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Addiction, Analogy, Attracted to, Bordering on mush, Crazy, Drawn, Drunken in love, Enamored, Friday Flash 55, Heart and Soul, In love, Intoxicated, Love, Madly in love, Metaphor
Goblet@Google Images; Heart by Zueuk@DeviantArt; Superimposition done by me
Seep into my skin
Feel your presence
thrive
in every pore of me
Flow alongside my blood
Sense it in my veins
gush
with every glance at you
Plunge into my heart
Hear it wildly
thump
with your name splashed across
Gnaw at my soul
Read deliberately
while the indelible ink
reveals nothing
– but you –
**Thanks to the immensely dark poems I have been writing of late, I felt the NEED to write something a little tangential to “dark”.. and this is what I came up with, in just about 5.5 minutes.. 🙂 … I dedicate it to my awesome husband, and am posting it for G-Man’s Super Fun Friday Flash 55… For stories/poems/all other stuff in EXACTLY 55 words, this is THE place to be, folks! 🙂 **
eeerie,,,
i could feel the words hit me like needles…
girl girl girl…… and this was one of my romantic ones… 😉
Intensity … I can feel your words deep into my bones … Masterful Kavita!
Ooohh…thanks, Summer gally… you just made my weekend start with a bang!!! mwahz!!!
So glad you said it was romantic….because that’s what I was thinking rather than eeerie…love can be so intoxicating or toxic depending on who you’re in love with. 🙂
hehhehe… (blushing).. YOU SAID IT, CHARLES!!!! 🙂 Thanks for agreeing with me here…
(hugs)
Oh, my. There is something intoxicating and dizzying about being in love. A passionate 55!
You can say that again, Belinda (about love, I mean :))… thanks a bunch for your kind words here..
xoxo
So passionate, Kavita. Well done.
Gee..thanks, Alice… very kind of you to say that..
gnaw at my soul…now that is some serious loving…smiles. very nice heat to this kavita…
and yes i went to see U2 in baltimore….was amazing!
Wowiez!! I simply LOVE them myself, Brian!! And right now, I can almost hear them play ‘But I still havent found what I’m looking for’ 🙂 Well, that’s my fav. by them anyway…
Oh, and for the smiles and wonderful comments on this poem, thankoooo, my friend! You are such a encouraging soul…
Oooo, I love it! love the sensuality and intimacy of this piece. love the flow as well, great flow Kavita.
yaaaayyy.. thank you so much, Tekia dear… you are very kind…
Lotsa hugs coming your way..
Eerily romantic. If there is such a thing.
hahahahha… LOVED this comment, Monkey Man!!! I think it’s PERFECT!!! 🙂 Thankoooooo
good to read a hard hitting love poem!
gee.. thanks, my friend.. love is quite a hard hitter anyway.. 🙂
I can see the Romance…
In a very Darkish way.
Kavita…You are indescribable.
Fantastic 55 My Friend
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Aww.. G-Man, you are very generous with your words for me, my good friend… Thank youuuu!!!!
Hugs.. and more hugs flying your way!! 😀
Ssssssssmokin’ 😀 Well, the dedication to your husband itself made it romantic, than eerie. Nice pace and intensity to this, Kavita..
hehehe.. thanks, Leo!! 🙂 Very sweet of you to say that…
And just for the records, even after reading so many dedicated to him, hubby was surprised to see this! whewww
Very impressive views of skin, blood, heart, and soul. PERFECT!
Gee.. thanks a ton, my friend..
Never did needles, but I can imagine this is how it would play out. Also, there’s a dark romance at play here, the invasion of the drug into her system. Compelling, Kavita. Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/06/25/welcome-and-witch-abc/
Needles – me neither, Amy! 😉
But love and romance – all the time!! hehehe … and with this, one never really needs needles anyway.. what say? 😉
Glad you liked this one, my friend..
Intense, provocative and steamy — your poetry goes deep into the depths of passion.
Very nice,,love it
joanny
I take it all as a HUGE compliment, Joanny!! Thank you ever so much, my dear..
Vivid imagery and heartfelt words ….Lovely post ~
Coming form you, it means a great deal to me, my friend.. esp. on this post!! Thankooooooooooooo!!
when I read the title, I was like what?
because I had just earlier jotted down the same title onto notepad to later make a post on, but when I read your romantics, I realized it is different, mine is social.
Great write, you got it all in your restrictive 55 words!
Gee.. thanks, Harish..
And when minds think alike, it feels great! 🙂 So what if mine was romantic, and yours, social… the interpretation could have been just about anything.. I guess that’s the beauty of poetry (well, art in general).. what say?
I say “Thumbs UP to poetry”.
Aww… thanks, Harish… you are very kind..
But yes, thumbs up to poetry indeed! 🙂
wow that’s very intense 😀
awesome write 😀
thankoo so much, dearie… 😀
xoxoxoox
wonderful piece, I LOVE the ones that just flow out onto paper and come alive… This is certainly an intense experience you’ve shared with us!
Aww.. thanks so much, Scott… very sweet of you to say that.. and sharing my experience here just felt AWESOME!
Oooh…I like this. I’ve felt this. Great 55!
Geee… that’s awesome, Corrie (if it’s romance, I mean :))
And thanks a ton for your kind words….
xoxox
You said that’s romantic? To me, its more like one is anticipating poison to drift towards the heart, remains stagnant for a while and thence seep into the tissues. I don’t know what exactly that signifies but its definitely beautiful (:
hahahah.. that’s EXACTLY how I had intended this poem to be interpreted, Xehra…
And love, imho, is as addictive an intoxicant as any other 😉
Thanks for your appreciative words here, my friend… it means a great deal to me!
That was really intense. Nice job.
thank you so much, Madeleine!!
Beautiful words Kavita – how romantic that your husband’s name is written across your heart. SOoooo lovely xx
(blushing).. thanks, Chloe.. and yes, I really meant/mean it all.. 🙂
Drunk with love, such a great statement.
Enjoyed reading this Kavita
Weeeee….. thanks, Richard!! Stay drunk, my friend! 😉
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Wonderful!
Here are mine:
http://jaanpehchaan.wordpress.com/2011/06/07/battle-of-pens/
http://jaanpehchaan.wordpress.com/2011/05/14/under-the-influence/
such a sensual poem here kavita. i love this bit-
“Seep into my skin,
Feel your presence
thrive
in every pore of me”
wow, very powerful imagery, i imagine if attraction could be anything better than this?
Woohooo!! Love is indeed quite a drug.. no? 🙂
I am very happy you liked this poem so much, my friend… thank you..