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Friday Flash 55, Future, Magpie Tales, New Year, Old year, Past, Present, Wiped clean, Year, Yet again
Image Credits - Tess Kincaid @ Magpie Tales
Frenzied, I dug
Till I felt smug
Hearing a clank
My anxiety sank
‘Neath muddy fear
Sat a new year
Waiting to be found
Unwrapped, unwound
He smiled at me
With eyes heavenly
I forgot my woes
And turned rose
Immersed in love
I took off my glove
Extended an arm
And felt his palm
**Posted for G-Man’s Friday Flash 55, and for Magpie Tales – Week 46… Do check these out for some amazing stories/poems…**
It was a seed that eventually had to sprout. And it did, happy new year.
hah! Indeed!! It did too… with grandeur! 🙂 Thanks for everything, Anshul..
A wonderful warm feeling in these words to start the year. Happy New Year Kavita! May it bring you all the joys that life has to offer.
To you tooooo, Charles (although I am almost half a year late in saying that :))
Kavita, this is one of the best imagination that one could pen down for this image. Awesome..
–Someone is Special–
Awww… thank you so much, SiS… you are too cool!
This is a good poem to enter the year with.
Intimate poem, very nicely done
Gee…thanks a bunch, buddy… hope you are doing good….
Happy New Year! Nicely done!
Thank you so much, MZ… have fun!
A very Happy New Year to you Kavita. Sweet poem!
Thanks a ton, my dear Myrna…see you soon on your blog!!
Immersed in love
I took off my glove
Extended an arm
And felt his palm..
lovely ending..well done magpie…in 55 words.
Happy 2011.
😉
Aww… thankooo, Ji! Stay rocking!! As ever! 🙂
Lovely. There is something about gloves –
teehehe…you can say that again, Barbara.. there really is something too smart about gloves.. makes you feel all warm and sneaky 😉
Thanks for the kind words, my friend..
hummm and then -what?
Lovely use of gloves… hands are such a meaningful place to set a kiss, full of meaning and wish….
😉
Aaahh… spoken like a true romantic, Dulce!! Thanks for the loveliest words here… made me feel all warm and nice about this one…
xoxoox
oh nice…i like the intimate ending…to touch…hope you are having a great new year!
Geee… thanks for just being there to encourage me always, B… you rock!!!
Kavita, this was sweet and clever. Also dug your birthday poem on AlmondJoycie’s blog, complete with both pronunciations of your name, very cute stuff.
Glad to have found you again, courtesy of Fiveloaf’s interview at Jingle. Hope all is well with you and that 2011 is indeed heaven.
Amy Barlow Liberatore
One for the road: http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/01/03/time-travel/
Oooohh…you are so sweet, Amy! And so are Fiveloaf and Joyce…
Thanks for re-finding me….it’s quite an honor for me really! Yes, the year’s been awesome for me thus far (too far actually now… isn’t it? my bad!)
Hope it’s been terrific for you too.. will be seeing you soon, dear…
xoxoox
Nice. Good luck in 2011!
Gee…thanks a bunch, Ollin! To you too!!!
This poem has a sexy feel and an optimistic forward looking tone. I enjoyed both the rhythm and the topic. Happy New Year, indeed!
AWw…thanks for saying that, sweetie.. just what I wanted to see for this poem! Hope you are doing good…
Love ya! Miss ya too!!
Happy New Year Kavita 🙂 Excellent little piece with a good pace and excellent rhymes 🙂
Aww..thank you so much, Mark… now THIS is what I call a good start to a year…a fellow rhymer saying good things about my poem…yaaaaaaaaaayyy! 😀
Lovely poem, I like how you made it so romantic! The gloves in the image also look like they’re lovers 🙂
Now THAT’s a new one! The gloves looking like lovers, I mean!!! I like that thought 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this one, sweetie… by saying it’s ‘romantic’, you sure made me feel very nice…