mid-air
Wind blowing through your hair
For your face lit with smiles
I could fly a million miles”
Wow !! Chloe xx
hehehe… how sweet of you, C… And here, I sense a sappy romantic in you .. 🙂
Glad you enjoyed the poem…
If I had a magic carpet at my disposal right now, I would be in UK, helping you drive away those mice!! 🙂
Yes, I guess there is a sappy romantic in me! How did you guess? 😉
I am shocked – from the way you described this magic carpet, I actually thought it WAS real – are you telling me it’s NOT??? 😀
Hope you have a great weekend my friend xx
I just KNEW! 😉 Yea, I’m a psychic too! 🙂
So… how was the ride on the magic carpet??? I am getting a feeling you really enjoyed it… hehehe
Thanks, sweetie.. And yes, it WAS VERY REAL alright! 🙂
By the way, whenz your birthday? Jus asking.. You could mail it to me if you wish.. I just have a thing for birthdays.. that’s all .. 🙂
Enjoy your weekend!!! And a huge Hi to Stormy from me… 😀
What a pretty story told in verse! Good job!
Woohoo.. thank you, Liz… hope you enjoyed the ride as well! 🙂
Have a beautiful weekend…
is my hair windblown? you just took me on a thrilling magic carpet ride:)
Why thank you so much!!! That really was very sweet of you!!! And oh yes, your hair is all over your face!! 🙂 I’m soooo happy you enjoyed this ride…
You may fly high over the weekend as well … Enjoyyyyy!!! 😀 (hugs)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/happy-4th-wedding-annivery-2-amy/
help visit one blogger for her 4th wedding anniversary,
I tagged you for
Back To School Game,
if u wish to play,
answer 5 questions,
tag 5 to ? blogging friends…
no pressure,
it is fun only if you like it,
yaaaayyyy… Wished Amy, Ji!!!! When I went to her site to give her belated birthday wishes, I saw it was her anniversary y’day! 🙂 So I immediately gave her DOUBLE wishes …heheheh
Thanks for the reminder, girl…
I saw the tag!! It’s cool… will post and play soon 🙂
Happy Weekend, sweetie… 😀 (hugs)
I started commenting on the carpet of your dreams and landed in my own ‘Dream World’ http://drmadangoyal.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/558/
Beutiful indeed
Thank you doctor!!! Glad you enjoyed this ride 🙂
Am off to check your poem now… Have a relaxed weekend!
this isn’t the first time am saying this … but I can’t help… you totally are amazing.. how you do it…
your ideas… lines…. selection of words makes me speechless….(well am saying so next time am gonna post a blank comment to show my *speechlessness*)
everybody has said so much about your piece and I back with all of them….
keep posting
viva la vida 🙂
hahahah.. Ankita, now I am REALLY gloating! 🙂 Thank you so much!!! And yea, the next time I see a blank comment from you, I know what that’s supposed to mean… 😉 Thanks for the hint.. hehehe
But seriously, I am thoroughly delighted you liked this poem so much… yipppeee!!! And your lovely and encouraging words mean the WORLD to me, sweetie…
Once again, my humble and sincerest thanks to you …
Hope you have a blissfully gorgeous weekend, love…. mwwwaaahhh!!
(many hugs)
Am blushing…. Thanks for this amazing reply… 🙂 😳
ANYTIME sweets!!! by the way, how did u get that blush emoticon? it’s real cute 🙂
“to skies we’ll swish” is just the sweetest, most evocative little line. What a wonderful poem.
heheh.. thank you so much for your sweet words, Christine… I really appreciate it, and am very very glad you enjoyed the ride, and the poem!!!
Have a gorgeous weekend, my lovely friend… (many hugs) 🙂
I want to ride on that cloud with you forever dear Kavita, this is stuff made of magic and wonders. You are so deserving of this award…your enthusiasm, sweet nature and spirit shines the light right back to us and I want to come here forever. I love you my friend…I love your work, I love this poem…most of all, I love coming here. You feed my soul. Hugs xxxxxx
heheh.. I gift this magic carpet to you, Amanda… All rides FREE, for you!! 🙂
Thank you sweetiepie, for your amazingly kind and soulful comments.. and thanks for the wishes on the award as well.. right back at ya girl! 😉
It’s my honor that you come here, like my stuff, comment on it, and give it life! And trust me.. Srini (hubby) will vouch for this too!! 🙂
Let’s ride on together, love… and we can giggle and ooohh aaaah at the wonders of this planet, from up in the clouds… WOW! How fun would that be!!!
Take care, Amanda… and have a rocking weekend! Sunny smile and warm hugs coming your way 🙂
Kavita, don’t take this the wrong way – it’s meant the other way – the right way…
When I read this I was transported back to my childhood, sitting in bed with Mumps-measles or something spotty, and my only friend was a child’s collection of verse by Robert Lewis Stevenson. He wrote a poem about a boy playing with soldiers upon his “counterpane” – a victorian word for bedspread – lovely, luscious word. I sat there with that poem and with Robert’s wonderful words that I’d never heard before, and I fantasized to my heart’s content, not feeling a bit sick, bored or even sorry for my welted, spotty self. This poem has a magic carpet that not only transports the reader, but speaks with promises of more… It’s wonderful. I really love this. Please (now this is the part I mean the right way) consider writing for children. Somewhere out there, a child’s imagination lies asleep, desperate for your kiss to wake it up.
WHOA!! Cindy, those are some terribly huge compliments…. A huge thanks! I am quite overwhelmed actually… and really very happy to know that my poem brought back lovely (albeit pockmarked) memories…
Oh, and there’s nothing wrong about or right about your suggestion – and I am honestly giving it a serious thought! I mean, this, coming from you, means a LOT!!! So, I take your suggestion as encouragement, and will hopefully take it forward too…
If you say that I can awaken a child’s imagination with my stuff, I will definitely give it a shot! Thank you once again, C… You really made my day/weekend/week!! 🙂
Hope you have a relaxed and gorgeous weekend… (many hugs)
And I could not agree more…you have to follow through with this dream and talent you have Kavita…Cindy has got it soooo right…!!! xxxx
Oooooohhh… OKAY ma’m…whatever you say!!! 🙂
Seriously Amanda (and Cindy) .. thanks for the encouragement… And yes, the dream’s on!!! And I am on top of my dream! 🙂
xoxoxoxoxo
Very sensual. They just keep getting better. Lovely images.
X Lisa
Whooooaaaa!!! Do they now?!?!?! Why thank you, Lisa!!!! That’s very kind of you…
Hope you enjoyed the ride 😉
Have a fun weekend, my friend…. (much love)
Still a fairly new reader, but definitely enjoying what’s here.
Yaaaayyy.. Glad you are enjoying it here, Kristal….
Happy blogging!!!
And a very happy weekend too!! 😀
I am drifting along with you, Kavita with the wind in my hair…. how peaceful and serene…never let me back down to earth… beautiful ride in this piece… thanks for sharing with me, with all of us. 🙂 Heartspell
Oh sure HeartSpell…ride along for however long you wish… Enjoy the breeze… mind your hair! It’ll get into your eyes 🙂 The view’s beautiful..isn’t it?! 🙂
I am soooo happy you liked the poem AND enjoyed the ride, my dear HeartSpell.. After a hectic week, you definitely all the relaxation you can get!!!
Thanks for your lovely comments… you are awesome, H!!!!
Have the best and most beautiful weekend… Take care, sweetie.. (many hugs)
very beautiful words Kavita 🙂
Heartiest congratulations on the award…much deserved 😀
Yaaaaayyy.. thank you so much, girlie… fro the wishes, and for the sweet comments!
I hope you enjoyed the breezy ride 🙂
Have a lovely weekend, my friend..
I enjoyed this magical ride. Congrats on the award 🙂
Huurraaayyy!!! Feels great to hear that you enjoyed this ride… yipppeee
Thank you so much for the kind words, Rosidah… It’s really sweet of you..
I think I misspelt your name while leaving a comment on your blog.. I think I missed the ‘h’ in your name.. sorry about that 😦
Have a fabulous weekend, sweetie… (much love)
No worries :). Thanks for your lovely comment on my blog. Have a wonderful weekend, too. Hugs and love
THANKYOUUUU 🙂
As for commenting on your blog, the pleasure was all mine 🙂
Flying carpet, magical ride, hopeful poem. Lovely read. 🙂
Yaayy!! Glad you liked it 83… hope you enjoyed the ride too! 🙂
Thank you soo much for your sweet and delightful comment.. it was a pleasure to read!
Have an AWESOME weekend, my friend…
A very lovely and whimsical poem. Loved it!!
Wooohooo.. thanks a bunch, Tekia… It felt great to read your comment, and to see that you enjoyed this read and ride! 🙂
Have a super weekend, girl… (hugs)
Hey, this is awesome.
I really like the rhyme scheme in this
Thanks a ton, Richard!!! I am very pleased to see that you liked this one…
With a light one, the rhymes too came pretty easy 🙂 (thankfully!)
Have a fabulous weekend, my friend…
a lovely magic carpet ride – wish I had one! (oh let me check around, maybe I do…) – and you do find the most gorgeous images to accompany your writing!
hehehhe… did you find your magic carpet?? Yipppeee.. If not, you can always ride mine 🙂
So glad you enjoyed this read and ride, G… and thank you for the awesome comments! They are so appreciated!! 😀
Oh, and the credits for the lovely image go to Photobucket.com.. (and ofcourse some of it, to my diligent hunt too! ;))
Have a fantastic weekend, my friend..
A nice light airy feel to this one, Kavita. Well done! Sorry I was late getting over here!
Good God, Jess!! Can you read my mind or something!?!?!? I was having lunch now, away from the monitor, and was just thinking about you – that I haven’t read anything from/by in a few days sorta… and now I get back to my laptop, and HERE you are (rather, here’s your comment!)!!! Wow…. this is creepy good! 🙂 And your comment is kinda like an answer to my question too… whoa!!
Anyway, glad you enjoyed the poem, girl… hope you had a fun ride 🙂
Have a super awesome weekend, J.. (hugs)
P.S: No apologies needed at all… please… 🙂
A lovely wisp on the wind– I like the fun vibe of this one!
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Yaayy.. glad you liked this one, Marilynn… Hope you enjoyed the ride too!! 🙂
Thanks for the kinds words and encouragement…
Have a splendid and relaxed weekend, my friend… (hugs)
Wooooooosh. fun.
heheheh… hope you enjoyed the ride, WEM!!! 🙂 Thanks for the fun comment 🙂
Happy weekend, my friend… (hugs)
one word. wow.
Woohooo.. Thanks!!! Hope you enjoyed the ride! 🙂
Happy Weekend!
love the rhyming..lovely poem 🙂
Yaaayy.. thank you so much, dear friend!!! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem…
Hope you are having a great weekend! 🙂
It is essential we remember to enjoy the ride.
Absolutely!!! Hope you enjoyed this one 🙂
Have a lovely weekend, my friend..
A very fun, magical and uplifting ride!
Great poem, Kavita 🙂
Wooohhooo!! Thanks you so much, Imagina!!! Glad you enjoyed the ride 😉
And I hope you are having a fun and LOVELY weekend! Take care, my friend ..
Klever Kavita!!!!
Magical, mystical talking carpet ride … what fun … loved the trip. Thanks!
Congrat’s on your award, by the way, Kavita! Hooray!
Yaaaaayyy…Thank you, Jamie!! 😀
MANNNYY HUGS TO YOU!!!
“talking”!!! You are the only person that said it, Jamie!! Thaaaanks!! 🙂 I am SO GLAD to see that you enjoyed this fun ride, sweetie ..
And I hope you are having an AWESOME weekend!!! (mwah!!! )
Awesome imagery. It is so lyrical- I could feel the playfulness.
So glad you enjoyed the poem, Lisa.. Thank you so much for riding with me… 🙂
Hope you are having a great weekend, my dear friend…
your name is worth it ..ms. kavita.. 🙂
you are an awesome poet.. 🙂
Oh… wow!! This compliment is music to my ears, Sayandeep… thanks a ton!!! You are too kind…
I am very happy you enjoyed this piece.. Hope you had a fun ride!! !:)
Ahhh…..Aladdin’s magic carpet!!! Can I please have a ride on it??? This poem has awakened my childhood desire to fly on a magic carpet and go to a dream land haha
Childhood desire?? I still think of such things as a possibility 🙂
Please feel free to to ride this magic carpet!, Asmita…ANYTIME!!!
Glaaaaad you enjoyed this read (and ride!) And thank you for your sweeet words…
Have a super Monday, girl!! (hugs)
sounds like a fun ride kav….taking any passengers???? 🙂
Sure, 700!!! Anytime you wish 🙂
Glad you enjoyed the read, and trust me, you will definitely the carpet ride too!!
Hope you are having a great Monday! (hugs)
Thanks for sharing your piece for the rally–it made me smile as soon as I started reading it.
Oh… I am so glad you enjoyed the read, Julie.. I hope you enjoyed the ride too! 🙂
Thank you for your sweet and kind words… many hugs to you !
Have a lovely week….
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thanks for highlighting it at the Rally, Jingle…
MWAH! 🙂 😀
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Your works are truly beyond words! fabulous poem and absolutely fantastic pic.
Wooohoooo!! THANK YOUUUUU Trisha!! Your praise for my work takes me on the 9th cloud!! I am very very very happy you enjoyed this ride 🙂 Thank again, my dear!! xoxoxoxoxo