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Companionship, Love, Lyrics, Magpie Tales, Melody, Music, Reflections, Sacred, Seeing love in music, Waiting
Image Credits: Tess Kincaid @ Magpie Tales
Every syllable
That escapes your lips
Is a note intangible
That rises and then dips
Making ripples in the air
In which it resounds
Gently ruffling my hair
And grazing fluid grounds
Before it ricochets
Off the highest wall
And staggers and sways
But prevents its fall
Only to find a place
In my heart’s realms nigh
Where it’s kept with grace
On a pedestal so high
…that of love…
And while you’re not here
Like a lilting tune
These notes, they still adhere
Spelling out a rune
That you will soon return
This vow they make to me
So I wait for you and yearn
As these floating chords I see
Urging me to dance
They hold my hands and smile
And slowly I advance
Into a musical mile
**Posted for Magpie Tales – Week 48… Please visit this site to read and enjoy the fantastic takes on the above visual prompt**
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
“And slowly I advance into a musical mile” I love that! Kavita, a well written piece.
Enjoyed it!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/01/13/pieces/
Thanks a bunch, Nicole.. how sweet of you to write such kind words for my work here.. it means a great deal to me, my friend!
So glad you enjoyed this piece..
The way you choose the words to talk about things is every time magical, I’m sure almost anything with your words would sound poetic!
As these floating chords I see
Urging me to dance
They hold my hands and smile
And slowly I advance
Into a musical mile … is my favorite here …
Gee… Blaga, you really made me blush with your comment.. love ya love ya love ya for saying such sweet things about me… hehehhe… thank youuuuuuu!!!
“These notes, they still adhere”
Lines such as the above are so gorgeous.
You are an engaging poet(ess)!
Suko, thanks a ton for the kind words… that’s quite a compliment indeed! I really appreciate it..
Best Regards..
Making ripples in the air
In which it resounds
That’s music, OK!
Aww.. thanks, Jinksy!! Very sweet of you to say that!
xoxo
This is really lovely.
Aww.. thanks a bunch, thingy… So glad you enjoyed this one..
Such an airy tone to the structure of the poem…adding well to its theme..very much enjoyed.
Gee.. thank you so much for your encouragement, Charles… you are most kind! I have to say I am getting more and more inspired by your poetry forms… you are remarkably goo, my friend!
What a selection of words! Euphonic, Rune, realm, Nigh. Rhymes too… Truly you are one of the most gifted poetess of our times. I am just tongue-tied and mesmerized.
Umm.. thank you, hubby… I really can indulge in flattery, you know (ofcourse you know that! :)) I absolutely crave for appreciation from you… thank youuu!!
😀 xxxxx
Urging me to dance
They hold my hands and smile
And slowly I advance
Into a musical mile
I wish i was the first one then this wouldn’t seem so cliche
but these last lines have really struck a chord!!
I love this piece
Whhheeeww… thanks for the compliment, Wanjikum… you are really too kind! And I so appreciate it..
Am SUPER excited that you liked this poem so much.. yaaaaaaaaaaayyy!!!
(much love to you..)
beauty at its musical best 🙂
Tra-la-la-la… 🙂
Thanks, girlie!!! xxxx
Nice flow to this piece. Really beautiful.
Aww…thank you so much, Tess!!
xoxo
I felt like I had just heard a mesmerizing tune. I wanted to dance. Great poetry!
Ooooohhhh…so sweet of you to say that, Myrna.. thank youuuu…
I love every line in this beautiful poem Kavz….
In my heart’s realms nigh
Where it’s kept with grace
On a pedestal so high
…that of love…
Magical words that touched my heart. Just BRILLIANT!!!
Talk soon as it’s almost time again 🙂 oxoxox
Lovieszzzzzzzz oxoxox
Aww…girl.. your sweet words warm my heart… I sooooo miss ya!! 😦
COME BACK SOON, will ya?!
beautiful kavi.. congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
Gee.. thanks a heap, Kris…. 😀
Musically and lyrically excellent girl! You should compose a song on this one, LOVE LOVE it! You never fail to surprise me with a brilliant piece of work! 😀
Weeeeeeeeeeeee… a song??? That’s THE best compliment I ever got on this poem, Sonam!! Thank youuuuu…
xoxoxoox
A lovely poem that relaxes me while having a break in studying for my exam next week… Very well appreciated and enjoyed…
xoxo
Happy Friday!
Aahh….glad this one made you feel at ease, sweetie… yaaaayyy…
Very nicely done. And it flowed in keeping with the words.
Aaahh.. thank you so much, Anthony…
And slowly I advance
Into a musical mile
This line, Kavita, gave me a spark.. hopefully it will turn in to a poem for Sunday OSI Prompt of Carnival… do lpeep in there..
I loved reading your poem..
And I wish to thank you for your visit and your comment and the honor you gave me.. I would cherish for a long time to come.. the poem that I wrote.. just flowed.. but I agree must have stemmed from subconscience mind.. somewhere something some craving could have got stuck like a dot which must have melted… God knows.. and well it’s alright for us the courageous ones who express..
You flatter me, Rameshji.. I am truly honored that you liked this piece so much.. thank youuuuu !!!
Yes, this is well constructed work.
Gee.. thanks a ton, Lucy… 🙂
Wow so musical.. Through a Child Eyes.
Happy Rally !
Someone is Special
Aww.. thanks, SiS… 🙂
Just beautiful, and that last line “slowly I advance into a musical mile,” it’s musical itself, gorgeous!
Whhheeeww!! THANK YOUUUUU, Heather dear!!! Let’s dance to piece of music then.. what say!? 🙂
eeeeeeee….kaavviiiii 😀 😀
thats a beautiful musical rendition therre 😀
i hope you danced well 😉
hehehhe…. thanks, Meghu…. I sure danced alright! Me luuuurrrrvvvvzzz to dance! 😀
I know I said it once before but Kavita this IS your best yet..for me..I loved every word of this one..xoxo
hehehe… really, Budhaaah… I am honored… thank youuu!!!
I love this. You inspire me.
Awww…. thanks, Alice…
This was just beautiful.
Surely one of the best lines which I would safely call poetry.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Oh maaaaannn… that’s quite a compliment!! Thanks a ton, Anshul… it sure means a lot to me!
I think this is my favorite I’ve read by you so far! Such an amazingly beautiful and musical image is created with those words. 🙂
Gee.. thank you soooo much, Rachel… (blushing) 😀
The energy flowing from your poem is palpable! Lovely.
Awwww…. thank you so much, Helen dear… you are too sweet!
Love the movement, the building crescendo…. Nicely done.
Oh.. thank you so much, Petrina.. very kind of you to say that..
This was wonderful! It read so fluidly…quite enchanting 🙂
Ooohhh…glad you liked this poem so much, Nunee.. thank youuu
This is perfect writing…
your words are elegant.
Glad to see you showcase well fine tuned poetry..keep shining..
you rock!
xoxox
Gee… thank you for the encouraging words, Jingle…
I love the musical mile too…lovely with a beautiful ending…bkm
la la la la la… thank you, Barbara,… la la la… 🙂
What a wonderful Magpie. It is indeed musical and also rather magical. Thanks! Enjoyed much.
Thank you, J…. the moment I saw this Magpie prompt,the words just flowed into my mind, and onto the notepad… I loved the way it turned out.. and I am sooo happy that you did too!! I really appreciate your kind words here, my dear friend.. your constant encouragement has been a source of inspiration for me!! Thanks a ton for that, my sweet friend..