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All in minutes!, Cruel, Ever after..., Fiction, Flash Fiction 55, Friday Flash 55, Killing, Married and un-, Ruthless, The "happy" couple, When love kills love
Love they felt
Hearts did melt
Passions were spelt
How romantic!
Vows were read
They stood wed
Their wishes fed
Glowing faces…
Toasts were sung
Cheers were flung
Together they clung
Party time!!
Plop! He fell
What the hell!
“Ring that bell!”
He’s gone…
She slowly smiled
A temptress wild
Her avarice piled
Rich widow!!
**Posted for Friday Flash 55, hosted by G-Man… Please do check out the other creative writings as well… :)**
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
Kavita….?
Someone you know?
Whimsical yet Dark.
I Loved this!
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
My dear G… this was pure fiction…only for you 😉
Glad you ENJOYED it!!! Yaaayyy! Thankoooo.. you made me GRIN real wide! Like so 😀
Now I’ll definitely have a kick ass weekend…
You have fun too!!! 🙂 (hugs and love)
Ah ha….Whopeee…i’m the first one here for a change….
Kavita….good gosh girl…amazing poetry…i cud see the wicked smile o the face…curving slowly with that glint in her eye….amazing poem…hats off to u..
hehehhe … H, you are tooo much!!! 🙂
For a change, I wanted to write something like a story, but in poetic form… and Flash Friday 55 seemed like the perfect challenge to execute this… thanks to G-Man 🙂
Wasn’t she cruel??? Phheeww.. Killing her new hubby for his wealth!! He should never have signed that pre-nup…foolish man! 🙂
Glad you liked it girl… yaaayyyy… Thankooz for the sweet words for me.. I am GLOATING… 😀
A very Happy Weekend to you sweetie.. mwwwaaahhh !!
Love it!
However, the last is… quite sad though u said “Rich widow”!
Hmm… You liked the story?? Phhewww… I am glad!!!
Yea, I had to make her a wicked one… the poor man had to die for my story to live.. (sigh)
Thank you so much for your visits and encouragement.. I really appreciate it!
Have a great weekend, my friend… 🙂
Kavita, you are awesomely wicked! 😉
Great 55!
Aaawww…now now… the character is wicked… I am just a sweet innocent gal (blinking and batting her eyelashes)..heheh
Glad you enjoyed this piece, G… thankoooz..
Now, have a fabulous weekend, my friend.. (mannnnny hugs!!) 🙂
very stunning rhymes and rhythms…
love your 55.
Cheers!
Yaaahhoooo… thanks, Jingle..
I am very glad you enjoyed the read… a dark 55 for a change.. heheh
You have a fun weekend, lady.. mwahhh 🙂
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/08/55-she-isnt-butterfly.html
here is my 55.
have fun reading it…
😉
I read your 55…IT ROCKED!!! Amenfly… tooo cute and witty!!! Whooa!
You smart girl, have a super weekend!! 🙂
Many hugs and kisses to you..
thanks for voting,
Happy Sunday!
😉
anytime, Ji…
I had a great Sunday..thankoo
A happy new week to you! 🙂
Oh, I like it. to paraphrase what Galen said, dark and yet whimsical. And a bit quirky, too.
Aww..thanks a bunch, Patti!! I desperately wanted to write a story.. and this one was a result of my penchant for poetry… heheh
I am very happy to know that you enjoyed reading this one…
Besides, what’s a story if it ain’t a little quirky, eh?! 😉
Take care, my friend.. have a lovely weekend! (lots of love)
HAH, so clever XD
LOL…thanks Gally… Glad you enjoyed it 😉
Enjoy a fabulous weekend, love.. 🙂
Wicked ;p
heheheh… had to make the story (and her) a bit wicked.. else the story would be too bland 😉
Glad you liked it, Cindy..
HAPPY WEEKEND!!! 🙂
Wow, did she plan that? Very wonderful 55! You are so good , Kavita! Happy Weekend! heartspell
Oh yes, Heartspell.. she was a smart (and wicked) one.. she had it all sorted out in her head… 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this story, H…mwaahh.. thank you so much for your kind words.. you always have the best words for me.. and my weekends start so well with your words… yaaayyyy
A very very happy weekend to you too, my dear dear HeartSpell!!!
(lots of love and hugs)
I loved this one – especially the last line – “rich widow”! Too cute 🙂
heheheh… I must say, Janna.. I think, in some odd way, I was inspired by your AWESOME writing… I really felt like versing out a story for this Flash 55… so, there! 🙂
So.. thank you for inspiring me (it’s Saturday, and I am off to read your Kharma – part 4).. and I’m very happy you enjoyed the read…
Have a fantabulous weekend, my friend.. (lots of love to you :))
I’m surprised at your revelation…I don’t think inspiration usually happens with my writing 🙂 At any rate, thanks so much for the credit, although, I think the credit should go to your brilliant imagination!
Oh yesss… your story was my muse (although my poem was totally not on the same lines :))…
So.. KUDOS to us both!!! hehehe
Girlfriend!!! You have a way to teach me English (not being my first language!!) I had to go and look what avarice means (hiding my head)!!!!!!!! Awesomeness all the way..this is a killer…you are getting better by the day and YES, I want you to go and have that Kick Ass weekend as well!!!!!!!!!!!! like I will!!!! What the Hell?????????? I lovies you gorgeous girl….this one will fly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mwahzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz xxxxx
heheheh… come on now!!! Oh.. and you know, I have WordWeb (a dictionary) installed on my iPhone .. just in case I need words for rhyme etc. 😉 It comes in real handy, I must say! I mean… now who knows every word in the dictionary eh?!?!?! I am no vocab queen either… heheh… But, I just absolute LOVE English!!! And I am always trying to learn.. phhhewww
I really felt like writing a story for G-Man’s Flash 55… and then this one just made it’s way (wickedly) into my head 😉 So, I am veeeeeeeeeerrryyy happy you liked this one, Amanda.. thankuuuuuu for all your good wishes… yaaayyy
And yea baby.. You have a super duper kick ass weekend… I too will!!! Yipppeeezzz
What plans btw, for the weekend? I have friends coming over… so, FUN!!!!! 😀
Loviez and huggiez to ya!!!
Interesting poem. I quiet liked it, kinda dark, kinda interesting ending. I wrote a similar poem about weddings, maybe I will post it soon. (I am sorry if this comment is bad, had a fair few drinks with one of my oldest friends tonight. I will find thisn in the emorning and regret it haha, have a wonderful weekend my friend :))
hehehehe… this comment is NOT AT ALL bad, my dear Mark 🙂
Drinks or not, you wrote something that I definitely didn’t regret reading… 😉 and nor will you (tomorrow morning)
Glad you enjoyed this dark one, M… And thanks for visiting my blog even in the *happy* state that you are in, and for your sweet comments… They say, a man never lies when he is drunk. So I am ESPECIALLY HAPPY on reading your comments today.. hehe … mwaahhh
Take care, my friend… and have an AWESOME weekend (like you already are!) 🙂
Much love to you…
P.S: I am eagerly looking forward to reading your poem on weddings..
very well crafted!
was fun in a morbid sort of way 😉
hehehe…thanks MagicEye… and sorry about the delayed reply (thanks or no thanks to a typical weekend :))
“Morbid” – I was WAITING for someone to use that words.. so yaaaayyyyy…THANK YOU so much! Glad you enjoyed the read…
Ha! Wicked fun! 🙂
Great 55!
-C
LOL.. thank you so much!!! Very glad you enjoyed this “evil” one… hehe
Have a rocking week ahead! 🙂
LOL You think mine is clever…this is excellent my friend. Awesome job 🙂 Have a great weekend 🙂
hehehe…thanks a ton, Thom.. coming from you, this feels great!!!
Very glad you enjoyed it…
And i STILL maintain that yous was WOW!!! 😀
Have a fabulous week ahead, my friend..
My kinda woman. NOT! 😛
I’d have the last laugh if I were the hubby in this scenario. You see, I’m penniless, so it would be all for naught! Heh heh. I’m so evil…
If you were a pauper, then she wouldn’t have married you in the first place, Tony… 🙂
You are so funny.. heheh 🙂
Have an awesome week, my friend..
Much love..
Oh yeah. Didn’t think of that… 😦
ohhh… how could you not have, Tony?!?!?!?! Hmm… tsk tsk tsk 😉
Worry not… and gloat over the fact that you are married to the lovely lovely Cass! 🙂
simply brilliant! fantastic.
yaaayyy.. thanks, Trisha!! 😀
Very glad you enjoyed the read…
Enjoy a great week ahead…(hugs)
Naughty girl. Love it. Nice, whimsical feel to it, and the ending’s a twist, but fun. Light-hearted darkness.
heheheh… Chris, your comment (the first two words itself) brought a HUGE grin on my face 😀 – like so! And I loved you described this poem – light hearted darkness!! yaaayy
Thank you so much… I am thrilled you enjoyed the read! 🙂
Hope you have a fun week ahead!!
oh my…quite the dark lady there…smiles. nicely played kavita…love the structure of this one!
Gee.. thanks, Brian!!! An evil indeed! 😉 Glad you enjoyed it.. heheh.. it was kinda fun writing this one… maybe a tad dramatic, but who doesn’t like some drama once in a while…right ??
Thanks for the sweet words, B…
Have a lovely BIRTHDAY WISHES filled week ahead! 😀
(much love to you..)
Plop Plop Fizz Fizz, oh what a relief it is! Dark but enlightened.
🙂 Glad you liked it..thanks a ton!!!
A relief indeed 😉
Have a fantastic week ahead, my friend…
Ah, well done, dear. Remember that men are like potato chips…they’ll always make more, and one can’t always find them old, wealthy and in steep decline. That’s when nature needs a little nudge, and when done right, there should be no tiresome troubles with the authorities or with probate. Do you know, that when he went down, he reminded me quite a lot of my sainted late husband on the day of his unfortunate mishap. Sniff…oh, give me a minute….*titter*
uhhh… now that sounded way sadder than my story here..
May your “late hubby” rest in peace…
Hope you *enjoyed* the read here…
Have a lovely week ahead, my friend 🙂
Hysterical!
Laugh on.. laugh on… 😀 That was the idea…
Glad you enjoyed the read…
Have a fun week ahead!! (hugs)
Ah, Kavita – you’ve put a smile on my face again! I love this – especially your skill at telling a whole story in such a few words!! Wow – how do you do that???
Have an amazingly wonderful weekend my friend. Be good, and if you can’t be good – be careful! Lol xx
Chloe 😀 😀
hahahah… thanks, Chloe!! your praises and comments make me GRIN!!! Love ’em, and love you!!! Am so happy you enjoyed the read…
Hmm.. how do I do it eh?? No idea, my dear,,… i really REALLY felt a writing a story this time, and this one seemed to turn out okay… so me is happy! 🙂
And yes, I was careful over the weekend 😉 Hope you had a fun one yourself!!
Have a superb week!!! (hugs)
Hey girl!!! I always love reading your work! You inspire me SOOOooooo much!!!! So glad to hear you was careful over the weekend – I bet you were cooking up some more crazy – and amazing – ideas!! 😀 😀 haha – hope you had fun with your friends.
I no longer NEED a social life…as I have the mice indoors to keep me company! The pesky pest control man said to only phone him back in two weeks “to assess the situation” – great! 😀
Have a lovely week my friend xx
Oh boy!!! I ? Inspire you?! Whoooaaa!!! That’s SOMETHING!!! Thankoooooz… And trust me, it goes the other way around too…
As for the weekend, it was crazy!! Fun crazy! 🙂 Had no time to *think up* anything… In fact, I had no time to think! Which is why I am sitting up late now, trying to catch up on the thinking 🙂
WHAT!??!?! The mice are back, you say?? Or they had never left you eh?? Someone’s in loooove with you, girl 😉 And why does the pest control guy need 2 DAMN WEEKS to assess the situation? And what if the situation is beyond control at the end of those 2 weeks?! What a stupid thing to say/do! TWO WEEKS!! Phheeww..
Stay safe, sweets.. and have fun with Mickey and/or Minnie.. My hi to him/her/them … I mean, after all, if they are your friends, they are my friends too…right?! Long distance ofcourse (them for sure!) 🙂
Take care… and have a careful and splendid week! No cheese lying around (unless it is for a trap!) please… 🙂
Loviez!!
Excellent, excellent twist!
For you … http://randomthoughtsandmusings.wordpress.com/2010/08/21/thank-you-but-i-have-nothing-to-say/
Oh my my my !!! Thanks J… glad you enjoyed it .. 🙂
Oooohhh.. and thank you so much for thinking of me for the lovely awards… gee… awesome!!!
Have a great week ahead!
you’ve done it again. lol
Win win win
yaaaaahhooo!!! Thanks a ton, Richard!! Soooo glad you enjoyed the read… heheheh
Have a fantastic week, my friend (many hugs to you..)
A wicked bride me thinks.
Mine’s here.
Totally wicked, KB.. 😉
Hope you enjoyed the read… poor groom though..
Have a lovely week!! 🙂
I was going “aww” and then comes the last verse. Very wicked indeed!!!! But it was fun haha….
very very clever!!! Have a super Sunday!!! 🙂
hehehe… twist twist twist!! I hope I am not becoming predictable now 😉
Glad you enjoyed this *evil* one, Asmi.. Thank you so much for your lovely comments..
Have a beautiful week!! 😀 (hugs)
Black widow. She couldn’t even wait until the honeymoon? Shesh!
You bet!! Greedy and impatient lady!!! 🙂
Money… (reminded me of Pink Floyd :))
BTW, great wording.
heheh.. thanks a ton, Alice..
Have a fantastic week !!! 😀
The melody, the words, the mood… it was all wonderful but what I loved most about this poem was the story! You, my friend, are a poet but also a magnificent story teller 🙂
Hurraaaaaayyyyy!!! This coming from a writer I so admire for her WOW stories, feels really GRRREATTT!!! Thank you so so soooo much, Lua!!! I am grinning WIIIIDE! 😀
And am very glad you enjoyed the read… yaaayyy.. thanks again, sweetheart..
Have a super fabulous week!! 😀 (hugs and love)
Very funny Black Widow story. And I love the form.
heheh…thanks Nessa!! The form was kinda a result of the 55 word thingie and my love for verses and rhymes 🙂 Am very pleased to see you enjoyed it..
Have a wonderful week ahead, my friend.. (much love..)
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Cheers!
oh yes, Ji… done and wished!! Thank you for reminding.. we need to “demand” birthday parties from our friends now! 🙂
I checked your 160…. fresh and lovely!!!! Just like you…
Have a beautiful week, my friend (many hugs and tons of love!) 😀
absolute blend of light with the dark….
beauty with sadness…
poor guy…
love the piece…
lovely fiction…
viva la vida 🙂
that was one poor guy alright (figuratively ofcourse)!! All his wealth now passed to her, the evil one.. teeheehee
Glad you liked it Anky, thankoozz!! 😀
Have a fantastic week ahead, girl… 🙂 (love and hugs)
Ah such an interesting tale you’ve told. Somehow this may sound mean, but I found it kind of funny, the “Rich widow!” part especially.
Another cleverly written piece here girl! I really liked it, never expected the end. Great poem!
oh yes, DP.. this was meant to be half funny – half dark 🙂 So your comment’s like music to my *eyes* 🙂
Glad you liked the read, girl… it was totally meant to be enjoyed.. heheh… Thank you!!!!
Have a splendid week ahead!!! (many hugs)
Very neat. I like the flow of this.
Yaayyy.. Thanks a ton, Anton… Glad you enjoyed the read… Your visit and comments are most appreciated!
Have a great week!!! 🙂
“Rich widow” That last line is both a punch-line and a warning.
Ahaaa… glad you saw it that way, Eric 😉 Thanks for the nice comment… Glad you enjoyed the read..
Have a great week!!
in simple words
I m loving ittttttttttt
hugs to u 🙂
Hurrraaaayyy… thankoo Rida!!! Glaaaaaaaaad you liked it!!!
Have a fantastic week ahead, dearie.. (mannny hugs and kisses to you..) 🙂
Wonderful, as usual of course and different.Almost as if I’m seeing it in front of my eyes…
😉
Oh my! You saw it in front of your eyes? That ain’t a very sweet picture (the last part)! 😉
Glad you enjoyed the read, D… Thanks for the encouragement.. hehe
Have a happy week ahead, my friend 🙂
WOW! Loved this and so glad I came back around to see what I’d missed since Friday!
heheheh.. first of all, thank you so much coming back to check my blog, Cheryl… it’s very kind of you…
And I am very glad you enjoyed this read… 🙂
Hope you are having a fabulous week!!! (love and hugs)
Well, sucks for ol’ boy. A fairytale gone sour. Nice work!
Sour indeed! But definitely not for her… hmm…
Glad you enjoyed the read… thanks for the kind comment, Tekia…
Have a great and fun week ahead, girl. 🙂
You are the queen of rhyme!
Fiendishly clever piece, Kavita. Yours are always full of surprises. Good stuff!e
hahahahah… THANK YOU SO MUCH, Jamie… that was the loveliest comment ever!!! Yaaaayyyy… MWAH!!! I am soooo gloating over your words… 😀
I am very glad you liked and enjoyed this piece, J… it was fiendish indeed (evil grin) 😉
Have a fantabulous week ahead, my dear friend.. (many hugs to you)
enjoyed fantabulously.. 🙂 OMG what a wahat a poem.. rolling in to laughter OOps!!
heheheh… laugh on, Su!! That was the intention … poor groom though 😉
Glad you had fun reading this one… thankoooo!!!
Having coffee and kavita this a.m. … and enjoyed this wicked bit of whimsy very much … tickled.
Such a delight …
Hugs! 🙂
hehhehhe…sounded nice and cool (umm…warm :)).. coffee and kavita.. In India, there is the TV show called Coffee with Karan (karan being the name of the host/interviewer)..
Wicked it was, this one!! 😉 Poor guy though… we all had a nice evil laugh at his expense 🙂
Glad you enjoyed it, sweetie… hehehe
many hugs to you too!!!
This is one of your best! Wicked, funny, and soooo daring! Amy
hahahahah… I KNEW you would like it… and your poem totally made me want you to see it!! heheheh (wicked li’l me) 😉