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A poem a day, April, blood, cliche, Flowing, heart matters, Memories, months of poems, NaPoWriMo
Still flowing
in my serum
are your minty memories
Invigorating
Intoxicating
I leave them there
Intact
Undisturbed
Lest they transmute
into deliberate clots
Unyielding
Unforgiving
Riddling the veins
leading to my weakened heart
Β – making –
– it –
– stop –
** Written (with great effort) towards NaPoWriMo… Only 29 more days to go π **
You always give such a unique spin to you poetry…really do enjoy reading it.
π Thanks, Charles! I think it’s the newfound interest for growing herbs and the bottle of Budweiser talking
And yes, the ever present exhilaration at reading your comment on ANY of my posts!!
Ohh I loved the ending … the way you have written it… adds the required pause and effect π
Aww… Thanks, sweetie.. Muah! *heart beating 3 times faster* π
I enjoyed it greatly! I really like the way you structure the poem!
Gee..thanks a ton, Manisha.. Very kind of you..