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I leaned against the wall
Tried to hear what it said
Its silence, hard as lead
Making all my spirits fall
I stared at the ceiling
Knowing not what to do
Your games of peekaboo
Playing at my feeling
I tried to smell the air
For traces of your scent
To me, no clue it lent
I thought this wasn’t fair
I touched the floor ‘neath me
Hoped for your footsteps near
These tiles evoked a fear
And I wished I could flee
I stood by French windows
Tasted the finest scape
And let my thoughts escape
To the weeping willows
I let my senses drain
For sixth to run this show
And now I simply know
That hurt shall not remain
This torch lit in my core
I let its embers burn
A click and then a turn
And you walk in through that door
**Posted for Thursday Poets’ Rally – Week 28, hosted graciously by Jingle**
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Very thoughtful and emotional, Kavita. I dig that rhying scheme, too!
Ooohhh…that was QUICK commenting, Eric!! First again…yaaayyyy š
And yes… I found exactly what I was looking for, in a comment ‘thoughtful’… cuz I did put some thought into writing this one for sure!! 5 senses and all.. hehe
Glad you liked it… and oh, I am soooo a rhymes person! š Thanks for the kind words..
Happy Thursday!!
Umm, RHYMING scheme, that is!
( a ‘rhying scheme ‘ sounds like an evil plot hatched in a delicatessen! LOL!)
No prolemo.. gotcha! ‘rhying scheme’ — who knows how many times I’ve been “targeted”! š
But really, it does not matter! Who defined the boundaries of poetry??
š Rightly said, Naba.. no boundaries at all!
Thanks for stopping by here… I really appreciate it!
Have a great weekend!
Nice – and the image is a perfect match for the words. And isn’t it just the way of it? – we spend so much time wondering, agonizing, and just like that it’s over and everything’s all right again. Life! š
ABSOLUTELY, Ruth!! You totally nailed it! When we try so hard to put you head and senses to it, it JUST DOES NOT work… but when you go with your intuition/instints, it kinda clicks! Well, at least quite a few times! š
Glad you liked the poem AND the image! It took me HOURS to find the “right” one… Unfortunately, instincts could not help much.. cuz I was hunting for images on Google š
Thanks for the appreciation and thoughtful words…
Hope you are having a great week! (hugs)
Oh this captures the anguish of waiting for someone while dreading they won’t return. A well-crafted poem. And I agree with Eric, it has a great rhying or rhyming scheme š
hehe..thank you Lisa.. glad you liked the rymes and rhymes š
And yes, it was totally about wait! Like the one today! It’s after 6pm, and the spouse ain’t home.. ggrrrrr.. but my instincts say he will be home in about 15 minutes! I hope I am not wrong š
Thank you for your thoughtful comments here, Lisa… a very happy weekend to you!!!
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This torch lit in my core
I let its embers burn
A click and then a turn
And you walk in through that door…
graceful poem,
aptly played, love the rhymes.
š
heheh…thanks Jingle! Waiting for hubby to get back from work makes me think up stuff! š
Glad you enjoyed the read…
Rallying Rocks!! And so do you! š
Hugs n kisses..
your participation always make the sky full of sunshine and happiness..
Thanks for the consistency and lovely talent shared here.
love your work as always,
Cheers!
oh gee… thank you so much Jingle! All I can say is, I love participating in the rally! So much to see/read/enjoy here!
And to have your own work appreciated by kind people and lovely poets such as you you – PRICELESS!
Happy Weekend and Happy Rallying!! š
I have one question to you, Kavita: WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GREAT POET?
I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE YOUR POEMS! š Oh my gosh, I can’t think of any words… I’m just your number one fan! Again, you inspired me by this!
You rock! š
oh my god, Inelle!! I am totally totally totally flattered! Do you see a teeny person sitting on that cloud up there? Well.. that’s me!! Flying high, thanks to you! š phheeww..what can I say?!?! I am absolutely THRILLED that you like my work… (blushing) And I sincerely hope I can continue to entertain you…
THANK YOU (a million times over) for your kindest words for me, dear friend… Really, I am beaming and swelling with pride!!! THANKOOOOO
And a very happy weekend to you!! Looking forward to your participation in the Monday Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry.. it will be up soon…
LOVIES to you!!! š
Enjoyed this sweet and gentle poem…..loved the happy ending. š
hehe.. you are so kind to me, Charles… and I thank you for that!
This poem was a result of that wait for hubby to get back from work… and interestingly, as soon as I finished writing the poem, he rang the doorbell! Hmmm.. so it’s kinda special! Apparently, I dp have so instincts myself.. š
Glad you enjoyed the read, my friend…
A very happy weekend to you!
Thoughtful. Emotional. Longing. Great job!
Thank you, my friend… that longing is just too much! But the fulfillment on seeing his face as he comes in thru’ the door – WOW! š
Glad you liked this one…
Have a great weekend!!
Ah, the anticipation! The happy ending is so you– nicely written!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
heheheh… I am getting so predictable now…ain’t I ?! š
Glad you liked this one, M… thank you… your sweet comments are cherished!
Hope you have a gorgeous weekend..
I like the way you ended this, the last line seemed to change the direction and complete the poem all at the same time.
hehe.. thanks Cindy.. it was how it happened too… I mean I kept fretting over when hubby will get home… but after some time, my heart just asked me to shut up and be still..and as soon as I was done with this poem, he rang the doorbell! It was quite spooky actually.. like as if he knew!! š
Glad you enjoyed the read, sweetie..
Have a beautiful weekend!! xoxox
I like how all of your senses at once were highlighted but the sixth sense was the one that told you the most…awesome š
YOU NAILED IT!! That was exactly how it was!!! Thank you, my friend.. and I am so glad you interpreted the poem the way you did… means a lot to me!!
My 6th sixth is telling me you are gonna have a fantastic weekend!!
So, enjoy!! š xoxoxox
I saw “embers” burst into a dancing flame when the door opened!
Woohoo for people walking in…..and yea, the picture does wll for the lines.
hahahah…well said, Dennis!! It was just that for hubby when walked in ! š I think I must have jumped on him!! hehehe
Glad you liked the poem-pic combo! It probably took me a coupla hours to find the “perfect” picture! But it was worth the while! š
Have a super weekend, my friend! xoxoxoxo
Imagery + words = delight š
Gee..thanks Dasuntoucha… glad you enjoyed this one! š
Happy weekend to you! oxoxox
I agree the ryme scheme is epic
Whoowww.. thanks JP!! Very glad you liked it !!
Have a fantastic weekend!! Cheers.. š xox
You are majestically Glued to him.
Trust me, after posting the Glue when I visited your site, you were truely reflecting my thoughts.
Great art on your part.
hahaha.. oh yes, I am, doctor!
Glad we thought similar stuff.. thanks for the kind words here ..
Hope you are having a super great weekend!
Excellent! So much time spent wondering and worrying and trying to sense things instead of just waiting for the events to unfold.
You can say that again, Teresa! sometimes, it is better to simply take it as it comes, rather than speculating!
Glad we agree on this š Thank you for your kind comments and insights.. they are most appreciated!
Have a great time!! š
Lovely and so true! Image is a perfect fit–well done!
Aww..thank you ds… that image took some hunting! But it was worth the while š
Glad you enjoyed both! Thank youuuu
Have a fun weekend! oxoxox
Kavita..
You are an aswesome writer.. I am impressed totally in this poem.. Rhymming and Emotional…
Happy Rally…
Sweet Dish
–Someone Is Special–
Ohh.. thank you SO MUCH, SiS… your words make me feel very happy..
I am glad you liked this poem… emotions are after all, what make words a poem… thanks for the appreciation!
Now I am off to read your poem for the rally!
Happy Rallying, and Happy Weekend! š
Great job. The words are so evocative and the image matches perfectly. I love the rhyming, too, I wish I could rhyme. Love the poem.
heheh Thank you Liz!! Am honestly very happy you liked the rhymes here.. For some reason, I usually end up with rhymes in my poem.. and then I like them too š Your kind and encouraging words here mean a lot to me… thank you so much!!! š
Have a gorgeous weekend, my sweet friend… (hugs)
The image, the visuals, the entire piece is melodic. Brilliant, honey.
oooohh..thanks you Madison.. so happy you enjoyed the poem :)…
melodic? sing it out… I would love it!
Happy Weekend!! xoxoox
It ends well, Kavita, sometimes trust is the best way.
much love, xxx
And instincts too.. š
Lot to you too sweetie… Home Alone – Par Cindy!
mwahh! oxoxox
Kavita:
It was a lovely lyrical poem, it sort of lingers in the air — all about you — in your thoughts, in your heart, playing, singing , dancing in your head. Delightful touching poem. Nice photo to go with it, I also pictures bubbles, not ordinary bubbles, either,….
Joanny
woohoo…. me likes what you pictures, Joanny! š
Glad you enjoyed this song-like piece… thank you so much for your continued support and love!!!
Much love to you…
Happy Weekend! xoxoox
wow those thoughts … this is sooo wrought with emotion.
Nice my friend
Moon Smiles
You bet! The wait for hubby to return from work.. phew!! Sure brings those thoughts!
Glad you liked the read, sweetie… thank you for your kind thoughts..
Much love.. oxoxoxoxo
And that is what I mean by born to be a poet, you have created the perfect senario…started by being so totally down and as your senses explore, it turned around. You are the princess of rhyme Kavi, you take us on a imagery tour from the very start to the last word of every creation. I just love it so….thanks for always bringing us 6 star poetry, you never ever disappoint in any way or form. The image you chose cannot be more perfect!! I so love what you do and am always in awe, your wordplay amazes me. You Rock girlfriend….and make me so happy in coming here. Lots of love coming your way….can you feel it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx š
6star poetry!! Wooohooo!! Thanks for all the super lovely compliments, my sweet **buttercup** š And now, I am in 7th heaven! š
I am very happy you enjoyed the poem, sweetie! Oh… and the wait for hubby to return from work makes one think up all kindsa stuff.. heheh
And that image here, it took me FOREVER to get the *right* one!:) Glad you liked it too… yaaayyy
Oh yes babes..I felt all the love you sent my way…feeling warm with all the loooove š
Happy Sunday, darling! xooxoxoxo Cya soon!! š
You are such a romantic…he is one lucky fellow to have a poet like you writing these wonderful feelings…I enjoyed the visit, My Friend š
hahahah.. and look who’s speaking of romanticism!! š
well well well… anyone in love is lucky alright! š Am very happy you enjoyed this read… it really was a result of waiting for the spouse to get back from work! grr… š
A very happy weekend to you Tracy! xxx
This torch lit in my core… wow… very emotionl
nice read
i tagged you
http://makeachange1.wordpress.com/2010/09/10/band-wagon-tag-and-three-things-tag-plus-an-award/
Aawwww… you are so sweet, Anks… love ya babes! Thanks for tagging me.. I played it…yipppee!! Twas a lot of fun!
Glad you liked this poem, darling.. waiting for that great husband of mine to get back from work, makes me think up things! heheheh
I hope you are having a GORGEOUS weekend! mwaahhhzzz š
Beautiful poem.. loved the line
I let my senses drain
For sixth to run this show
And now I simply know
That hurt shall not remain
Gee….thank you C!!! That’s EXACTLY how I felt while waiting… phheeww š
Glad you liked the read… Thanks for stopping by!!
Have a great weekend!!
Happy Birthday to your parents,
They are blessed couple,
they must be proud of you..
BEST!
Thanks for checking in.
Awww… thank you sweetie Jin!!
Will definitely convey your wishes to mom/dad on their birthdays.. you are too thoughtful and kind! LOVE YOU LOADS!! xoxoxoxo
nice image K, and u r right.. one does ponder a lot, and look for answers from floor to ceiling, door to window.. I even look from bathroom to kitchen sometimes, who knows, the answer could simply be a bar of chocolate š š
enuf foolin around, your words were well said again.. I think the rally brings out the best in you š slight hint of romance too, or maybe a lot of it.. next time, I’ll ask you to pick the image for a poem maybe.. I’m not that good at image hunting..!
cheers, and have a great weekend š
That bar of chocolate sounds perfect!!
And you have noticed well… I too was beginning to notice that somehow, I end up writing romantic stuff for the Rally.. very interesting!! Let’s see what the next one holds in store š
Image picking is an art!! You really to “feel” it to pick the right one! š Glad you liked this one, Leo…thank you for your sweet words here! I really look forward to your comments!
Have a superb weekend yourself, dear… xoxo
I love the way the picture gives us an inkling of the “I” in the poem. And you have fulfilled the rhymescheme perfectly. The line: “I touched the floor āneath me” might be smoother with the extra syllable of “beneath”, but that is a very minor quibble for an excellent poem.
Ohh…. you think ‘beneath’ would have been better??? Cuz I had initially written that…then read it out aloud, and changed it to’neath… phhheeww
But thank you so much for the constructive feedback and the kind words here! I really appreciate it… I am very glad you liked and enjoyed the poem (and the image)… yes, i looked REAL HARD to find the exact long kinda image… something that “stands” beside the poem! š Glad you noticed it… Thank you once again for everything!!!
I hope you have a wonderful weekend, my friend!! xoxoxox
You are becoming a rhyme specialist these days…LOL…nice one, Kavita. Always good to see were your muse had wondered to…
Cheers!
hehehhe.. “rhyme specialist”!! Me likes that!! Thanks Em!! That’s very generous of you… š
Oh.. our muses takes us to all kinds of places… don’t they!? Glad you enjoyed this one..
I hope you are having a fantastic weekend! oxox
thirller …. thats wht this post is a Thriller….
Cheers!!!
Awww..thanks wiser!! You are too kind š
Cheers to you as well!
O my!!! i can feel the pain through your words.
a beautiful write š
awww.. thanks you H… you are such an empathetic person… how sweet of you!
Glad you liked this one…
Have a beautiful weekend, my dear friend.. xoxoxoox
Your words are always so heartfelt, pure, and beautiful.
I love reading your work!
Cool picture.
Peace,
Gee.. thank you Clayton! It was very kind of you to say that… I am honored and very glad that you like what you see/read here! thanks again!
And have an excellent weekend!!! š xoxox
The picture and poem reflect the time you searched for they are a great match. A poem that does so well reflecting life. The over analyzing brain and the natural instincts. I do say some have such a hard time listening to their instincts and spend all their time in their minds. So sad! Thanks for a wonderful poem to start my day, Kavita. š
Thanks for the thoughtfulness and appreciation, River! The hunt for the perfect image was a real long one š But it was worth it! Glad you liked the image, and the poem!
And you are so right… sometimes, it’s just better to let your instincts tell you the way! Thanks again, R..
Have a lovely weekend! xoxoxooxox
The use of senses and the the ties of emotions with the words and imagery was really constructed well. I love the journey you took us on.
Woohoooo!!! Thank you so much for your super kind words here, tasithoughts! I am truly happy that you liked this poem so much! And I really appreciate your thoughtfulness… thank you!!! š
Have a splendid weekend, my dear friend… xoxoxox
“I tried to smell the air/For traces of your scent”… love this stanza in particular š Really great work!
P.s Thanks for commenting on my poem xx
Aww.. thank you Kiera… I am so glad you liked this one… yaayyy!!
Oh, and visiting and commenting on your blog was entirely my pleasure!
Have a gorgeous weekend..xoxoxoox
Excited for you guys at Jingles – hope it goes well
wishing you all the best!!!
I know how busy you get with a site if I don’t see you as much will ck in to see how you are doing
Moon smiles
Yaaaayyy.. thank you Moon!! This is really sweet of you! And we need all the wishes we can get! š
Oh yea.. it’s gonna get busy playing host! But fun too… I am sure..
Will come running to you and the One Shot gurus for tips and hints… š
THANKS again sweetie….
Much love to you!!! YOU ROCK!!!
Happy Weekend! š
That was such a wonderful gesture, thanks Moon. Much love xx
š totally!!! xoxoxo
Perfect image chosen for this one Kavita š What a great picture huh?
I am also in awe that you always have such great use of ryhme…and youre ideas….WHERE do they come from? I’ve been to Boston too ya know, and I did NOT get the inspiration you seem to have š š
Chloe xx
hahahah…. this idea didn’t come from Boston.. it came from waiting for hubby to get back from work…GRRR!
And the image was a result of a super long hunt on Google images! š But it sure was worth the while.. š
Thank you for your sweetie sweetie words, girlie… glad you enjoyed this read! I sooo look forward to your super cute comments.. they totally cheer me up! THANKOOO
And a very very happy weekend to youuuuu, my hcl li’l green plant!! Fall’s almost here.. please don’t shed! š
I think Google images is one amazing little place to find perfect images…but finding just the right one certainly does take time. You nailed it here Kavita š
I had to laugh at the idea of me shedding….you love the little green icon huh? Maybe I should change it depending on what season it is? Ah, not really too sure about that. But I LOVE Autumn (Fall)……it’s definately my favourite season.
Have a lovely Sunday my friend xx š
You bet! Finding an image that “fits” you poem, is really tough! But this time, it was really worth the time! Glad you liked it, Chloe.. yaaaayyyy!!
Shedding.. heheh… and please don’t bother changing the image.. this green one is PERFECT for your name..remember?! š
I love Fall too!! It’s like the best of all words sorts.. cool, sunny, romantic, yet dark… ALL of that!! š
Happy Sunday to you sweetie.. xxxx
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award notice.
Thanks for the contribution!
Happy Friday!
Yaaaayy…thank you Jin!! That was quick!! You are totally superhuman! š
Hugs to you, my sweetiepie! š
I appreciate the consistent form. Very effective. – bill
Gee..thank you Bill!
I just try… and am glad to know that you enjoy my work…
Have a splendid weekend..
I tried to smell the air
For traces of your scent
To me, no clue it lent
I thought this wasnāt fair
I like it – alot:)
Yaaaaayyy…. thank you so much, laughter!! Glad you liked this one… makes me very happy!!
Have a GREAT weekend! xoxooxox
Good job at composing, especially with all the lovely rhyming, perfect blend with the dark imageries… Love this one, Kavita š
Yeesss!!! That image took me QUITE a while to hunt! But it was worth the while! š Glad you liked it, AND the poem too!!
Thank you so much for all the kind words, Magia!!!
Have a beautiful weekend, my dear friend… much love to you! xoxox
Oh, this is just a darling poem and illustration that perfectly captures the way it feels to wait … and so much in life … first parents coming home from work … then husband and children … very fine work, Kavita!
Happy weekend.
You bet, Jamie!! All those waits… just too much!
I am happy you liked this one, sweetie… this poem was a total result of me waiting for spouse to get home from work.. heheh
Thank you for the kind words and encouragement.. they always give me a push and boost!!!
A very happy weekend to you too, my sweet friend… xoxooxox
Love this one! The ending especially. Awesome as always! You have a beautiful way of making the words flow so well.
hehehe.. thanks DP… as annoying as waiting is, it tends to results in okayish poetry š
Glad you liked this one… How has your weekend been thus far? Mine was lazzzzzyyyy…but have loadsa chores to deal with…grr!!
Enjoy your Sunday girlie..
Waiting…yes it does result in good poetry. But waiting too long is pointless.
We had a long weekend…and the idiot that I am…I didn’t realize it until it was looming right over me. So all my friends went off to other cities for the weekend and I’m stuck at home. I just wandered out alone, and lazed around at home. Shopped a bit too. Mostly boring and lazy though.
Enjoy your Sunday. Finish off your chores and enjoy your weekend! š
hahaha..you are right! Super long waits are boring, annoying and pointless! I know exactly what you mean! Been there..done that.. (sigh)
Oh youuuuuuuu.. how could you NOT realize that it was a long weekend?! duuhhh!!!
But then, sometimes, those wanderings and time-to-self are really enjoyable too … and hey!! Lazing around is AWESOME!! š
My Sunday is gonna be filled with cleaning and chores…YIKES!!! And then, in the evening..wooohooo!! Poetry Potluck!!! Amanda and I will be hosting our first ever poetry potluck on Jingle Poetry!!! Try and visit it (and participate) if you can and feel like.. we would LOVE IT if you do!!! (okay, I didn’t really have the intention of marketing it here.. but ended up doing it anyway!.. Sorryyy) š
HAPPY SUNDAY!!!! Laze around some more… Monday’s just around the corner š
This piece has a wonderful song like quality to it.
Thanks Nessa!! š Nice to see that you enjoyed this piece…
Hope you are having a fabulous weekend! oxoxoox
Lovely and simply superb as always kav.
I’m a fan.
see me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/
cheers
Yaaayyy…glad you enjoyed this this piece, Dakshima… Thank you for your kind words… š Gee… I am flattered!
I hope you are enjoying a lovely Sunday!! š xoxoxox
Sweet pensiveness in this poem. Glad it ended happily for the one who waits! Wish that it could always be so. Nice picture to accompany as well. š
Oh… I am thankful that it ended the way it did, Christine.. In fact, my hubby actually rang the doorbell minutes after I got done with this poem.. phheww!! Neat eh?! š
Glad you enjoyed the read, sweetheart… and thank you so much for your empathetic and kind words… That really means a lot to me!!
A Very Happy Sunday to you!!! xoxoxox
Fascinating stuff…Piercing observation and vivid imagery with a palpable tinge of intense purple intuition.. Loved it..
“I touched the floor āneath me
Hoped for your footsteps near
These tiles evoked a fear
And I wished I could flee”
This is simply fascinating stuff..
Ooooohh… so glad you saw it that way, Sayan!! THANK YOU!!! Sometimes, one tries real hard with the 5 sense, and doesn’t get anywhere… and eventually it’s that 6th sense/instincts that kinda”tell” you how to proceed…
Following the heart is indeed okay at times I guess š
Glad you enjoyed the read…
Happy Sunday!! xoxox
thoughtfull n meaning full poem kavitaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
thank you Ridaaa!! š I was a result of me waiting for hubby to get home… š
So happy you liked it!!!
Oh… and do make time to visit Jingle Poetry tomorrow.. Amanda and I will put up our first Poetry Potluck !!! We would love it if you visit and participate there (if you feel like)… Check it out tomorrow! š
Meanwhile, Happy Sunday!! xxx
This torch lit in my core
I let its embers burn
A click and then a turn
And you walk in through that door
beautiful as always kavita….the rhymes sounded so cute when i was reading the poem in my head.
Enjoy your Sunday!!
Aww…thank you Asmita!! I had just opened your blog to check, and here you are!! š
So glad you enjoyed this one sweetie.. this poem was a result of waiting for hubby to get back from work.. š So…thanks a bunch for your kind words..
Have a lovely Sunday yourself, girlie… and do not forget to visit the Jingle Poetry page tomorrow! Amanda (buttercup) and I will be hosting a poetry potluck there..and we would for you to visit and participate too! Do try to, if possible… the registration link will be open for about 48 hours…so there;s plenty of time š
ENJOY!!! Looking forward to reading your poem now… xxoxoxox
you gave that photograph splendid words. just fabulous.
your poems are beautiful and elegant.
Aaaaww…thank you for noticing the words, Trisha.. they were soooo tiny š The flower so beautiful that I didn’t feel like overshadowing that with my words there… Glad you liked it all… THANK YOUUUUU!!!
Very touching poetry. The sense of missing love is evident throughout. In every element your words were searching for someone. Well narrated .Hope you get it back oneday. Keep writing. š
Aww.. glad you liked the poem, Nithin… and thank you for your kind and empathetic words here…
This poem was a result of my wait for my hubby to get back from evening.. so , I got back my love that same evening š
But it was soo sweet of you to say the lovely words that you wrote here… thanks again!!
Have a splendid Sunday, my friend! And do take time to visit Jingle Poetry on Sunday, for the Poetry Potluck!
an excellent contribution to the poets rally! thanks for sharing, I loved the rhyme!
here’s mine:
http://lifeloveandmisery.wordpress.com/2010/09/12/collapse/
Oh.. thank you so much for the kind words of appreciation, dc.. I am really glad you enjoyed the read…
Am off to read yours now š Thanks for the link…
Have a great week!
Beautiful and amazing. I love the rhythm.
My Poets Rally Poem: http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/08/05/falling-august-5-2010/
Gee… Thank you for the kind words here, “child”.. glad you liked the poem… it means a lot to me!
I’ll be reading your poem in just a bit!!
Hope you are having a wonderful week… xoxox
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You really did take me on a ride but it was a nice one š
http://hindawy.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/a-better-me-for-you/
Aww…thank you Yasser.. glad you enjoyed this one… š
I am off to read your poem now… have a great day!
What a superb and lovely poem.
I enjoyed the evocative imagery that you conveyed through your words.
thank you,
Angela
http://angelacohan321.wordpress.com
Aww… thank you so much, Angela… I am so happy you liked this one… yaaayyy! And you are most welcome, sweetie.. writing this one was entirely my pleasure.. š
Have a lovely day!! xoxoxox
Wow! I felt like I was there. This morning we have the first autumn rain where I am and this poem was a perfect read. Thank you very much!
Oooooohhh.. I am so happy that my poem seemed to be in agreement with your mood, my friend… yaaaaaayyyyy
And am super glad that you liked it so much! Thanks for your kind words of appreciation here…
Sorry about the extremely delayed reply though… I was kinda caught up at home (with stuff and people).. š¦
Have a great weekend, my friend…
Enjoyed the poem a lot, the flow was fast and it was fun to read thanks
Aww..glad you enjoyed it, Luisy.. it was a result of waiting for the hubby to get back from work š
Thank you so much for your kind words here, my friend..
Have a great weekend…
xoxox