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Awaiting a lover's return, D'VersePoets Pub, Forgotten, Glint in the eye, Helpless, Hopeful, Hopeful eyes, In search of, Jilted, Lover, Magpie Tales, Open Link Night, Restless, Return, Waiting
Image credits: Tess Kincaid@Magpie Tales
She lay on the bed
Her arms extended
ever so listlessly
Her lips quivering
with a waxed passion
Her tresses arranged
in careless swirls…
Her skin radiating
a lingering warmth
of some passing summer
Her singular tear
with the ripping force
of a bursting volcano…
Her eyes searching
through the myriad pores
on the plastered ceiling
For one glimpse of return…
For one moment of benign sparkle…
For just one sign
Of he who had kept
– Of he who had left –
her lying on the bed
with her arms extended
ever so listlessly…
**Posted for Week 104 of Magpie Tales and for Week 31 of Open Link Night @ d’versepoets – the two poetic haunts you will never get tired of! **
*** Oh, and by the way, HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY!!!! 🙂 ❤ ❤ ***
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the whole poem is a bursting volcano 🙂
v nice
Whoa!!! I hope the lava didn’t burn you, Amira! 🙂
Glad you liked the poem! Thanks for the kind words, friend..
Gives ANOTHER meaning to “Caregiver”…Beautiful!
And the poem:
“Of he who had kept
– Of he who had left –
her lying on the bed…
well, of course, I remembered THAT line…I have NEVER “left’ he on the bed”
(Can’t stand a woman crying because of me
or LAUGHING AT me!–grin!)
KAVITA….you are one-of-a-kind!
Hmmm… one of a kind, eh? I wonder how to take that.. 😉 Alright, I’ll take it as a compliment now, Steve 🙂
It’s a good thing you don’t leave her there to cry/laugh at you.. you don’t leave her there.. Period! That’s a relief…
Glad you liked this poem, my friend.. and thank you ever so much for your words of appreciation… means a lot to me!!
imagine her seeing all this in a ceiling mirror
haunting suppleness
I knooowwww… what a lonely sight, no?
oh love it kavita…i feel her yearning…and from that pic it is hard to get to that feeling but you took us there….very well penned my friend….
This is such a haunting piece–beautiful!
i loved this piece – enjoyed the intense heat from it….!
Another grand verse and yeah I never leave her there. Those mirrors could be scary too, if that came into view..haha
That’s quite the image, and your words have played it wonderfully! Fantastic writing!
Now THAT’s a Valentine’s poem!
Well done!
Sizzle! нαρρу ναℓєηтιηє’ѕ ∂αу ♥ нєℓєηα
Happy Valentine’s Day….
authentic poetry.
This is beautiful and sad Kavitha.
Glad you liked the poem, Janaki… thanks for your kind words of appreciation here…
Amazing pic, and an errily apt poem!
Oooohhh..glad you liked the combo, Neha.. Thankoooooozzz!
For just one sign
Of he who had kept
– Of he who had left –
her lying on the bed
I just realized I haven’t been here for a while. As usual Kavita, great interpretation of the image. Sad poems are always the best!
heheheh… i know!! It’s really sad (or even funny maybe?) that sad poems generate maximum appreciation…
Well, I’m just GLAAAAD you liked it though!! Thanks a heap, N..
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Yaaayyyyy…thanks a heap, mindblur… .
Powerful and good !
Thankooo, Ayala dearie!! ❤
Lovely angst…
Aahhh .. glad you liked, Tess dear!
how long will she lie..
with her arms extended
ever so listlessly… ~
so softly put ~
🙂 Thanks for the empathy with this girl, Sarath… glad you liked the poem..
Haunting; nicely written!
Thank you sooo much, Mrs. Heath.. ❤
Excellent use of the prompt image!
Glad you liked it, Susan…. thank youuu! ❤
That image is amazing and your words… oh, your words… they tickle my senses. 🙂
Ahem… do they now?! :)) Thanks for saying that, Rache… you’re a doll!
Hi Kavitha, so beautifully sketched the loneliness of the girl… and the silverlines of hope in her thoughts are so full of life… loved this:)
Thank you sooooo much, Anjana.. I’m very glad you liked this poem..
Long live hope, eh? 🙂
hey you…been a few weeks and thought i would jump in and say hi…hope you are well…
So sweet of you to stop by, Mr.B… I am perfectly well, thank you 🙂 .. Was just a lil busy building our website with hubby…will be back to versing soon enough (hopefully by next Tuesday, in time for OLL)
How have you been?!
Yes. I do.
I was bored and wanted to read good poems. So, I dropped by. 😀
Aww.. so sweet of you, Mihir… Thankoooo!
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Aaahhh.. thanks, Vishal!! This is a real surprise, coming from you!! Now it’s time I pass it on, eh… =)
good one!!! hv a g8 blog, keep blogging!!!!
Thank you, Abhishek.. very kind of you to say that..
you capture the atmosphere of the pic well kavita…just read you may be back for openlinknight..? would be great!!
Thank you so much for the kind words, Claudia! I really appreciate it..
And yeesss…. this week, I am VERY MUCH at OpenLinkNight… yaaayy!
Sigh! I actually did sigh after this it. So many shades! Very aptly imaged (what’s happening to my English… oh it’s getting creative- nevermind) Website, eh?? All done now?
Warm Hugs xoxo