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With a pounding heart
And a racing pulse
In whole and in part
This sheer impulse
While unto you I dart
In the core of your palm
Ocean of your eyes
I sense a floating calm
As I release sighs
Like rendition of a psalm
In a tight embrace
As you are holding me
I give in with grace
Moon in day I see
Shooting stars I trace
For now be it rain
Or a winter cold
I can feel no pain
And they have no hold
Over my soul’s terrain
Into one we merge
Together in this bliss
As tidal waves emerge
With a gentle kiss
A lonely past we purge
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
Somebody’s feeling all lovey-dovey… and it’s contageous! Nice work! 🙂
heheh.. As long as it is the Love contagion, it’s alright I guess…
Glad you liked this one 🙂 I LOVED writing it while watching my husband’s face 🙂
Thank you for your kind comment… yours is the first for this poem, and I am all smiles!! 😀
Have an absolutely superb week/weekend, Eric!!
Oh! And I forgot… YAHTZEE!
(I don’t get 1st post that often!)
heheh.. and now your enthusiasm’s getting contagious 🙂
Lovely poem…
Thank you so much, Jack… really glad you liked this one…
Hope you are having a great week, my friend!
A very romantic poem Kavita…how well it shows the love that you feel in your relationship. 🙂
Oh… Thank you Charles!!! “knock on wood”! 🙂
I am a hopeless sappy romantic… but then I love being so! 🙂 And now I am waiting for him to get back from work… grrr…
Have a wonderful Thursday, my friend.. weekend’s just around the corner 🙂
I love that you’ve used the term “soul’s terrain”, Kavita. That’s exactly how I’ve always perceived the soul, like an emotional and metaphysical landscape that resides inside. I love the spiritual undertones of this. Beautiful. 🙂
That’s awesome, Tony! Glad we think alike… That soul is indeed a landscape, with sooo many features to it..
Am so happy you liked this poem, Tony.. thank youuuu!!! Glad you saw beyond the love and mush 🙂
Happy Weekend!!!!! 😀
In whole and in part – sweet words, showing how we love certain individual parts or aspects, as well as the whole person – nicely put. As the others said, Kavita, you sound happy in love.
That’s so true, Cindy.. we love people for what we like in them, and then we love them for who they are… part and whole!
And yes, love is wonderful… interestingly, I wrote this when he was asleep.. 🙂
So glad you enjoyed the read, my friend… Thank you for your kindness… your comments are treasured!!!
Have a very happy weekend!
Tu cheej badi hai mast mast…
You thing are too good too good
LOVED that word-to-word translation!!
Nahi mujhpe koi zor zor… 🙂
Not on me any pressure pressure…hahahah.. this sounds WORSE!!! 🙂
MWAH!
sighs like rendition of a psalm….tight. love it…hope hubby gets home soon…smiles.
hehehe.. guess what Brian! Hubby called, asking me to come to TimeSq… So I had go to “meet him” .. but, no matter! Me loves either way! 🙂
Glad you liked the poem, B… thank youuu!!!
Have a splendid bright weekend!! (hugs)
If ever there are 2 people that love one another so much, it’s you!! I have witnessed that and think it is the most beautiful thing ever…and now I shall call you the Princess of Romance…oh Kavita, this is just so wonderful…your words are like honey to my ears. Your love for Srini shines so brightly, the way you await him every day…makes me long for a love like that. I adore the image you have chosen, it compliments your passionate words so very much. B R I L L I A N T partner 🙂 🙂 🙂 xx Much love to you both xx
(blush blush) Thank you, my buttery buttercup 🙂 You have said something that sounded like music to my ears (eyes)!! As for Srini… he has gotten into the habit of making me wait for him!! You should see how I much I have to wait for him outside his office!!!!! Grrrr… heheheh But it’s worth it ofcourse! 🙂 Cuz then seeing him run towards that glass door.. and all the irritation melts.. 🙂 Phhewww.. I knowww.. SAPPY!! But come on… at some point, we all are!! So why bother?! 🙂
I am just happy happy happy you liked this lovey dovey poem… it meant a lot to me! And you liking it just adds to the glory! Thank you, my sweetie… I showed your comment to Srini on my iPhone (we were roaming the NY streets), and he was all smiles when he read it! He says Thank You to you too! 🙂
I am grabbing all those beautiful wishes you have sent us!! 🙂
And now, sending you cartons packed with love and hugs 🙂 open them with care.. 😉 mwahhzz
Nothing wrong with being a hopeless romantic, even a sappy one 😉 – love-ly words and an awesomely romantic pic to go with them.
hehehe.. thank you GospelWriter… there is nothing wrong with being a sappy romantic AT ALL! 🙂 I mean .. who isn’t?! Deep within, we all are..
I am verrry happy you liked this love poem… thank you for the sweet words…
Have a fantastic weekend!!!! (hugs)
It is a precious love you express – glad you have found that in real life
mmm priceless
Moon love
Priceless indeed, Moon!! Thanks for the beautiful wishes… that was a lovely gesture…
I am glad you liked this poem, my dear sweetie..
Have a gooorgeous weekend!!
Love in verses to the Moon 🙂
Your last stanza is unbelievably well written. I love the imagery of two becoming one with the tidal wave. Absolutely outstanding!!! Also, your whole poem itself is excellent. Really romantic 🙂
Wooohooo.. thank you Mark… yea, a huge wave of romance came and swept me with it.. and the result, this poem! 🙂
I ma very happy to see you liked it so much.. thank you once again!!! Your comment meant a GREAT DEAL to me, my friend…
I hope you have a super fantastic weekend!! 😀
Very romantic 🙂
I knoooowww… a wave of romance swept over me at the time 🙂 I’m glad it did 🙂
Happy you liked it, C
Have a superb weekend!
Enjoyed it 🙂 especially the last verse… Have a great weekend Kavs 🙂 full of love and beautiful times
hehehe.. thank you Navdib.. I’m very very glad you liked the read.. I suppose one can find inspiration all over!! 🙂 Thanks for the lovely wishes..
Have an awesome weekend yourself, N 🙂
divine……the serene volcano explodes into happiness…..delight to absorb poem in my being…
always worth time….invest time as wise…..vest happiness as otherwise……
love all….
Thank you Ram… it’s a great pleasure to know that you enjoyed reading this poem…
Love is divine indeed! Thank you for your beautiful and inspiring comments… I always look forward to them..
Have a wonderful weekend, my dear friend..
romantic n lovely poem indeedddddddd
(blushing and blinking)… thankooo
:*)
And they say I”M a romance poet…You take the cake, Kavita…every stanza speaks Love, and Love well written. This is yummy stuff for this old romantic. 🙂 Great stuff!
Awww… please Tracy!! That cake is shared by many of us here! 🙂 Thank you for your sweeeeet words… (fluttering my lashes)
Am really glad you enjoyed this piece… well, I kinda thought you would 😉 After I wrote it, and was rereading it, I thought of you, and your possible reaction on this, and just smiled to myself.. In fact I remember my hubby too, that you of all the people might REALLY enjoy this one.. heheheh.. And I am very happy that I was right! 😀
HAPPY LOVEY DOVEY WEEKEND, T!!!!
wow!!! a really wonderful poem 🙂
lovely picture too 🙂
🙂 Thank you Harshika… Glaaaaad you liked it..
Full of mush.. but never mind.. we are all romantics.. we understand.. no? 😉
Happy weekend to you, girlie.. hugs
I felt shivers run down my spine as I read it…it is so beautifully written! Love the flow of words and the passion. Great poem Kavita! Your poetry seems to just be getting better and better. This was one of the most beautiful romantic poems I’ve come across. Thank you for sharing!
Oh my my! That’s too big a compliment, DP.. HEAVY!! And I am kinda featherweight… 🙂 Thank You so much dearie… Me grinning ear to ear! 🙂
I am extremely happy that you enjoyed this one… I am quite a romantic, but not all my poems reflect that (thank god! :))
Sharing this was my pleasure though… my hubby read n left a stoooopid comment on this… heheh .. how I LOVE embarrassing him!
Hope you are having a beautiful weekend, DP… love ya!!
hugs..
Hehe…your poor hubby 😛 but I’m sure he must’ve loved to see the sentiment 😀
Have a wonderful weekend yourself!
oh yea.. he read this one, gave me a loooong look, shook his head, and smiled.. hehhehe
ENJOYYY!! 😀
Nice pattern of rhymes in this one, Kavita. The emotion comes through well too.
YESSSS!!! Somebody spoke about the rhyme pattern.. thank you so much Jess… glad you liked it, and the poem as well..
Having a great weekend I hope? 🙂 Enjoy..
LOVEly poem… Its poem by a person drowned in love… So mu h passion..so much trust.. Incredible…:)
Drowned!! Really.. and I don’t even know to swim 🙂
Glad you liked it sweetie.. I am pretty sure you feel the same yourself.. (sigh)…we romantics can’t help it!! 🙂
HAPPY WEEKEND!!!
Hey Kavita! Magically romantic lines with the perfect picture for them. Have a nice weekend 🙂
Thank you Adam.. the picture was a REAL find.. thanks to photobucket.com..
Glad you enjoyed the poem-picture combo 🙂
Have a great weekend, my friend… (gee, did that rhyme too??? :))
Mm, I’m feeling it, very nicely done Kavita! A romantic piece, not so unlike a whirlwind of loveyness as it nails us. Glad someone’s found such a love to have in life 🙂
A happy Friday to you–and a wonderful weekend ahead!
Ooohhh… love the word you used – ‘loveyness’! Why don’t they have these beautiful words in the dictionary?! It would’ve made life easier 🙂 Well, it’s added to mine now!! Thank you so much for the sweet and kind words, Chris.. I really appreciate it! And so does my hubby 🙂
A veeeery happy Friday to you as well… and an AWESOME weekend too!!! hugs..
You write so beautifully of love, my friend, clearly you are one of its favorite children. A beautiful ode!
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🙂 loved the way you said it, Marilynn – ‘one of its favorite children’… well, thank you so much!!! Yes, I truly feel blessed 🙂
I am very happy you liked and enjoyed this ode to love… thanks again, my dear…
Have a gorgeous weekend… many hugs!
This is a truly fantastic poem.
So beautifully said
Thanks a bunch, K !!! Your kind words go a looooooong way in giving me a boost!
Have a fabulous weekend, my friend..
Lovely post Kavita.. nice one… 🙂
heheh.. thanks, Sayan.. it was mushy as hell! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed the read nonetheless!
A very happy weekend to you!!! 😀
Wonderful and lovely :3
Gee.. thank you Christine.. glad you liked this piece.. 🙂
Happy Weekend!
lovely poem,
your words sound like music,
romantic and magical…
🙂
Thank you, Ji… and your words are like milk chocolate … which i happen to LOVE! 🙂
I am so glad you enjoyed this piece…
HAPPY WEEKEND, my dear friend!!!
sorry,
I forgot to visit yesterday….
Did not mean it.
Happy Friday!
Cheers!
heeeyyy…relax, Jingle… you can visit any time you like… I am never offended if you are “late” in visiting.. you are never late in anything! Trust me when I say that 🙂
And please, no sorries… gee… you rock, girl!!!
A very HAPPY FRIDAY to you toooo!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/the-shower-of-september-awards-enjoy/
please pick 3 or 4 from my post and share each with 1 to 5 friends…
Whoa!! That’s really a shower!! Getting drenched already!
Thank you Jingle!
Sorry about the VERY delayed reply and acceptance… was out of town for the weekend… and now, have LOADS of comments to write/reply to… fun fun..
And then Awards too!! 😀
Love ya girlie!
Happy Tuesday!
This is soooo amazing! It almost made me cry…
Aww… cry? why???????
Enjoy the love… love of nature, self, that someone special… cherish it all! 🙂
Thanks for the sweeet words, Inelle… they meant a great deal!!!
Have a lovely weekend, my dear friend… many loving hugs to you!!!
Kavita! I can dig it. This is so magical and full of emotion with a certain calm to it. I LOVE IT!!! This is just so beautiful, I mean it really touched me. Fabulous!
Gee… THANK YOU Tekia!! I know I am sooooo late in replying.. Sorry about the delay ! But a few not-at-home days can bring so much pending stuff 🙂
I am very happy you liked this poem so much, and that it touched your heart so softly! Thanks again… your words made me feel very nice..
Hope you had a lovely weekend.. now have a fantastic week ahead! (hugs)
loved it Kav,…. this work speaks to me like no other…. an amazing writer you are….!!!!
Hurraaaayyy! Love is quite amazing..ain’t it? Feels like magic and all … I am glad you liked this one, 700.. thanks for the kind words… meant a lot to me!
The poem is kinda special to me as well.. Hubby deserves it! 🙂
Hope you had a terrific weekend.. Enjoy a great time ahead!
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Oh my my ! I am really flattered! Thanks, 700!! (blushing)
You are a wonderful wordsmith alright!
cheers & have a nice weekend
Suja
hehehe… thank you darling Suja!! And you say the most amazing things to me… Love ya for that!!
Glad you liked this one…
Have a great week ahead, my friend… (many hugs)
P.S: Sorry about the really delayed reply.. was out of town for a couple of days.. and replying via that iPhone is not so easy after all 😦
Beautifully written … I know your soulmate will appreciate it. Like much.
You know at first I just could not take from eyes for the photograph. Lovely.
Thanks for a wonderful post, Kavita.
Aww… he does appreciate it too, Jamie… Thank you so much for your kind words..
The photograph was a real FIND at photobucket.. took some hunting though 🙂 But it was really worth the while!
So glad you liked this one, J!! Yaaayyyy
Well written poem. Enjoyed reading it. Happy Weekend to you.
Ge.. thank you so much, my friend… felt special writing this one too! 🙂
Hope you had a great weekend yourself!
enjoy a gorgeous week ahead!
P.S: Sorry about the delayed reply.. was out of town for the long weekend…
As a fellow hopeless romantic thins touched my heart Kavita! It was passionate and beautiful!
“Into one we merge
Together in this bliss
As tidal waves emerge
With a gentle kiss
A lonely past we purge”
WOW! This is so amazing my friend… 🙂
WOOHOO!! Thanks Lua!! Cheers to us romantics!! 😀
Am sooo happy you liked and enjoyed this one, sweetie… Love really can get mushy.. can it not? I guess it’s okay 🙂 That’s what makes us us
Have a great week ahead, my hopelessly romantic friend… (many hugs to you) 🙂
P.S: Sorry about the delayed reply.. was out of town for the long weekend… And now, sitting and reply to the oodles of love sent to me!!
Beautiful – the image, YOUR imagery, the rhyming pattern, the obvious great love you share with your husband. A fine poem Kavita 😀
Hope you’re weekend is going well (oh, and how DO you cope with so many comments?? You must type at 700wpm!!)
Chloe xx
Ooohhh… a qradruple THANK YOU, Chloe! 🙂 Your lovely comments totally cheer me up! I was just getting a bit tired replying… but now I am re-energized!! Thanks!! This was like a cuppa nice HOT tea! Aaaahhhh
And trust me, I cannot type at 700wpm ;).. Maybe a tenth of that… actually, I have no idea .. heheheh
How are you holding up?? Mickey around?? Hi to Stormy too.. 🙂
Miss Romance 😀 amazing emotion in this Kavi.. btw, dedicated to whom? 😉
Aww…thanks Leo! 🙂 This one’s dedicated to one and only hubby (else he’ll GLARE at me.. :))! heheheh
Hope you enjoyed the read..
Happy Tuesday!
love really is a serene volcano. 🙂
fabulous.
Aww… indeed it is 🙂
So glad you liked this one, Trisha… Thank you!!!
Have a lovely weekend! xoxoxoox