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Artist and his work, Feelings of the girl in a painting, Painting, Paper desire, Relationship between art and artist, Sensuality unquenched, Sketch, Thursday Poets Rally Week 26, Unfulfilled, Unreal, Work of art
He tousled my long flowing hair
And then played with a strand
I sensed a start to this affair
‘Twas Heaven here, on land
I was reborn…
He ran his hand over my brow
To his warm touch, I froze
My eyes saw his desire grow
I simpered and went rose
I was shy…
His fingers traced along my lips
My mind went weak and light
I wanted to taste him in sips
And sing in wild delight
I was ecstatic…
He let some water droplets fall
Placed some on my shoulder
I stood beneath the waterfall
Behind a strong boulder
I was soaked…
He looked at me, his work of art
And wished I were alive
Felt no beat in my paper heart
On his easel, I would thrive
I was… I just was…
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
Erotic, Romantic, Delicate, and Artistic. Even in my own works I put so much of myself into them. Paintings are not so different. Each stroke of a brush so precise to create the beauty of the painter’s eye. And you have captured this beauty so well. Personifying the girl into a lover who lives in their world, a world he made for her. It was really beautiful.
Oh…wowww!!! This coming from an artist such as you, I am flattered!!! Thank you sooo much for your kindest words, girl…. I am very glad you enjoyed this poem… yes, the idea here was indeed to capture the feelings of the artist’s work… I am truly happy you saw that…
Have a beautiful weekend!! (much love to you :))
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Thank you for linking me in, Ji… yaaayyyy 🙂
u r the art
with paper heart,
but u make him love
beyond all above….
beautiful,
very intense, the ending is magical!
😉
Whoaaa!!! That was SOMEthing!!! Thank you thank you thank you, Jingle…you are too kind…
I am extremely happy that you liked this poem…
Have a GORGEOUS weekend! (much love.. :))
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AN AWARD FOR YOU,
PLEASE HELP VISIT TWO OTHER POETS IN THE BOTTOM LIST,
HAPPY FRIDAY!
😉
OH WOWWW!!! Thank you so much, Jingle!!! What a start to Saturday!! AWESOME!
Oh yes… I dropped by Fiveloaf’s and Meghna’s blogs as well… I am happy to see Fiveloaf post a poem! 🙂 And Meg just rocks!! 🙂 Had wished her too…
Thanks for reminding, Ji…you are too cool!!!
Very intimate poem. Amazing use of repetition with the ‘I was…’ lines, perfect pace to this piece as well. You truly are a talented writer my friend. And just an fyi, I will be posting what I wrote while listening to that song. It was an interesting challenge, not the best poem I’ve ever written, but something different. All the best 🙂
First of all, thank you (a 1000 times over) for your kind words and encouragement, Mark… I really appreciate your comments!!! The repetition that you mentioned, was a last minute touch that I gave… cuz I felt that the poem was lacking something… I am sooo glad you liked this in the poem!!!
I am toooo happy to see that you too took up the free flow challenge… and am eager to read what you came up with!! I am pretty sure that it’s awesome, no matter what you say! I am glad you enjoyed the challenged!!! 😀
Thanks for your wishes, and have a wonderful weekend! 🙂
your link is placed in,
thanks for the participation!
😉
Thanks, Ji!!
You are so quick in your response.. and I am so lazy in seeing it… 🙂
Well, actually I was visiting other poets .. heheeh
See you sooooon.. (much love.. )
Tooooo !@$%#$%$# good. I was carried away
Thanks hubby!!! You are my artist, and I am your painting… Only, in our case, you breathed life into me … 😉
Kavita, this one spoke to me personally…I have just started painting and the way you have created the scene, was touching…you have given life to her in the painting. It is so true because every creation (even our poems) becomes almost alive in our mind! When I started reading this, I was actually thinking it is a love poem between your husband and you (the long flowing hair!!)…surprise surprise…you have come up with something so special and unique, I am in awe of your creativty and artist potential!! This is a beautiful work of art by your mind and “pen” and I absolutely love it…Kudo’s girl, you leave me speechless every time. Happy Rally my friend, this one’s going to flyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!! Hugssssss xxxx
Woohooo!!! You have left me speechless with your comment, Amanda… I am honored, flattered, and thoroughly elated! Thank you soo oooo oooo much for your torrents of kindness on me… phheewww !! (blushing)
My husband read your comment (which he always does), and said that you say things he wishes he had said! hehehehhe
Now, for the facts! I cannot paint for the life of me!!! I wish I could!! Grrr… But I am extremely happy to see that my poem spoke to a lovely artist as yourself.. believe me, I am very happy!
You know what.. I was finding it very difficult to find a picture that fit my poem… and for some time, I really thinking of asking you to send me one of your amazing pictures of artwork.. I was very sure that you would be able to give me EXACTLY what I am looking for.. but then I found this, and was kinda satisfied with too… But I am going to ask you for one some other time! I am very sure about that! It would be an honor to have your art in my poem… I hope you wouldn’t mind that..
Once again, thank you so much, my sweet friend.. you made me teary and HAPPPYYYYY 😀
HAVE A LOVELY WEEKEND!!!! muahhhzzz and huggzzzz
Happy RALLYING!!! 🙂
I would be honored if you did ask me and it will be such a pleasure. I told you this would fly!!! See what I mean!!! Whoooohoooo!! You Rock girlfriend xx Hugs x
Yaaaayyyy … be prepared to expect a request from me sometime soon then…:)
LOVE YOUUUUU!!! You made my day / evening / night by saying this!!!
OXOXOXOX
This was beautiful, Kavita. Your words are like magic.
Awww…thank you soo sooo much!! I am flattered! I am very pleased to see that you enjoyed this one…
Have a lovely weekend!!! (many hugs) 🙂
Hark! Can it possibly be that I’m the first to post here? YAY! 😀
I loved this, Kavita. As an artist, I often wonder about the inner emotional lives and thoughts of my creations. I’m not always the kindest soul towards them, something that I ought to be mindful of more often.
heheheh… you are tooooo sweet, Tony!! When I read the first line of your comment, I really WISHED I could change the timestamp on your comment, so that you could “be” the first!! 🙂 In fact I am still gonna try doing that! 😉
Thank you so much, my dear dear friend… Your comments make me grin real wide!! Coming from an artist such as you, this comment means a lot to me! I am super excited that you felt the same as I did, about the feelings and emotions of the creation…
Thanks once again…
Have the best possible weekend!! 😀 (many hugs to you)
Or perhaps I’m not the first. I see Jingle and Buttercup may have beaten me to the punch. Gaaa-aaahhh! My nemeses! I shake an impotent fist at your breathtaking quickness! 😛
Awwww… don’t worry, Tony.. I am gonna be writing many more poems (hopefully).. so I am pretty sure you will be the first to comment on many of those 😀
“impotent fist”!! LOL… YOU ROCK, dude!!! (loadsa love just for you) 🙂
Wink wink Tony….lalalalalala xxx
You naughty girl!! hehehe 🙂
Y’all are tooo goood!!
kavita.. this is too, too, too passionately romantic..!!! Me totally loved it 😀 . I don’t know how many times I’ll be reading it 😉 Too beautiful..!! ~ hugsss 😀
oooooooohhh… you bet it was romantic! Hope not too hyper though.. 🙂
But I am very glad you enjoooooyed it, Ilakya… and thank you SO MUCH for your unending kindness and appreciation for my work… thank you thank you thank you…
Luv ya girl!!! Loadsa hugs to you!!! mwahhzz
Very good Kavita, I wasn’t expecting that end 🙂
(smiles)…Glad you liked the poem, Cindy… and thanks for your kind words…
Hmm… I really wanted to build it up towards the end, and then reveal the “painted truth” 🙂
Have a lovely weekend.. (love)
This is my first time I stop here, one world to say about you: Fantastic!
Keep going on!
WOWWW!! Thanks for visiting.. and for your very kind words!! I am thrilled that you liked this poem… once again, my heartfelt thanks…
Have a fantastic weekend!!! 🙂 (much love to you.. )
Beautiful! wasn’t expecting the ending! 🙂
hehehhe… I deliberately kept it that way 😉 So glad you enjoyed the read!!! Thank you so much for the visit, and your kind words..
Have a fantabulous weekend!!! 😀 (many hugs)
I loved this one…very passionate! But then, you never disappoint when I’m looking for some awesome poetry 🙂
Woohoo… thanks for this lovely compliment!!! I’m thrilled you enjoyed this poem… Yaaaayyyy 😀
Have a loooovely weekend, my friend… (many hugs to you)
The art of this painting and poem has something to do with these lines:-
Yes you did it again
“Writing” it is a gain
Go through the latest
You will find the best
Created it when in thought
writing reply has it brought
It is partly about my wife
Enjoying togeather in life
We do it for a service and pleasure
It can be done at our will n leasure
Enjoy the great art
Since u gave a start
Marvelous is the job
So is universal throab
See what by you has been done
A kid changed to surgeon undone
http://drmadangoyal.wordpress.com/2010/08/12/writing-2/
I am moved by your words, Doctor!! Thanks for this amazing comment! I take it as a compliment… your words are much appreciated!
Have a great weekend!!
Peace and Love…
Today, a poem, a small poem,
That poem spoke to me,
Just a few words, few words,
But all that it said, I did see.
The words it chose, echoed,
Resonated through my heart,
It made me want more of it,
Made me read again, the art.
Yet it ended, it just had to,
I wish it continued on and on,
But it was imprinted on easel,
It ended, that beautiful song.
Kavita, I’m just touched.. moved by this poem.. Thanks..!
Ohhhh…that was so sweet of you Leo… I am totally awestruck by this gesture of yours! Thank you so much… I am really flattered!
And I am so very happy that you enjoyed this poem…
It is something I have been wanting to write for a while now.. I am no artist/painter.. but I kinda empathize with the characters IN the painteings… I felt like I HAD to dedicate one to them… And so I am very glad you liked this… Thanks again, dear friend.. (blush blush)
Have a fabulous weekend! (much love to you) 🙂
This is a great piece with a really unexpected conclusion.
hah! Glad you enjoyed the twist towards the end.. the build up was very intentional 🙂
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation, Gwei… They mean a ton to me!!!
Have an awesome weekend! 🙂
Romantic, intimate, you bring out so much feeling in your poem! You paint a fantastic picture with your words. Great one!
Oh wow!! Whenever I look at a painting (definitely not by me! For I CANNOT paint), I am always wondering about the characters in it, their personalities, feelings.. and I really felt like brining that out for once! Glad you liked my effort, DP… Thank you so much for the appreciation.. Means a lot to me!
Have a gorgeous weekend, girlie! 🙂 (many hugs to you)
Oh, this is passionate and romantic. The imagery you invoked was so sensual and intimate, and I love the unexpected twist in the end. Well written!
🙂 Thanks a bunch for your compliments!!! Yes, the idea was to build up a sensual image, and then reveal the paper truth of it all…
I am very glad you enjoyed this one..
Have a fabulous weekend, my friend 🙂
That was magical Kavita! So innocent and sincere, your words are beautiful my friend 🙂
Woooowww… thank you so much for your lovely words for me, Lua…. I am very very VERY happy to see you liked this one…
I cannot paint for nuts!! But for some reason, I always feel for the painting/sketch… how do they feel being trapped in that sheet/canvass? So I simply had to write it down… So glad you enjoyed it…
Have a gorgeous weekend!!! (much love) 🙂
wow!!!1
this is so AWESOME man!!!! 😀
and the pic is too good man!!! =)
ur every line just captured me… WOOOOOOOHOOO 😀
heheheh…thankoooo H!!! Your comments always leave me grinning wide! You rock!
Glad you enjoyed it all….
Happy Weekend! (looove):)
very erotic and sensuous, its a great play of words & imageries… i love this, great job, Kavita 🙂 and the ending is so unexpected… you are truly an artist 🙂
Awww…that’s a huge compliment, Imagina!!! I am delighted!!! 😀 Thank you so so so much! I cannot paint (sigh) at all!!! But I really felt like capturing the feelings of a painting, in words… I am VERY HAPPY that you liked this one… yaaayyyy
Thanks once again!
And have a gorgeous weekend, my dear friend… (much love to you.. )
Nice, I am really starting like yr poetry my friend… keep writing…
Warmest Salad
Luke
Whoooaa!! Thanks a ton, Luke!! That’s a mega compliment!!! I am very glad you enjoy my writes… Hope I continue to entertain you with my poems…
Have a great weekend!!!
Much love..
~Kavita
That poem was like flash fiction…only like a thousand times better!
So sensual. Personal. Heartbreaking. Intimate. It was…a read that will change my life. I didn’t believe in love this morning. Now, I do.
Thank you.
OH WOWWW!!! That was huge torrent of praise, RD!!! Thanks a ton!! Phhheeww.. What can I say?!! I am so so SO damn glad that you liked this one, and that it changed your perspective on a thing or two! Really!! I mean… what more can a writer/poet ask for!??!?! Once again, my sincerest thanks for stopping by, and for saying something that REALLY absolutely humbled me… (stunned expression on face)
Have a FANTABULOUS weekend!
And my best wishes with your writing!!! I need to visit Writing Sluts…sounds very exciting! Maybe it I should try my prose ramblings there 🙂
Much love to you, my friend… 🙂
Awesome Kav. really like the alternating rhythm and the unexpected ending. Great, great work again. take care, have a great weekend.
Gee…. thank you so much, 700!!! I am very pleased to see you enjoyed the style employed in this poem… your comments are invaluable to me!!!
Thanks once again for the kind words and wishes…
Have a super duper weekend!!! 🙂
Yup, I like the splitting up of the verses and single lines, it works really well!
Thanks for noticing and appreciating this detail, J… it was a last minute thingie.. I really felt the poem was lacking something, hence those 1 line additions…
Glad you liked it! 😀
Have a Fab weekend.. mwahh
I was so sure they ended up together….good one.
I hope so too!!!! 🙂 Do you think the artist got into his painting? Ohhh…how I wish!!
Glad you liked this poem, Carolina… and thanks for your lovely comment…
Have a great weekend! 🙂
Wow! So poignant and beautiful. The love that comes with art is often profound.
Regards…
Indeed… I really felt for the painting…
Thank you for your kind and insightful words… Glad you enjoyed this poem, Jhannet…
Have an amazing weekend! (much love) 🙂
it is quite the sensual place between an artist and their art…i used to paint as well…and i would say a poet and their words…which of course you used to set just the mood…smiles.
Oh wow! You paint as well?? You really are multi-talented, Bri…phew!!!
I would love to see some your paintings, if possible… they will inspire me to write on something related!
In this poem, I really felt for the painting, and thus saw the need to writer about her feelings ! I am very glad you enjoyed the read… Coming form you, an artist, this comment means the world to me!!! Thank you so much for the appreciation, Brian… YOU ROCK!!
Have a pleasant weekend! 🙂
Awesome…the title is perfect.
I was so absorbed with the feeling of anticipation and excitement that I was blown away to realize it was an artwork viewing an artist’s heart!
Awww… I am so glad you liked this poem, Susan… And yes, the title and the build up were very deliberate 🙂
Thank you so much for your kind and appreciative comments… I am overjoyed! 😀
Have a gorgeous weekend, my friend… (hugs to you)
love the sense of momentum that builds with each verse, finally culminating wordlessly as we gain the perspective of the speaker. beautiful, just beautiful.
Woohoo!!! Thank you so much for the shower of praises, Joanna…. I am delighted that you enjoyed this poem as much as you did!!! Yes, the build up throughout the poem was very deliberate and intentional, to leave the reader asking for more, before finally divulging the truth 🙂
Thank you once again dear friend… I am humbled by your kind words…
Hope you have a fabulous weekend! 🙂 [much love]
An award for you my dear friend xx
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Yaaaayayyyyyy… Thankoooooooo Amanda!!! (doing a small dance) 🙂
Mwah mwah mwah! 😀
I am just laughing at your most recent response…where you say “I cannot paint for nuts!!” – however, you can WRITE for diamonds or rubys, or gold….seriously you are so gifted Kavita!!!
At first I was moved at the level of intimacy portrayed in this poem and then I was knocked sodeways when I realised that SHE was in a PAINTING! Wow – holy macaroni!!! Now, I am just in awe!
Chloe 😀 xx
hahahahah… maaaaaann…sometimes, I really wish I could paint! But then I am glad I can atleast write some poetry 🙂 phhheeeww
Thanks for appreciating the feelings of the painting in this poem, Chloe… (yea, when you did infact realize that SHE was a painting) .. I guess my poor painting skills made me actually FEEL for the PAINTED, and hence this poem… 🙂 I am very glad you enjoyed it too!!! I LOVED writing it! It was fun imagining that I was residing IN paper 🙂
And again, your comment leaves me with a HUGE ear to ear grin!! 😀 (saw that?)
Happy Weekend, my sweet sweet Chloe.. (I love your name…it’s so musical and graceful) Hugs and love flying your way!
Oh, I am SOooooo bad…I have pretty much caught up with all of my comments and reading just now…welll…almost!
Yup, I see your grin a million miles away my dear friend! 😀 Not sure if you got my message about Elton John’s song ‘Nikita’….I think some of my comments have disappeared but that might be because my computer sucks and keeps switching itself off! haha Or because I am blonde!! 😉
Anyways, glad you like my name…that really means a lot…because I changed my name legally to ‘Chloe’ in 2008…my brithname was actually ‘Karen’…
Lots of hugs across blogosphere to you 😀
Chloe xx
Whooaaa… that huge a backlog eh??? I know.. it can get really overwhelming…
Ohh.. I didn’t get your message about ‘Nikita’… but that’s okay.. I totally understand! Computers and laptops have a weird way of conking off JUST WHEN you want them to work… Murphy’s Laws at their prime!!! Phheeeww..
And my my my!! You changing your name to Chloe, and me LOVING this name… too much eh?!?! 😀
I accept allllll those hugs…
And mannnnnnyyyy kisses to you too CHLOE… I think if I ever have a daughter I’ll name her (or at least address her) as Chloe 🙂
MWAHH!!!
Shame you did not get the message I sent about that song…I just said that every time I see your little icon/name, I start singing Elton John’s song ‘Nikita’ – it’s just because of the similarity with your name – but it’s a great song too 😀 Do you know the one I mean???
Wow – your comment about ever having a daughter and you calling/addressing her Chloe is a MASSIVE compliment…I actually love the name Chloe toooo but then I did pay £75 to have it legallly changed – ha ha. Worth it’s weight in gold. 😀
Be good and keep smiling my friend!! Chloe xx
yea… I very well know which one you are referring to.. snowy winter!!! Oh yes, Nikita-Kavita … sound very similar 🙂
I love my name … heheheh.. and ever since I started writing poetry, I love it all the more! Phheewww
£75 for an identity/ personal identifier that you actually really like — hmm, ofcourse it’s worth it !!! 🙂
So…. Cheers to Chloe!!! 😀 😀
Kavita, your words brought this woman to life for me. Until the end, when I realized she was just a painting. :o( Oh, but never mind, thanks to you and the artist, she continues to live in my mind and to breathe in my heart. Yes, I feel her heart beating…
Awww…. keep her alive in your heart… she would love that, and will be grateful to you for giving her your heartbeats!! After all, that’s all she is looking for…
I am very glad you enjoyed this poem.. .and thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind words… I most appreciate your compassion towards the woman in the painting…
Thanks once again…
And have a gorgeous weekend!! 🙂 (loadsa love)
Incredible, filled with emotion and sensuality and then a twist…wow!
heheheh… glad you enjoyed the poem and that little twist, Suzicate… Thanks a TON for your visit and kind comments.. They mean a lot to me!!!
Have a fantastic weekend!! 😀
thanks for all the comment in my blog…
🙂
have a graceful evening!
Anytime, Ji… My day is incomplete without your name in it 🙂
Luv ya, girl…
Thanks for the wishes, and have a lovely time yourself!
Phew!! Another master piece from you. Didnt expect the twist!!!
Loved it.
Whooaaa!!! I am flattered, Abhishek!! Thank you so much… I am really glad you enjoyed this one…
And yes, that twist towards the end was very veeeery intentional 🙂
Thanks again for your kindness…
Hope you are having a fabulous weekend!! 🙂
Such a sensuality in this painting come-to-life….I adore the romance in this… who is this guy anyway? All of us girls would be so taken by him… you have such a great way of showing the scene in your pieces… it is just awesome! 🙂 Heartspell
heheheh… I wish I meet this guy too, HeartSpell! 😉 I will first request him to breathe some life (I mean REAL LIFE) into his painting 🙂 I really hope he can..some day!
It makes me very happy to see that you enjoyed this romantic piece, girl… and thank you a million times over for your kind kind words… that was as heartfelt as it can get! 🙂 I am humbled… really!
Have a lovely weekend, my friend… (much love to you) 🙂
lols like Amanda i thought this was a love poem betn u n ur husband…the ending floored me…brilliant writing Kavita…sizzling 😀
hehheheh… phheeww! You and your romantic mind, Vandana!! 😉
Oh, by the way, my hubby too has commented on this poem… named as “artLOVER”!! check his comment, if interested, and my ultra filmy reply to him too … hehhe
I am very happy you enjoyed this, girl…and yes, the twist at the end was very intentional ofcourse 😉
Thank you so much for your sweeeeetest comments… You made my Saturday lovely already!! 🙂
Have a super duper weekend! (looooadsa love coming your way.. :))
Sorry abt the late reply…my internet was down!!! :[
hehe…i did…well wat can i say, its love!filmy but oh so romantic 🙂
Yep i’m an incurable romantic….kinda…haha
u keep suprising me wit somethin new at every rally…have a great week:)
Awww… I hope the internet ain’t giving you any trouble now..
Well well well…. Cheers to all us romantics!!! 🙂
I hope I can keep surprising you with new poems… pleasantly ofcourse!! 🙂
Have a lovely week!!! (many hugs)
haha hope so too..btw these are for u:)
http://hoiden.wordpress.com/awards/friendship-awards/
Yaaaayyyy…awaaaards!! Thank you so much, Hoiden!!! Mwwwaaahh!
You rock!! 😀
Many hugs to you….
Artistically creative and wickedly eloquent, has a sense of depth looking into the artist soul.
Great poem.
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
Thank you for recognizing the thought behind the poem, Joanny… That was very thoughtful and kind of you… I am extremely pleased to see that you enjoyed this piece… It was my way of honoring the painting and her feelings…
Thanks once again..
Have a gorgeous weekend! 🙂 (love to you)
heyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
kavita sryyyyyyy i was quite busy these dayssssssss so did not rply on ur post
wel this poem is something quite different from other
this is lovely
u deserved a huge rond of applause 4 thisssssssssss
No probs at all, Rida… Hope all’s well in college 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this poem… too romantic perhaps… but aren’t we all romantics? 😉 Thank you for your kind words, girl…
Round of applause??? WOWWW…..thankoooooooooooo thank you thank you (blowing kisses your way :))
Enjoy a superb weekend!
so sensual, so elegant !! I wish I knew how it feels to be a painter….all I can ever draw is a flower haha.
hahahah… In that case, you and I are sailing in the boat, Asmita!! That boat of “flower painters” 🙂
Maybe it’s because I cannot really paint, is why I wanted to capture (in words) the feelings of the painting! I wanted to honor those feelings…
I am very glad you enjoyed the read, girl… and a HUGE thank you for all your super kind words… I am thrilled! 🙂
HAPPY WEEKEND!!!! mwah…
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L !! This was a class rendition and nowhere did U lose the emotion! meliiflluous :))
And yes, I forgot to introduce myself.. I am
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/
W.O.W !! THANK YOU so much, Purvi… that was one heck of a compliment! I am gloating, AND soaring up somewhere between those clouds 🙂
Okay okay.. came back to Earth 🙂 I am better off here anyway…
But seriously Pu, thanks a bunch for your visits and kind words… I am really glad you liked this piece..
It was an attempt on my part to capture the feelings of a painting…
I happen to love and enjoy music. And hence, your comment particularly means a lot to me!! Thanks again…
Hope you are having a gorgeous weekend, girl…ENJOY! 🙂
hey there…wanted to see if i could feature you in my monday highlight on oneshot…i appreciate your artistry and would like to expose others to it…if you would be willing drop me an email. i would just need a poem you either select from your writings orone that you write for it…look forward to hearing from you.
b
btm2007@yahoo.com
That would be an honor for me, Brian!! Thank you so muchhhhh 🙂 WOWWWW… To be featured on One Shot!! Yaaayyyy …
Thanks again B… luv ya!!! 🙂
Have a fabulous week ahead!!
What a deliciously romantic poem. 🙂 Time to have some cool dreams. 🙂 Thanks.
Oooooohhh… THAT delicious huh?! 😉 Thank you for your generous praise, lady…. I am delighted!!!
Hope you had some looovely dreams too… heheheh
Happy Sunday evening!! (mwaahhhh)
Such a sensous poem and wondeful imagery here. Together they made this a delightful poem to read. The mood shines through very nicely. Bravo!
Aww… thank you for the loveliest words, Tekia…. gee…. I am very happy that you liked it 🙂 Yaaayyyy
Have a Bee-you-tiful week, lovely girl 🙂 !!!
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5 awards…
wow,
u r outstanding!
FIVE AWARDS!!! OH WOW!!!
YOU are outstanding, Jingle!!!! You really are!!
THANK YOU soooooo muchhh!!!! Huurrraaayyyyy :D:D
Lovely! Beautiful surprise ending.
Ooohh… Glad you enjoyed this one… And thank you so much for your kind words!!! 🙂
Have a fabulous week ahead!! (much love to you…)
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Awww…. THANK YOU so muchhhh!!! This is AWESOME!! Yaaahhooooo… 🙂
This is Award Day, and because I liked your post so much, I have one for you! For details and to pick it up, go here : http://frayedges.wordpress.com/2010/08/15/outstanding-blogger-award/
Congratulations!
Thanks a bunch!!!! WOW! I am delighted!!! This is an awesome start to a new week!!!
Have a LOVELY time!! And thanks once again… 🙂
I really like this one – the twist is delightful! Wonderful poem. Wunderbar!
heheh.. thank you SO MUCH, Suzy … am very glad you enjoyed this one 🙂 I was trying to picture the feelings of a painting… Hope I did a decent job…
Have a lovely week ahead!! (much love to you… )
How delicious a line, ‘I wanted to taste him in sips.’ And you so got me with the surprise of the ending. Brava.
Ahaaaa… so glad you enjoyed the read… 🙂 Thanks for your kind words… And yes, the surprise ending was very intentional 😉
Have a great week! (much love)
Awesome!
-suja
Yaaayyy… So glad you liked it, Suja..Thank you!!! 🙂
Take care…
Oh my, Pigmalion from the other side. Quite wonderful, Kavita. Like fine old lace … and then the surpise ending. I like it very much.
My my my!!! That’s some compliment now!! :)Thank you thank you…. You liked it… me is happy! 🙂
And yes, the build up towards that surprise ending was very intentional 🙂
Take care… Happy Tuesday! 😀
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thank you, Ji, for highlighting my poem on Thursday Poets’ Rally… very sweet of you! 🙂
Wow! I love this piece…just pure romance, even if it’s all in a painting, it’s still a dream maker. Well done, Kavita 🙂
hehehe.. thanks, Tracy…
Yea…it is my belief that paintings too have characters, feelings and emotions.. and so I thought I will try writing a poem with the painting playing the lead role! 🙂 I am very very happy you liked it… Knowing you (whatever little that may be), I am pretty sure you are a romantic at heart (like moi!)…so it pleases me all the more that you liked and appreciated this poem! Thank you so much…. this means a lot to me!
Hope you are having a lovely week.. 🙂
this is absolutely lovely… so sensuous and beautiful…
the ending was very different…
brilliantly penned 🙂
Wooohhooooo!!! Thank you so much for your kind words and sweetness, Raji… it was so so sweet of you!!!
Yes, I really felt like bringing out the feelings of the painting (for a change)… and I am very happy to see you liked what you read… thanks again!!!
Have a gorgeous week ahead, my lovely friend… (many hugs to you) 😀
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