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Abode, Dwelling, Free, Haiku, Home, Peace, Place of calm, Poetry Potluck, Relaxation, Sanctum, Sunday 160, The Haiku Challenge, Unbounded, Where we find calm
pillowing in peace
in lulls of a humming mind
no chaotic grunge
inhaled and infused
cool scents of blooming freshness
tepid seclusion
sans confines, I glide..
Written for:
Sunday 160 (stories in 160 characters or less),
Poetry Potluck (poetry with a theme)
The Haiku Challenge (a haiku a day)
Thank you, Leo & Dakshi, for nominating me for as the Perfect Poet for this week… I am honored!! Here’s my little Haiku for you…
bringing summer smiles
drizzled with springing freshness
joys knowing no bounds
And with this, I would like to nominate DeadPoet88 for as the Perfect Poet for week 39…
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
Freedom from constraints makes mellow the mind, indeed! Really cool stuff!
Aww.. thank you, Paulo… Cheers to freedom!!
So cool and smooth…like the shaving razor I don’t use.
hahaha.. Tim, it’s high time you change your razor 😉
Take this poem to shave, if you find it so smooth.. 🙂 Thanks for the sweet words, my friend!! You made me smile!!
damn, I love that line “pillowing in peace”!
WHOAA!!! THANK YOU, AB!!! 🙂 Your comment almost gave me a jolt, till I saw the word “love”… whhew! 🙂
Sans confines, san chaos … I love it. At home in one’s mind. Lovely, Kavita.
heheheh… you said it, Jamie… home is where peace is.. 🙂
I love the line “pillowing in peace” – such a lulling poem – thoroughly enjoyed it in the middle of a busy day
Aww.. thank you, Marousia.. I hope you have a much more peaceful day ahead, my dear..
Take care..
Great use of a unique verb…pillowing. Makes me want to create a poem to go with it! Nice work, Kavita.
Ooohh..thanks, Victoria…
PLEASE DO write a poem to go with “pillowing”… I will be FIRST to read it… really!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeze…
what a peace filled place to be…fly on…fly on…
Aww.. thanks, B… please pull me right back to Earth if I fly too high.. will ya?! 🙂
in lulls of a humming mind..nicely said. Your words fly free and create beauty.
Gee.. thanks, Dan.. so glad you enjoyed the peace in this piece…
Sounds very comfy. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.
Thanks, MM.. Sunday 160 is an awesome place to be!!! Like home! 🙂
love it,
divine imagery…
cheers.
🙂
Oohh.. thanks a ton, Jingle!
Have a great week ahead!
ahh peace…love it! 🙂
Aww.. thanks, my friend…
Cheers to Peace!!! 🙂
Beautiful
Oh.. thank you, Melissa!!!
LIKE!
Aww..THANK YOU!!!
xoxoxo
Lovely. A wonder in so few words.
hehehe.. Julie.. you are a sweetheart… thank you so much for your kind words, my friend…
Another great write.
Aww.. you are too kind, Sam… thank you…
That last line just killed me. What a powerful ending to your explication. Always amazed by your vision. Take care,
crb.
Now now, CRB.. I am truly flattered! Thank you so much, my friend….
Love the flow of words in this one so much Kavita….made me feel peaceful. 🙂
Aaaaaaaaahh… glad it had that effect on you, Charles.. and thanks for YOUR kind words, my friend…
Felt like I could fly…beautiful.
Oh wowwiieezz.. that’s awesome!! Glad you liked this one, Sam!!
freedom is sanctity.. great one kavi! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/
Indeed it is…. thank you so much, my dear Kris!
Gliding, indeed! A position to be envied!!
Aahh… forget envy, Lyn… glide on..and enjoy the view.. 😉
ahhh … do soothing and peaceful. Delighted to read. Thank you for sharing!
~becca~
http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/no-alarms/
Congratulations for Jingle’s The Perfect Poet Award of week 38. Well done! ~becca~
Woohooo!! Thank you sooo much, Becca!!
hugs and loads of love coming your way…
Thanks YOU, Becca, for your kind and lovely words… it really means a lot to me !
Very soulful, Kavita. I was gliding away with you!
Awww…how sweet, Jessica! Enjoyed the ride? 😉
Beautiful! I am caught between placidity and gliding. Gliding can be so powerful, yet it is a peaceful way of being in the world.
So well said, Terri dear… gliding has some seeds of bliss attached to it… it’s magical!
Glad you liked this piece, my friend.. and thanks for the lovely words…
sounds wonderful, peaceful and where I want to be…Lovely descriptive poem Kavita.xx
Aww…how awesome is that!! Me wants to be there too, Pen… come, let’s fly together, shall we?! 🙂
Thanks for the sweet words here, my friend..
Umm, sweeter than a soft spring morning. Lovely “all is well” poem, Kavita — a joy to behold.
xo
Aaahh… now just float in it, Jann!! 🙂
Sending you hugs and love…
I want to be there, I think!
heheheh…it’s all your, mama zen…
xoxox
Ahh…like one of those seeds that can float for miles on a single puff. It’s so delicate, if you touch it, it will disintegrate. Very nice.
What a lovely analogy, kolembo! Loved it!
Glad you enjoyed this piece… thank you, my friend..
beautiful, calm…
I loved reading both the haikus… 🙂
thank you soooo much, Sumit…
Soothing and calm, I loved it!
Aww.. thank you so much, my dear Nicole…
Love and Hugs!!!
This was beautiful, Kavita. I like the alliteration and assonance you used in this – it makes it better, I think. It’s hard, sometimes, to turn the mind “off”, hm? 🙂
You bet it’s tough to switch the mind “off” for a bit.. but when it does, it’s all worth it.. in fact, even the mind feels better after a break 🙂
Glad you liked this one, dragonkatet… thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words..
xoxo
For me, this was soft and tender 🙂
AWw… thank you, Reggie… just what I intended it to be…
(hugs)
peacefulness is what we are searching for..nicely put…
Indeed, Chimnese.. we are always running after peace… I suppose we will get it easily if only we learn to relax..
Glad you liked this one, my friend..
Peaceful.. Softly flowing.. Blissful..
I close my eyes and feel tranquil!
I loved the Haiku- you preserved the essence. when it’s you, I know it can’t be wrong!!
Hugs xoxox
Awww… do that, girl…we all need our peace once in a while… So glad you enjoyed this haiku..and thanks a HEAP for the encouraging and appreciative words…
Hugs and Kisses!!!
xoxoxo
Melodic poetry.
Certain very placid, nicely done.
It gives off a very serene atmosphere
Thank you for your sweet words, Richard… Glad you liked this poem.. Partake of some of this calm.. I sure did 🙂
Pillowing in peace.. Loved it so much.. Thanks..
Someone is Special
Ohh… thank you soooo much, my dear SiS.. you are very kind…
xox
Wow…pulled me to a place I liked to dwell in… Thanks, Kavita!
JP
Aw…. as long as you enjoyed the calm, I am good, JP…thank you for your kind words, my friend..
xoxo
Seems such a lovely place to be…. can I come there with you? 🙂
oh.. you are moooost welcome, H… 🙂
(hugs)
A happy glide that
smooth ‘sans confines’, words flow
Turn into great poem..
I enjoyed it Kavita.. each word speaks for itself.. one word less and the flow would scatter..
Happy to be here.. glide towards my page to have a look at the “Top of of the Hill” where I reached..
RS..
Wooww…it’s really very sweet of you to say such kind words here, Rameshji.. I am very very happy you enjoyed this poem so much.. Thanks for your encouragement and appreciation…
its been ages i visited your blog oho it’s getting famous day by day
i m loving all the poteries 🙂
kavita goon with thesame spirit
Aww… no probs at all, Rida… visit when you can.. I love it when you leave your words here… 😀
Love you loads, sweetie pie!! Will be by your blog too …soooon!!
xoxoxo
Brilliant words.
Thanks for sharing these words to all of us!
~ Inelle (http://inellezshayra.wordpress.com/)
Aww..thanks, Inelle.. you are much too kind, my dear…
I normally find tepid seclusion annoying, but I could use some pillowing in peace.
hahahah… enjoy all the pillowing in you can, Alice… Friday 55 approaching!!!!! 😀
I love the calm peacefulness exuding from this poem.
Aww..thanks a bunch, Liz… I hope you basked in the calm warmth …
Much love to you, my friend..
Thanks for accepting the award,
well deserved.
Cheers.
😉
A++
Thanks, Ji!! 🙂
Wonderfully written. The final line stands out strong on its own. Powerful style K:)
Aww..thanks, Mark… glad you liked the “punch” in the poem…
xoxox