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faint shadows dancing
behind smooth flimsy curtain
ghoulish puppetry
thunder and flashes
whizzing past turbid waters
ripples created
Images of precious past..
**This haiku set has been posted for Monkey Man’s Sunday 160!! For more tales written in 160 characters or less, please visit his blog… **
*** Also posted for our lovely Monday Poetry Potluck!!! ***
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wow I’m in a mystical land with this one
Ooooohhh… and don’t you just love it, Moon!?! It’s so .. well.. enchanting!!
I am happy you liked this piece, my dear.. thank you…
Kavita…I really like the way this one evokes mental imagery of the scene.
Thank you, Charles… images of the past always seems to come in distinct lfashes.. I really wonder how and why…
Glad you liked this short one, my friend..
nice… a joy to read 🙂
Gee…thanks a bunch, Robin!!!
xoxoxo
timeless imagery, well done…
Glad to see you share this one with potluck…
you rock, girl!
🙂
Aww.. anytime, Ji!! I am happy you liked this piece.. thanks a bunch, girl..
Have a beautiful week ahead..
there is a juxtaposition between ‘precious’ past and the imagery…when you use words like ghoulish, thunder, and turbid…hmm….
glad you acknowledged the contrast, Brian.. I appreciate your reading “into” the poem.. thanks a bunch, my friend..
So are you saying the precious past went down the drain?
This kind of reminds me of Plato’s concept of life as a mere reflection of a deeper reality – shadows on the wall.
you were the only one to decipher it, Alice 😉
As for shadows on the wall, that phrase has a super pronounced effect on me!! (sigh) Reminds me of a whole lot of things…
I’m a Haiku Kind A Guy….These Rocked!
Woohoo!!! You said it, and I am blessed, G!!
Love ya!!!!
Happy New Year, my friend!!
Awesome image, and between that and the words, thoughts of Shakespeare’s Tempest popped into my mind.:) A magical 160 and potluck poem.
Oooohhh…. and AM I FLATTERED OR WHAT!!! Gee Ruth… I am blushing…
Thank you ever so much for your kindest words of appreciation and encouragement here, girl… MWAAAHH!!! 😀
xoxoxo
So there’s “ghoulish puppetry” behind our precious past, is there? Hmmm…Very very interesting poem, kavita. Thank you!
hahahaha…. isn’t there, DS? At least sometimes… ? 🙂
Thanks for your most interesting comments here, my friend… they are absolutely invaluable to me!!
Very nice scene set here 🙂 Enjoyed the read. All the best 🙂
Awww…thank you soooo much, Mark.. you are such a sweetheart, my dear friend..
🙂
xoxo
Blurs in the air 🙂 definitely lovely!
hahahah.. you can say that again, Blaga!! 😉
Glad you enjoyed this one…
xoxoxo
Loved the idea of “ghoulish puppetry”! A wonderful piece of poetic, surreal drama!
Aww..thanks a TON, Gemma… So glad you enjoyed this one…
Love you loads!!!
Beautiful words and picture.
Ooohh…thank you so much, KB… xoxoxoxoox
“ghoulish puppetry”…
Thats scary… 😀
I love this haiku…
The second one is awesome…it goes so well with the picture.. 🙂
🙂 Thanks, Sumit… I thought the picture went well with the haiku… 😉 Had taken great pains hunting for the “right” pic 🙂
And those flashes take such a long detour, and yet, last only a few seconds. Strange, yet, hard to live without.
Nice Read.
You bet, Anshul!! Those flashes can sometimes take forever! 🙂 And yet, we kinda enjoy and savor them.. don’t we?
Glad you liked this one, my friend..
These haikus.. lovely picture.. loved them.. beautiful..
Oh.. thank you so much, Ramesh.. your kind words here are most appreciated
loved the imagery… brilliant.
Aww..thank you so much, my dear Raji.. you are very kind…
xoxoxo
Shadows of the past, thunder and flashes—All the world’s a stage–your brought light and sound effects–beautiful poem.
Whoooaa!! Light and sound effects huh??? I hope all of that disturb the setting around you, Dan…
Glad you enjoyed this theatrical performance, my friend… Thank you so much for your AWESOME words here…
xoxo
I love the feelings evoked by this piece…what a glimpse behind the thin veil we call “reality”…short, simple, and stimulating…
Aww… we all have a way of hiding certain things we are not so proud of… don’t we now?
I am glad you read into this poem so beautifully, Annie.. Love you for doing that!! Thanks for “getting” me here, my dear…
Lotsa hugs coming your way!!
xoxoxo
This is so lovely. I love the photo you matched so well to your poem.
Ohh…thanks a ton for everything, Myrna… I’m extremely glad you liked this poem so much…
xoxox
I felt like I’m in a different world… I wish there was more…
You rock, Kavita!
Oooohhh… Thank you, Inelle.. your comments always make me feel GREAT about what I write here…. MWaaaahhh for making me feel so good, my dear…
xoxoxo
Wowsers! With so little of word you painted such a canvas!
Geee..thank you, AB! Haiku power is awesome!! I am glad you liked my attempt…
Have a wonderful new year, my friend..
‘Images of precious past’…yes, those images are precious, because they represent our lives captured in vignettes. Sometimes like a movie, sometimes like a snapshot, almost like the pages of a photo album.
Merry Christmas to you, Kavita.
regards,
Eaton
I like how you have put it here, Eaton.. I REALLY LIKE IT!! Yes, our pasts have a bearing on us all..don’t they? As long as they don’t have an ill effect on us, we are all good.. 🙂
Thank you soooo much for your kind and insightful words here, Eaton.. I really appreciate it…
xoxoxo
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Love so much haiku
Your talent, mystical muse
Happiness to you….
Happy holidays Kav. Thank you for all of your encouraging words in 2010. Take good care my friend. ~700
Aww.. you inspire me, 700!! Trust me when I say that!! Your recent haiku really seemed to have rubbed off on me too.. 🙂
Glad you liked this one, my friend…
Take care, and have a wonderful new year!!!
Hey girl!!! As you know I love Haiku…and these are excellent!! 😀 Love how you have ended with a single line after the two stanzas.
Take care my friend – and keep up the AMAZING work!!
Chloe xx
Yaaaayyyy… glad you enjoyed this one, C… Haiku is kinda tough when one REALLY wants to say SO MUCH!!! 🙂 Loved writing this one though…
Thanks for the encouragement, lady.. I’ll grab everything I can!! heheheh
Hope you enjoyed a beautiful Christmas…
Now have a FANTASTIC New Year, darling.. xoxoxoo
So, so, so, so, so, SOooooo good to see you back Kavita 😀
Yes, I had a great Christmas, thanks, and am looking forward to an amazing 2011. Just so you know Kavita, YOU helped put a bit more sunshine in 2010 for me and I’m glad we are in touch in this wonderful world of bloggyland.
Happy New Year to you too my friend xx
Yaaaaayyyy … likewise, sweet Chloe!! Am eagerly awaiting your reply now…
And yes, my visits to your blog are no well overdue…grrr… WILL BE THERE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNN.. I promise!!
Love you loads, girl!! 😀
xoxoxox
what an imagery…i felt as if i was transported to another world…
Woohooo!!! Our reflections have a way of tele-transporting us into netherworlds.. don’t they?
Glad you enjoyed this ride, tweety… mwaah!! Thank you so much for your kind words here…
Happy New Year, my dear..
great imagery, it leaves a perfect illusion of mystery
Oooohh.. And I like mystery… don’t you, Andrea?! 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this poem, my friend.. thanks a ton for your kind words here…
xoxox
Sounds like a past that i have. Very eloquent.
Aww… and I am glad it’s in the past tense, Carolina..
Here’s wishing you the best ahead, my dear!!
(hugs and kisses)
What a lovely imagery!!!
Happy New Year Kavita 🙂
Aww.. thanks a ton, lovely Asmita!! Hope you’ve been having a great year thus far.. will be visiting you soon, sweetie…
Glad you enjoyed this poem, my dear..
xoxox