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Assurance, Certainty, Dream, Eyes speak, Forever, Knowing, Love, One Shot Wednesday, One Stop Poetry, Past Present and Future, Reality, Surety
Image Credits: Pulchra @ DeviantArt.com
I dream of days gone by
When moments would just fly
Its charm I won’t deny
And gravity I can’t defy
From the corner of your eye
You’d watch me touch the sky
I’d raise a hue and cry
But you wouldn’t breathe a sigh
There was no need to lie
We were so young and shy
You loved me… My oh my!
And on this, I was high…
In chill airs, you I smell
And all my fears I quell
From quandaries, I rebel
Cuz in my hopes you dwell
Soft chimes of a doorbell
I break out of my shell
In your arms, I revel
Clinging to you like gel
Enchanted by your spell
I hear my insides yell
You love me now as well
From your eyes, I can tell
My mind runs wild and free
And swims about in glee
While buzzing like a bee
And hugging an odd tree
There’s no reason to flee
For in love’s the way to be
I’m on this frenzied spree
And it doesn’t cost a fee
Sweet you are to me
Like candy or honey
In your deep eyes I see
You’ll still keep loving me
**Posted for this week’sĀ One Shot Wednesday hosted by Claudia… Please do check out the lovely poetic offerings made here… It’s a certain delight! **
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
Lots of clever rhyming, Kavita!
Hey, did somebody say Oblivion?
hahahaha… holy macaroni! Now what were the odds that we would both have written poems with a similar name!! Whheewww! š
Glad you enjoyed this one, Bubba… you just ROCK!!!!!
Kavita:
This is lovely and has a nice cadence to it, I can almost see this piece put to music.
joanny
Woohoo… that is some compliment, Joanny!! Thank you!!!! oxoxoxo
may he always love you š
Woohoo… and that sounded like music to my ears.. š
Blaga, thanks for this WONDERFULLEST (I just HAD TO make that word up) wish for me š
Luv ya!!!
xoxox
Awesome rhyming!!
lovery imaginary š
loveNlight
Gabi
Geee… thank you, Gabi… So glad you enjoyed this one..
Not entirely imagination for me though š
Take care, girl… have a lovely week ahead!!!
aww – what a lovely place to be – full of safety, assurance and certainty – it just shouts joy at me – and i love it!
Embraced by him, and surrounded by awesome poets like you and all at One Stop, what else could one ask for!!
Thanks a bunch for appreciating my lovey-dovey poem, Claudia… I am SUUUUUUUUPER happy you loved it!! And I love you for loving it!!
Have a beautiful week ahead! š xoxooxx
Such fun…was it good for you too?
hah! You bet it was, Timoteo! š Glad you enjoyed this “state”
another amazing writing by a very talented girl:) I love your blog!!!! your posts inspire me! Thanks!
Eeeeee… so sweet of you to say so, my dear L…I am overjoyed at reading your comment!! Yaaaaayyy!!! You’ve turned a cold snowy day into a warm bright one!!! Thank youuuu!!
Glad you enjoyed this sappy piece, my friend.. xoxoxox
š
I really enjoyed this. You did a marvelous job of rhyming without it sounding forced. That takes a lot of talent.
Wheeww… thank you, Victoria… this comment from you makes me feel REALLY happy about this post! Cuz sometimes, I get comments from some of my blogger friends asking WHY I “try” to rhyme… and I find it hard to explain that I don’t try too hard really š They come quite easily..
Well, anyway, I am eally happy you enjoyed this piece, my friend… and thanks a BUNCH for your encouraging words here.. I really appreciate it!
The good thing about true love is it has a no return policy…it is always there…so enjoyed your poem.
You said it, Charles! No fees, no taxes, and no return policies either! š
Glad you enjoyed this light ride, my friend… Thanks for your kind words, my friend…
Fabulous, Kavita! Really, what else can I say without sounding redundant? š
hah! No worries, Tony… even this sounds like music to my ears š Thank youuuuu
This is such a great poem! Very sweet.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/14/waiting-for-persephone/
Aww..thanks, Teresa… xoxox
Shoot woman! You can rhyme! I am impressed…again…lovely one shot Kavita
much love
Annie
hahah…thanks a ton, lovely lady!!! You are way tooooo kind to me… mwaaahh! Love ya for that! xoxo
Excellent job…You are quite the rhymester!
hahahah… and now, rhymester rhymes with that little animal that keeps running in a wheel… Gio, what WERE trying to tell me here? š Jus kiddin’…
Glad you liked this poem, my friend.. I really appreciate your kind words here..
You really do an excellent job with your rhymes. This is a great little tale š
Aww…thankoo, M… you are far too kind to me!!!
This lovely, Kavita, and awesome rhyming. I especially like the first stanza, which captures the magic of young love so perfectly.
Yaaaaaaaaaaaayyy…. thanks a bunch, Patti dear!! Your words are like SUPER encouraging!! I was beginning to get a feeling that this poem was a tad too muchy… but now you made me feel GREAT about it! xoxoxoxo
Aww, what a lovely love poem! It is amazing right, how you can sometimes just tell how much someone loves you š
you can say that again, dudette! I am a sucker for “real” love stories! Which is why I avoid crappy love story/mushy movies…ughh
how can you not smile at such love…beautifully said kavita
(blushing and giggling).. thanks a ton, Bri!!
I wish you this love forever.
Aww… thank you ever so much, Cin… xoxooxox
You My Dear are a certain delight!
heheheh… Thanks, G!! And YOU are my rockstar!!!
This is too sweet Kavita! š
Aww…thank you so much, Jess!!! xoxoxo
i never saw so much rhyming before this!
places
and as long as they make sense, I am good .. š
Sweet you are to me
Like candy or honey
In your deep eyes I see
Youāll still keep loving me
tender flow..well handled rhyme..Great poem kavita, yeah..very sweet giggles i feel..:)
hehehe… I guess love makes you feel that way… giggle on, sweetie… and thankooz for the sweet words here … (blushing)…
xoxoxo
Fantastic rhyme…
and lovely thoughts š
heheh..thanks a bunch, Sumit…
That is some serious rhyme scheming. Keeping it all on topic/theme is quite an accomplishment. The poem itself has that scent of the past that is not exactly maudlin but more retrospective. Reading it out loud was especially enjoyable wit hthe word flow and rhyme scheme. Thanks for posting, wonderful poem.
crb.
Woohoo!! I appreciate all your positive feedback and words of encouragement here, CRB… it really means a GREAT deal to me !!!
Thank youuuuuuuu
I love your depiction of enduring love. I’ve been married to the same man for many, many years, so I appreciate this poem. Nice job.
heheheh… so nice to have someone like you appreciate this poem, Myrna.. I consider it an honor… thank you so much for your sweet words, my friend..
xoxox
clever, and sweet
heheh..thanks, Heather!! š
The rhythm and lovely rhymes make me dream of love and happy times. :o)
Aww…how sweet is that!! I am so happy this one made you smile, my friend.. keep smiling, and dream on…
xoxooxo
What a striking blog!
Aloha from Hawaii
Comfort Spiral
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Aloha, Cloudia… so glad to see you here…. xoxoxo
That’s a rather large amount of rhyming you have there, not easily done without sounding childish. Good job.
Woohoo!! I take that as a compliment, Panda Wolf!! Thanks a bunch!!! š
You have some rhyme shceme going on there, good job!
heheh..thanks, Suzicate… rhyme’s my middle name (or so I think) š
Stunning rhyming – I love to see people playing with language in such a dexterous way š
Woohoo!! And this comment of your made me SUPER HAPPY, Marousia.. thank you ever so much!
Beautiful, rhythmic images of love and its endurance, free spirit, ebb and flow… well done.
Thank you for your generous comments over at my poem of ‘Choices-Changes’. Truly appreciate the feedback. Have always been happy with the message, but have struggled with the style.
Thanks for your words here, Reflections… I really appreciate it..
As for visiting and commenting at oyur place, I consider it my pleasure and honor, my friend.. your poems are so deep and inspiring…
Love is ever so sweet..but doesnt come with a warranty card.
hahahah…you can say that again, Budhaaah.. š it is just the way it is…sweet!
Hi Kavita, A lovely rhyming way of expressing the emotions lodged within…..
Carry on….
Yaaayy.. thanks a ton for the kind words of encouragement, Shail…you are too sweet!!!
xoxoxo
Geez, I don’t know which one I’m commenting on, but the first poem was incredible….so soft in wording, but so strong in sentiment. Amazing, Kavita.
That image of mother and child just was thrilling and went so well with your beautiful poem.
Thank you for starting out my early morning with such a wonderful sentiment.
Lady Nyo
Aww…. your comment made me beam, Jane.. thank you ever so much!! I am thrilled that you liked both my poems so much!!
Many hugs to you, sweetie..
I think repeating the same rhyme in stanzas is difficult to do and you handled it very well in this piece. However, what I like best about the poem is the recognition of love at the end. Uplifting! Also love the image. Very cool. Cheers, my friend. Keep rocking!
Thanks for everything, Adam.. your continued support here has given me all the boost in the world!! And I am grateful to you for that, my friend…
YOU ROCK!!!!
I enjoyed this one as well. Thanks Eric for sharing and Kavita awesome piece š Happy Rally
heheh… thanks for reading and appreciating my work, Lynnaima… š
like several monorhyme poems in a row… nice work my friend. You sure like those end-rhymes, huh?
Warmest Salad
Luke x
hahah.. you can say that again, Luke!! š
Thanks for the kind words of encouragement though…
NY hugs to you..
love this. great rhythym and rhyme…. and great story line too boot. hope it goes on happily ever after this way…. =)
Aww… thank you, Samantha…. glad you enjoyed this one so much… š You are way too kind, my friend..
FANTASTIC!You rhyme words ,fantasticly.*envies*I just love rhymed poems.It’s my weakness,haha.
Was falling in love again after reading your post.*smiles*
Aww.. you are SO SWEET, June (my rhyme-friend!!!) I’am so glad you enjoyed this one…. Yaaaayyyy!!!
As for love… isn’t one always falling in love… time and again!? š
Take care, sweets…
Well crafted wordplay indeed…wondrous image.
Aww.. thankoooooo, Dasun… so glad you enjoyed both!
Kavita nice and rhymy..loved it!
Ooohhh…thank you, Suja!!!!
So this is why you make him pizza AND cupcakes on his birthday! š
Fabulous rhyme scheme, which adds to – doesn’t undermine – the topic. Often I find rhyming a distraction. Not here. Well done.
May you always love each other as you do now. Blessings …
heheheh… (blushing and blinking)…thank you, J dear… for the lovely wishes and the kindest words… you are simply AWESOME!!!!