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For aeons I’ve waited
Only for you
My feelings unabated
In this inky blue
I’ve seen your eyes
Look towards me
Scouring night skies
Amid a starry sea
Your earthy tether
I accept with grace
So we’re together
On spatial face
Finally here you are
On wings of hope
Unseeing my scar
Embracing my scope
**This is my version of what our lovely Luna might have told Neil Armstrong when he first touched her :)**
***Posted for Theme Thursday and G-Man’s ULTIMATE Friday Flash 55!!! Check ’em out, perhaps even link in a poem or two… AND ENJOY!!! ***
I feel small now…I felt like you should go on with this piece
Awww… now now, hp… brace yourself! 🙂 Look at her, and you’ll never feel small..
I am guessing you liked this one… thanks, my friend…
yes I did 🙂
teeheehee..thanks!!! And trust me, it’s one helluva challenge trying to talk about love in 55 words… hahaha
Realized that today, while writing this one!! 😀
Rhyme Me a Smile said:
Awesome piece! I agree with hpicasso that this piece could go on. Yet, it is so beautiful as is! 🙂 So lovely to think she can see us…
Awww… thanks, Rache sweetie.. trust me, I would have LOVED to go on an on with this (I think I’m a sucker for romantic poetry).. but I had to stay happy with 55 words for now 😀
And yes… it’s so AMAZING to know that we too are loved just the way we adore her… a warm feeling indeed…
One does have that feeling you get on a winter’s night when all the star surround you…and you feel moroe than small…more like insignificant….as you read this poem….but I do like this poem.
(sigh)…that’s so true, Charles.. looking up and seeing the magnificence of the universe, it’s easy to feel insignificant… thank God those orbs appear tiny from down here… (wwhhheeww!) 😀 Else we would’ve felt intimidated (if not already :))
Glad you liked this poem, C… thank you ever so much!!!
Paulo Guimaraes said:
It is so cool looking up and seeeing this giant sphere staring back at us, connnected by celestial forces, our great Uncle in the sky! Awesome write!
You bet, Paulo… the sky (and beyond) holds so much awe and mystery… sometimes, it’s not too difficult to feel that connection..
Glad you liked this spatial one, my friend.. thanks ever so much for your kind and thoughtful words…
Loving it – and you know my love for the moon
it had that inner searching feel as well as hopeful romance
you know I always love your words dear Kavita
Yaaaaaaaayyyy… I am sooo glad you liked this Moonie poem, my dearest Moon!! I know how much love our amazing Luna… and how much you feel that connection with her…
So your liking this poem really means a great deal to me, sweetie…
Thank you so much for your kind words… (forever treasured here)..
Thats one small post for G-Man
One Gigantic Blog for mankind!!
Kavita…You Rock The Galaxy Baby
Loved your 55.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
hahahah…you said, my AWESOME Mr. G!!! This post is indeed a tad too small for you… (hugs to my, my friend)
You are such a ROCKING personality!! Love yaa!!!!
Thanks for your super-appreciative comments here, G…
I love your stuff and I have nominated you for the versitile blogger award. Youhttp://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/2011/03/11/the-versitile-blogger-award/
I hope you accept!
Aww…. THANK YOU so much, Luna!! Love it!!!!! How sweet of you, my friend!!! And yes, I do accept.. 😀
oh but you conjured the amorous muse nicely kavita….smiles. beautiful 55.
Awww…thank you, Brian… That lovely moon up there totally inspires me…
Glad you liked this one so much, dear friend…
Mama Zen said:
This is such a creative perspective! Really neat!
Awww.. thanks a ton for your kind words, Mama Z… am thrilled you liked it!!
Steve Isaak said:
Love this – everything clicks, great line breaks/flow/words.
Gee.. thanks a ton, Steve… I’m glad you liked this so much… I really appreciate your words here, my friend..
“Your earthy tether
I accept with grace
So we’re together
On spatial face”
Love it! That’s so smooth. Well done 55, Kavita!
Aww… appreciation from you is invaluable to me, Adam.. thank you soo much, my friend! I’m truly glad you liked this poem so much…
Words Asunder said:
Sometimes, when I venture out under a perfect starry night, I go prepared with useful things, just in case. I hope you’re prepared too…you have spotted them after all.. 🙂
Nice write though.. puts into words my exact feelings on the matter 🙂
hahaha.. I am more than prepared when I venture out in anticipation of a PERFECT starry night, Andy… 😉
Glad you enjoyed this poem, my friend… and thanks a BUNCH for your sweet words here… your words are just as inspiring those starry evenings.. 🙂
Finally here you are
On wings of hope
Unseeing my scar
Embracing my scope..
magical connection, it takes care or thoughtfulness to feel the emotion of the universe, you did perfect job spacing and connecting..
Aww.. thanks, Jingle.. very kind and thoughtful of you to say that… glad you enjoyed this poem…
have a lovely weekend!!
Finally, the beloved arrives bringing unconditional love. Sigh. That is so romantic, my friend.
aaahh.. when love finds love..isn’t that just THE magical moment… no, Patti?! My guess is that’s how Luna felt when she saw Neil Armstrong 🙂
I’m so happy you liked this love poem, my dear… thank you ever so much for your kind and sweet words… it’s absolutely invaluable to me!!
Geee.. thank you so much, my sweet L… it’s very kind of you to say that…
avoid the clap said:
For a moment after reading this, I was jealous of you. It takes a lot of talent to write something like this.
avoid the clap said:
You inspired me to dig around for a poem I wrote 7 or 8 years ago that fit the “space” theme. I posted it here: http://avoidtheclap.wordpress.com/2011/03/12/heaven-was-full/
Oh my my !!! I am blushing now…
An running off to read your poem!! Thank you so much for putting up this poem, my friend… YOU ROCK!!!
C ya at your blog in a bit 😀
hahahhaa… I think this is like the AWESOMESTESTEST compliment I have EVER received on my poetry, my friend… THANK YOUUUUU EVER SO MUCH for your kindest words….
I am immensely happy you liked this poem … REALLY!!
Broken Sparkles said:
Cosmic connection is what I can use right now … or a trip to the Moon better!
I like “amid a starry sea” very much, it makes me think of the sky in a hot night in the summer!
Thank you for everything Kavita!
hahahaha… It’s very typically BLAGA to think of the sky on a hot summer night!! 😉 Now on, I think I am gonna call you “Summer gal”… is that okay with you? 🙂
And I knew you would love “amid a starry sky”… hmm… broken sparkles HAS to like it!! 😀
Thank you soooo much, sweetie…. You are a sweet and amazing lady… Stay thus…
Lotsa waaarm love coming your way!!! xoxoxo
Broken Sparkles said:
hehe, summer gal is wonderful, no one called me that way … I like it 🙂 Love back!
LOADSA HUGS to you, my summer gal.. 😀 😀
Someone is Special said:
Someone is Special
hehehe..thank you soooooooooooooooo much, Saravan…
So sweet of you!! 🙂
brilliant idea. stunning writing. ♥
Ooooohh…thank you so much, Dani… Unconditional love is always a brilliant thing… no?! 🙂
Lotsa hugs to you, my dear…
Shail Raghuvanshi said:
That was imaginative…. very.
hahahah… is it, Shail? 😉 Thanks a ton, dear!! That’s a huge word for me to live by… I feel honored!!
awww thats so romantic 😀
interesting take from Luna’s point of view…
hehhee…thank you soooo much, Raji… Only someone as romantic as you can estimate the romanticism in this poem 🙂
So glad you liked it, girl….
LOADS of love!!!
I *love* this. What a thought…never dawned on me to wonder what the moon might be feeling. After reading this, i wonder why…
Awww… thank you so much, Corrie… I am pretty sure the Moon must be thinking SOMETHING about us Earth people… I mean, after all, she watches us all the time! But I wonder WHAT she thinks about us.. heheheh
Glad you liked this poem so much, my friend… thanks a ton for your kind words…
gautami tripathy said:
Great rhyming as always…
hahaha…thanks, Gautami.. but there’s an entire universe behind those rhymes 😉
Blasphemous Aesthete said:
Neil must have been a lunatic to pursue his dream beyond the reaches of earthly birds… he flew high in his capsule just for an embrace, with his Luna.
hahaha…you can say that again, Anshul! 🙂 I am surprised he didn’t find anyone here…
Well, anyway, I am glad he and the moon were made for each other 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend.. thanks for your sweet words here.. 🙂
this is fascinating….
gee…thanks a bunch, magiceye… glad you liked it so much!!
Alice Audrey said:
Oooo, a look at the dark side of the moon.
hahaha…somebody’s getting all Floydy out there 🙂 Thanks a bunch, AA..your comment made me smile…
This is very beautiful and extremely well versed. I really enjoyed the read K:)
Ooohh…thanks a bunch, Mark!! SO GLAD you enjoyed this slightly “luna”tic perspective 🙂
I felt it. This is a great piece
Aww… your saying so meant a great deal to me, Enreal.. thank you so much!!!
Lovely, love the feelings in this one. I understand why you said it is similar to mine. We do think a like when it comes to writing poetry, it happens to us so often! I guess like minds think alike 🙂
Whheeww.. Just for a while, I started wondering if I was the only one seeing “things” here.. glad you saw the “cosmic connection” too, DP 🙂 Yup…you’re quite right.. our like-mindedness in terms of our poetry stuns me at times.. in a pleasant way ofcourse 🙂
Me is happy you liked this poem, babes.. thank you ever so much!!!
Doctor FTSE said:
I’ve never succeeded in writing poetry like this . . . beautifully done!
Ooohh.. I take that as a compliment of the highest order, Dr. FTSE.. Thank you so much…
Here’s to wings of hope! 🙂
Woohoo!! Indeed!! 😀
Thank you soooo muc, Jinksy.. your comments sure got me flying all over the place…
I wrote a poem about the moon landings in the week they happened (yes, I am that old!)
It was far less romantic. It ended with a line about still believing the moon was made of ‘pure green cheese’!
I like your version though.
Aww… how sweet of you to say that, AJ… and we are talking about LUNA here, who has been waiting for AEONS..remember? So guess who’s the oldest of us all!! 😉
And you wrote a poem when the landings actually happened?? WOW!!!! Do you still have it? I WOULD LOVE TO READ IT!!!
Glad you liked this one, my dear friend…
Great work Kav, the humble connection between you and the orb expressed through your words is fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing!
Aww… glad you liked this romantic little poem, Leif… thank you ever so much for your sweet words here… really made me a very happy person!!
Cold Dead Heart said:
Thank you for the versatility award and your never ending encouragement and inspiration. It’s because of your writing, I keep plugging away at mine. It’s only fitting you deserve this award and so many others. I look forward to even more from you. Back at you!
Oh guuurrrlll… you didn’t have to!! You read and like my work, and that’s more than enough for me, sweetie…
And I am REALLY HAPPY that my writes have encouraged to blog ore… I feel very proud to hear that, my fried… (GLOATING!!)
Thank you so much for your kindest words of appreciation, and for honoring me with this award, my dear… it means the WORLD to me!!
ooooh!! One word- Awesome!
If I try saying anymore, it’ll be killed!
From across the other side of the globe, traveling via the cyber- space, here comes some Hugs for you xoxox
Absolutely Awesome 🙂
(blushing and blinking)… thankoo, Liv!! (blushing and blinking again..)
REALLY!! Your comment has left me speechless, darling… mwaahhhzz!! (bowing graciously)
Jannie Funster said:
Ahh, nothing like the Moon, eh? That lovely thing on Earthly tether, that has ignited such lovely poems as this, since man first set eyes on its luster and mystery.
Oohh… well said, Jannie.. that orb up there has held the fascination of many an Earthling 🙂
I’m SO GLAD you enjoyed this one, dearie.. you are a real darling!! Thank you…….for your continued support and appreciation, J…
Jamie Dedes said:
Just perfect for the occasion you cited, Kavita. Perfect poem. I love it.
Thank you, Jamie dear… Glad you liked my “perspective” 🙂 Sometimes I wonder what that lovely Moon could be thinking about us earthlings 🙂
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Very cool, and imaginative!
Gee.. thank you, Maddie… you are too kind…
Beaqutiful one 🙂
Awww… thanks, girlie!! 🙂
this is wonderful…inky blue, I love! and after reading what this poem respresents, I love it even more. Very applicable and well penned 🙂
Aww… thank you, Sheila.. you are very sweet…
As for lovely Luna, well, she always makes me wanna write more and more about here… so this time, I wrote what I imagined was HER perspective 🙂 Glad you enjoyed the read, my dear girl…
Sarath Unnithan said:
🙂 short and sweet…
touching all of those fine characters 🙂
It will be full moon tomorrow…
Aw… thanks, Sarath..
Yea… heard about tomorrow’s special full moon.. hoooowwwllll 😀