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I molded myself into a sculpture
So I could hold your attention as you finger my deep gashes
I spun myself into a fan
So I could dry the teardrops teetering on your feathery lashes
I hid myself in a picture frame
So you could look at me and think of pleasant memories
I wound myself into a clock
So you could glance at me while still in your reveries
I melted myself into the floor
So I could feel you walk your precious feet over my self
I bound myself into a book
So I could hold your thoughts poured out onto my pages’ shelf
I stuffed myself into a pillow
So you could rest your tired and aching head on me
I infused myself into a chalice
So you could drink from my depths and replenish your energy
I glazed myself into a mirror
So I could smile as you groomed yourself, peering into my eyes
I finally transformed into a woman
So you could hold my hand, kiss my cheek, and catch me by surprise
How I write, is mine...How you read, is yours 
U=You, u r capable of magics and fabulous tricks so that u r everything that one adores, or could rely on….
extraordinarily creative writing…
loved reading it.
😉
Oh!!! Yours is the first comment on this poem, Jingle… and I was SO happy reading it, that I did a small dance too 😀
I thank you immensely for your kindest words, your continued encouragement, and your invaluable comments!!! I am thrilled that you enjoyed reading this one 🙂
Have a Happy Thursday!
same 2 u.
😉
🙂 thankooz
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Thanks for adding/linking this one too, Ji ! You are too quick! 🙂
I like 🙂 I like 🙂
Heheheh.. thank you thank you.. Glad you enjoyed this read… 🙂
Happy Weekend!!!
Lovely! Best wishes…
Thank you, lady!! Glad you liked the read…
Have a great week ahead!
A great poem about insecurity and just being who you are. Good work.
You hit the nail on the head, with the word “insecurity” ! I just didn’t want to use it in the poem 🙂
Thanks you for stopping by and your kind comments, and I am glad you enjoyed reading this one!
Happy a great week ahead!
oh ……… I really really enjoyed the poem
Thank you so much… I am glad you enjoyed the read…
It was a pleasure writing it too…
Have a lovely week ahead…Cheers!
This? Is a long look into a very deep well. Beautifully, comprehensively constructed.
Oohh.. Thank you so very much for your kind words and appreciation towards my work… I really value your feedback..
Have a beautiful week ahead! Cheers..
Insecurity is only the beginning – a girl seeking that which was missing at some crucial point in her life, trying to win it from her lover, shelving her individuality and serving herself, blank as an artist’s undressed canvas, offering her soul to whatever shape or structure the devilled lover will notice… and thinking these contortions have transformed her into a woman – wow. This is so passionate and expresses so beautifully women’s journey through powerlessness before they find themselves.
Well done, Kavita
Wow Cindy!!! You have summarized it so well!! Insecurity indeed! But it also shows the unconditional love.. well, unconditional except for just 1 thing – acknowledgement of her existence 🙂 She seems okay with the idea of just being by his side, and looking for the best form she needs to assume.
Thank you for your invaluable comments, and your kind and encouraging words! They are much much appreciated! I am very glad you enjoyed this poem…
Have a beautiful week ahead!!!
wonderful…i am glad you ended where you did…and as much as each of the others are appreciated, not so much as the last…hopefully. smiles.
YES, YES and YES!! Brian, you have said the things I deliberately left unmentioned in the poem (I think I even thought them out in the same words..really)!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT!!! I am very very happy… Jingle and you have echoed my interpretation of the poem!!! 🙂 As much as I liked the role and life of each Avatar, I too am happy where I’ve ended! 🙂 Actually, I wrote this poem for my husband, who proposed to me on this very day 9 yrs ago (I was kid back then…hehehe), and we were married 3 years later! He read it today, and loved it too… 😀
Anyway, I’m thrilled you stopped by… I am a fan of your work, and sooo look forward to your comments! Thank you once again..
Have a beautiful week ahead!!!
woot. well happy 9 year anniversary of getting engaged…and aw shucks, i enjoy every time i stop by…you really should try the 55…it is rather a challenge, but quite fun…you got the skillz to pull it off…
heheh.. Thanks again, Brian..(blush blush).. for the lovely wishes and kind words.. (goosebumps again)
And I will definitely try the 55.. it does sound challenging and fun!!! Will visit G Man right away 🙂
Have fun with your family.. An I’m looking forward to reading some more lovely stories by you on that front 🙂
My lord! This has taken me in completely…to me it’s the best I’ve read from you, at least today. To have a woman write something like this to me would send me over the moon.
Very well done! Bravo!
Tracy H
Oh my my !! And I am already over the moon on reading your comment!! 🙂 Thank you so much for your lovely words, Tracy !!! I am elated that you enjoyed this poem… I actually had written it for my husband, as we celebrate 9 years of getting engaged today!! I somehow value this day much more than the day we actually got married.. hehehe
Anyway, once again, thanks a million for your encouraging words… I really appreciate it!!!
And have a lovely weekend (it’s almost there) 😉 !!!
I agree with Tracy; I’ve only been reading your work for a short while, but this is brilliant.
Gee.. thanks a TON, Cindy!! Wow… today is one of my better days for sure!! 🙂
I am very glad you enjoyed the read… Your comments and appreciation mean a LOT to me … thank you once again..
And have a beautiful weekend!!
Wow, this is utterly beautiful and touches my heart. I love this! You have created something wonderful here and have given me ideas for another poem on the theme of “9 lives” :3
Yaaaayyy.. I am glad you got ideas from this one! When I was writing the poem, I never had “cats” or “9 lives” in my head 🙂
I had written all the lines and had completed the poem..and later, when I was thinking of a suitable title, I saw that there were 9 avatars before the “woman” thingie.. and so I finally settled on this title 🙂
Anyway, I am really happy you liked this poem… And thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation.. They mean a lot!!
A very happy weekend to you! (hugs)
Yay! *hugs*
I figured that’s why you named it 9 lives, for the nine symbols. If I come up with a good enough poem and post it on my blog, I’ll give you credit and share a link to this poem for being my inspiration :3
Awww.. that’s really very sweet of you Gally..
(love)
ex-cell-lent! geesh! i dig this, a whole helluva lot.
Whoa!! Thank you so much for your kind words, Patricia… I really appreciate it!!
And I’m glad you enjoyed this one… 🙂
Hope you have a lovely Thursday and a gorgeous weekend !!
(hugs)
Wow…what a beautiful intimate poem you have written…It really encaptulates what you felt then…and I am never too busy to stop by my favourite girl in the whole wide wolrd…this is awesome my friend and is worthy of a song:) And congratulations on this day 9 years ago my dear friend:) 🙂 🙂
Wooohooo… A FABULOUS morning to you, Amanda!!! Am so so so happy to see you 🙂 And it’s really very sweet of you to visit my blog, even when busy!! I am elated and floating somewhere already… heheheh … Phew!!! You are too kind and generous with your praises and words for me … (blushing)
And A HUGE Thank You for the lovely wishes!!! 🙂 These magical 9 years seemed to have flown in just a second! 😉
Hope you have a not-so-cold day, and a fantastic weekend!!! Hurrrraaayyyyyy 🙂
i’m trying to pick which life is my favorite,
can’t decide between clock and chalice (chalice part is hot, btw — doni is naughty)
great expression. 🙂
heheh.. so, were you able to decide? 🙂
Thanks for stopping by, and I’m glad you enjoyed the poem 😉
Have a smashing weekend!
Whoa! Almost you could have told the story of my life, or at least parts of it. Love, love, love the way it ends!
Aawww… I hope you are living the better parts of your life now..
Thank you soooo much for visiting, and for your kind and encouraging words.. Am really glad you enjoyed it… And yes, I too am happy the way the end turned out… 🙂
Have a gorgeous weekend!
A very nice piece about changing for others and self-discovery. Well done.
I’m happy you enjoyed this poem..
Sometimes, just being for them is what matters.. which is kinda silly, but true many a time… this poem was my way of bringing out that aspect..
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation towards this piece…
Have a fabulous weekend!
A poetic slam dunk. I hope the gentleman appreciates the lady. Assume she’s no longer insecure. Wonderful work. Fine poeming . . . Happy Rally, Kavita! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this . . . Thank you!
Woohoo!!! Slam dunk and all… yaaayyy! Thank you so much for your enthusiasm towards this poem, Jamie… I am delighted that you enjoyed the read!
And ofcourse not!!! I have never been, and am still not insecure 🙂 This poem was just my way of telling my husband (today, we celebrate 9 yrs to getting engaged) that I probably lived various lives in various forms just to be with him, and that in this life, I finally made my entry in as a “lady”! 🙂
I knoooow..it was way too poetic maybe.. But I kinda liked the way it turned out! 🙂
Once again, thank you so much for your kind words and your concern too.. that was very sweet of you…
Have a BE-A-“YOU”-TI-FUL weekend!! 😉
Nicely written!
Thank you.. I’m glad you liked it..
Have a great weekend!
I disappeared when I read your poem, which is always a sign that words that have captured me. Thank you. I love, love, loved it.
Awww.. that was too sweet of you Lisa! I am really very happy that you liked this poem so much, that you were absorbed into it :)… And your way of putting it across brought a HUGE smile on my face! 🙂
Have a GORGEOUS weekend, lady!! (love and hugs)
Being insecure is something that we do not realize is a way to make us stop and think…before we act silly. 🙂
heheheh.. I know!!!! It really makes us act silly! But this poem was just my way of telling my hubby that I probably lived various lives in different forms just so I could be with him, before ending up in my current form! 🙂 And all this, cuz today, we celebrate 9 years of getting engaged! Yaaayyy ..
Annnyyyhoooo .. I hope you enjoyed the read, girl! 😉
Have a fab weekend!
Many …Many…more. CONGRATS. 🙂
wwooooohoooo… that was ULTRA SWEET of you, Doraz !!! THANK YOU (a zillion over) !!! We actually did a happy dance to it too..and that’s a big deal, cuz my hubby has 2 left feet… heheh
Oh, and he also says a huge thanks to you!! 🙂
You are just to good!! Rock on, girl…
I am sooo happy to see you guys having fun in this crazy world of ours. lol 🙂 Your husband is kindly welcomed. 🙂 Dance on now. 🙂
Heheheh.. thanks, Doraz.. dancing on, just like you want us to! 😉
Have a FABULOUS weekend !
good.
Thank you for stopping by, and for you comment!
Have a nice weekend
You speak about life, about love,our emotions, all the feelings we go through, we cannot escape the tell tale heart, it takes experience to learn and grow. You captured it so well here.
Joanny
Thursday rally
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com
I had two posts today
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/07/dance-of-fire-el-amor-brujo.html
Aww… thank you so much for your kind words, Joanny!
It’s amazing how certain experiences totally inspire you, and how poetry seems to just amplify that inspiration and make it look so real all over again.. isn’t it?!
I am very glad that you enjoyed my work… thank you once again for your invaluable feedback.. It means a lot to me!
And now, I’m on my way to check out your now posts… 🙂
Have a GORGEOUS weekend, lady! And Happy Rallying..
A very feminine poem, i love this! Men should really get your message here, Kavita, so they could treat us better, LOL 🙂
superb writing!
Hehehe… very sweet of you !!! Thank you so much for your kind words.. Men (and some women too) can sure learn a thing or two.. (if they wish to) 😉
Once again, thanks a TON for taking the time… I really appreciate it!!
Have a lovely weekend!
Happy 9th Anniversary…
Sweet you.
your husband must be proud of you..
😉
have a romantic and relaxing evening!
😉
Awww… thank you so much, Ji!!! It was a lovely evening indeed… 🙂
This is fantastic! I adore this poem! Wonderful job, thanks for sharing.
Awww…thanks a ton for your lovely and encouraging words, girl!!!! I am very glad you enjoyed this poem… 🙂
Have a gorgeous weekend!
Oh wow… the things we’ll do for love, eh? We will absolutely turn ourselves inside out and back to front for just that “right” person! Is it a good thing, or is it a bad thing? Perhaps such questions are irrelevant by that point…
I love how you worded this. You presented this whole idea in a way that startled and delighted me. Bravo! 🙂
Whoaaa… thanks a ton, Tony!! I am very pleased that you enjoyed reading this one!
And you are so right!!! The definitions of good and bad get a bit murky by that point! 🙂 I am just glad I am where I am, and with whom I am.. 🙂
The enthusiasm in your comment made me doubly happy though!! Thank you once again for your kind words…they are most appreciated!!
Have a fantastic weekend!
Kavita your poetry is just as beautiful as you are. Always generous and sincere in your comments, your piece shines with all of that and more. I love the nine lives, a cat’s curiosity mixed in with love channeled into a Pinocchio story. “I bound myself into a book
So I could hold your thoughts poured out onto my pages’ shelf” was my favorite of your reincarnations. I wish I could hold my heart beat’s thoughts that he keeps to himself more times that I would like him to. Such a gentle sweet and sincere poem. I couldn’t help but to re-read it a few times.
My my my!!! Thank you so very much for your lovely kind words!!! I am totally flattered… no, I mean REALLY flattered!!! *blush*
I am glad you liked this poem… and am happy to see that you too have felt the same, and could relate to it.. (umm…should I be happy about it?!)
Anyway… sometimes, don’t you just wish you could transform into whatever he carries around most, or something like that ?! 🙂 I do too..
But this poem was more of my way of telling him that I probably lived many different lives just to be him, before finally “settling” on my current one 🙂 Just my way of wishing him on the 9th anniversary of our engagement I guess.. 🙂
Thank you once again for your heartfelt comments and appreciation towards my work… It really means a LOT to me! I am absolutely humbled by your gesture..
Have a GORGEOUS weekend with “him” 🙂
This is such a romantic poem.. Reminds me of the times I’d tell my boyfriend that I wished to become everything he cherishes 😉 Very beautiful Kavita
Aww…thanks a bunch, Ilakya !! That’s exactly what I wanted to convey to hubby with this poem today! 🙂
I am glad you could relate to this poem, and I hope you enjoyed the read…
Have a lovely weekend!
Your husband is gonna be super happy..!!! 🙂 The poem’s too beautiful.. 😀
have a great weekend Kavita 🙂
awww.. thanks a bunch, girl!!! heheheh
Back at ya :)!
I loved it… tat was very beautifull and very well expressed
🙂
You can find my posts here:
http://vishurocks.wordpress.com/
Thanks a bunch for your kind words, Vishu!! Glad you enjoyed the read…
I am once again on my way to your blog 🙂
Have a great weekend!
Beautiful poem and lovely words 🙂 It been a wonderful read! Thank for sharing such a wonderful poem, will be looking forward for more 😛
Aww… Thank you so much for your kind words, Riika! I am very glad that you liked the poem… It was my pleasure writing it too 🙂
I appreciate your time and your lovely comments
Have a gorgeous weekend!
“I stuffed myself into a pillow
So you could rest on your tired and aching head on me”
Wow! I love this poem- it’s so sincere and innocent, like it has the spirit of a child! Simply beautiful… 🙂
Aww.. thank you so much Lua… I love your comment! I woke up real late today, and this is the first thing I read… and it brought a huge smile on my face! So, thank you doubly for that!! 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed reading this one…
Have a beautiful weekend!
A very enjoyable read!
-Weasel
gee.. thanks a ton, Weasel.. am glad you enjoyed it..
Take care, and have a beautiful weekend!
You’re welcome! Before I forget, you’ve got a blog award!
http://systematicweasel.wordpress.com/2010/07/24/one-lovely-blog-award/
-Weasel
Gee…thank you so much Weasel… this is really wonderfully kind and generous of you…
Have a great weekend!!! 🙂
oh my god!
Is all I can say now
heheh.. thanks a ton, Keshav! Glad you enjoyed the read.. 🙂
Have a fabulous weekend!
I love the objects of your poem. Sculpture,, frame, floor, pillow, mirror. We owe so much and should demand more of the objects of our lives. The objects around us are doors to a greater appreciation of our embodied and material existence and are doors to a deeper sprituality. Oh and I would love to catch you by surprize.
Cheers Kavita!
Aww… I am glad you enjoyed the read, Christopher… And I much appreciate your thoughtful comments..
Indeed we owe a lot to these plain and simple objects around us.. they inspire us in so many ways ..
And you sure caught me by surprise with your visit :).. I am delighted!!!
Thanks once again, and have a super great weekend!!
you are fantastic! I love your writing. and i honored beyond words to be on your blog roll and in your noteworthy reads! thank you for your inspiration that you deliver in the words that you write here, to others, and to me.
take good care….
Aww.. thank you soo much for all your kind and encouraging words!!! And I hope you enjoyed this read.. 🙂
As for adding you on my blogroll, oh please! That’s entirely my pleasure! I love what and how you write – which is, I believe, straight from your heart!
So, let’s just write on… 🙂
Have a fabulous weekend, friend!
u r marvellous dear
ur poem made me speechless
may u always write these type of beautiful poemmmmmmm god bless u
Oh.. thank you so very much for your sweet words, Rida! I look forward to your comments.. they always make me very happy.. And I’m glad you liked and enjoyed this poem…
Have a Fun and Fantastic weekend, dear! 🙂
Beautiful piece here, Kavita…Lucky husband…Happy Anniversary of when you became engaged! Hope he catches you by surprise very often…
I have nominated you for the Perfect Poet Award…
http://heartspell.wordpress.com/2010/07/23/fade-to-night/
You deserve it!Happy Day! Heartspell
Oh.. thank you so much for the Anniversary wishes, Heartspell.. It was really very sweet of you.. And, between him and me, I am pretty sure I am the lucky one 🙂 He definitely catches me by surprise (infact it’s surprising how he manages that even after these these many years.. heheh… but it’s lovely!)
I am glad you enjoyed this poem..
And THANK YOU so much for nominating me for the Perfect Poet Award…that was really very kind and generous of you!! I very much appreciate your lovely gesture…
Have a gorgeous weekend, dear friend…
This is really amazing writing – and describes a process – finally becoming the woman you are now..? Beautiful!
Aww.. thank you so much for your kind comments, Claudia.. I sure am glad you enjoyed the read!
I too intended to make it look like a process (over a span of many lifetimes), till I finally reached where I am.. 🙂
Once again, I really appreciate your visits and invaluable thoughts…
Have a gorgeous weekend!
If I had nine lives, I wonder how I would use them…I love how you have woven the ultimate love poem into your nine lives…just brilliant!
Thank you Charles… Coming from you, I am highly thrilled about this comment!! I am very glad you enjoyed it.
And I too loved writing this one for my husband. It was just my way of wishing him on the 9th anniversary of our engagement 🙂
Best Regards..
your writing is fantastic!
Pamela
Aww.. thank you so much, Pamela.. I am glad you enjoyed the read..
Enjoy a lovely weekend!
I marked you down as done,
I was offline for a few hours,
Many thanks for the quality participation!
Happy Friday!
🙂
Oh..thank you Jingle..
You are sooo prompt with your responses!! I am really stunned by your active enthusiasm 🙂
ROCK ON!!!
This is a wonderful piece – just Love how you incarnated yourself into all these things to be close to the one you love…Great…..!!!!…bkm
Oh.. thank you for your thoughtful and kind comments, bkm.. I really appreciate it!!
And I am very glad you enjoyed this one… Once again, my heartfelt thanks…
Have a beautiful weekend!
Now – THIS is simply fantastic! Wow! Thanks and congratulations on your anniversary!!! Chloe 😀
Aww… thank you so much for your kind words, and the lovely wishes !!! It was very sweet of you…
And I am really glad you enjoyed this poem which I had dedicated to my awesome hubby! 🙂
Once again, thanks a bunch!
And have a FABULOUS and GORGEOUS weekend!!!
Your response to Imagina speaks tons about the heart that wrote the verses.
Congrats to you and hubbie on your 9.
You wrote your self into a verse and doing so fed my mind and touched my heart.
Thank you for that
and I thank you for your kind words on mine and I’ll be back for more of yours.
Ohh… that is very sweet of you… Thank you so much for the lovely wishes!! 🙂
I am really too happy that you liked and enjoyed this poem, and I genuinely appreciate your much valued comments… It was entirely my pleasure writing this one 🙂
I found your poems lovely, and I too am gonna be a regular visitor to your site 🙂
Thank you once again..
And have a GORGEOUS weekend !! 🙂
Wow, this is amazing, I absolutely loved it! Especially how you ended it. Great work!
My favorite lines were:
“I spun myself into a fan
So I could dry the teardrops teetering on your feathery lashes”
I’ve always thought that one of the best ways to show you love someone is to be there to wipe away their tears.
Heheh..thank you so much, girl!! Was looking forward to your comment..
I am happy to see you enjoyed the read.. and I kinda agree with you on comment you made about the best way to show you love them..
But even better would be to make sure they don’t have that tear at all 😉 .. don’t you think?!
Anyway, I much appreciate your invaluable words… and have a fabulous weekend!!! 🙂
This is absolutely fabulous! Such imagination and emotion, and quite cleverly written.
Oh… Thank you for your kind words.. And I am very glad you enjoyed the poem..
It was a pleasure writing it too.. 🙂
Hope you enjoy a lovely weekend!
I love the idea of making yourself into something rather than having it thrust on you. In a way we have so much of our life dictated to us, but there are those things we choose and use to slowly turn ourselves into more like the people we want to be. Awesome. 🙂
Yea seriously… the little things around us can inspire us to a great extent – if only we choose to look closely…
Thank you sou much for your invaluable thoughts and comments.. I am really glad you enjoyed reading this one 🙂
Have a gorgeous weekend!!
it is beaty
I bow my head to the women’s wisdom
Our thoughts are we, it is our erudition, it is our inner world
Take care of your world from the poisonous thoughts..
Good luck
Woohoo.. Amen to that! 🙂
Thank you for the kind wishes, and your thoughtful comments.. I really appreciate that! And am glad you enjoyed this poem…
Have a gorgeous weekend!
first time over here visiting you, and i’m absolutely floored by your writing! this has a kind of quiet humility to it that at the same time holds its head quite high and makes one proud to be a woman. very artfully done!
and congrats on the anniversary, btw 🙂
Aww..thank you so much for visiting… And am very very happy to see that you enjoyed my stuff here..
I really appreciate your kind words and thoughtful comments..
Ohh.. and thanks for the anniversary wishes too.. that was very sweet of you.. 🙂
Have a lovely weekend!
All I can say, is that I think this is a really cool poem. The ending rounded it out very nicely. Awesome piece of work here and I loved it!
Aww.. thank you so much, Tekia.. I am very pleased to see that you liked this poem.. It was my way of telling my hubby how much I love him 🙂
Have a GORGEOUS weekend!
Great poem. Impactful lines expressing vulnerability. Always great to read your work, Kavita. (And yes, you must try a 55!) cheers
Thanks Adam!!! I am always looking forward to your comments.. They give me a boost everytime I need it!! 🙂
I am very glad that you liked this poem..
And yes, 55… G Man it is .. going to his blog already! Thank you for the reminder, Adam! It had slipped my ninny brain .. phhewww
Have a fantastic weekend!
Wow!
This is very nice .
Thanks a bunch!! Glad you liked this poem 🙂 It was fun writing it too…
Happy Weekend!!
Here comes me again to present you, this beautiful award~
Hope you like it and have a beautiful weekend ahead:P
http://riikainfinityy.com/2010/07/25/one-lovely-blog-award/
Oh…thank you so much Riika… this is really wonderfully kind and generous of you…
I really appreciate your gesture..
Have a lovely weekend yourself!!! 🙂
A beautiful love poem with great imagery and imagination. 🙂
Thank you Ziibi, for your kind comments and appreciation towards this poem…
And that was EXACTLY what it was – IMAGINATION!! 🙂 Glad you saw it that way…thanks again
Hope you are enjoying a fabulous weekend!
not my type but cute form of true love. giving oneself away completely to make the partner happy.
Oh.. thanks for the sweet words..
This was just my way of wishing my husband on the 9th anniversary of our engagement 🙂 Still feels like it was just yesterday..
I not not usually the mushy type.. but apparently, I could manage that in a poem 🙂 I am good with that!
Anyway, happy weekend!
A very touching poem… I could feel the words tranform into imagery live before me…. Great piece of work…
Aww.. thanks you so much for your kind and encouraging words, Abhishek… I am very glad you liked the poem..
It was totally my poetic way of wishing my husband on our anniversary 🙂 I loved feeling and writing this one…
Putting myself into the hearts of such simple everyday objects, and writing from their perspective, was a very different feeling.. Maybe if they could talk, they would have said similar things themselves(or so I think :))
Anyway, thank you once again… your visits and comments are very much appreciated!
Have a fantabulous week ahead!
well said
Thanks!! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed this…
Have a great week!
I wasn’t expecting the sweet ending– lovely! I’m nominating you for the Pink award– check my blog in about an hour when I’ll have the post done.
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
Aww… I am glad you enjoyed this poem, Marilynn… It was my way of wishing my hubby on our anniversary 🙂
And thank you for nominating me for the award… that’s very sweet of you…
Have a beautiful week ahead!
This was one of the most beautiful, romantic poems I’ve ever read. I’ve only recently found your site and am still catching up on prior posts. I’ve gotta say, your poetry is wonderful! Thanks for sharing it!
Wooohooo… I am elated on reading all your kind words, lady!! Thank you so much…. your appreciation and encouragement mean a LOT to me!!!
I am very happy to see that you enjoyed this poem… It was my way of wishing my hubby on our anniversary.. a little mushy perhaps.. but it’s okay, cuz he liked it too 🙂
Thank you once again, for taking the time to visit and read my work… I am thrilled!!
Have a gorgeous week ahead!!! Have a great summer!
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OH WOW Riika!!! I am so happy you liked this poem so much that, with it, you considered me worthy of the perfect poet award… I am thoroughly flattered!!
I sure hope I continue to deliver in a way that you enjoy…
This gesture of yours means a LOT to me… thank you once again… yaaaayyyy
And have a fantabulous week ahead!
I ran across your blog when surfing several weeks ago and find myself here again by chance. I loved this poem. It speaks so clearly to those who miserably try to be someone’s everything. From personal experience, I have learned that this type of behavior is more of an attempt to be in control rather than a sign of true love. Thanks for giving your poem such a happy ending!
I am very glad you enjoyed this poem.. Thank you so much for your kind words…
Although mine wasn’t an attempt to DO any of the stuff as I’ve mentioned in this poem, it was just my way of wishing my husband on the 9th anniversary of our engagement 🙂 It was my attempt to tell him that I probably lived many lives in many forms just trying to be with him, and now, in this one, I am a woman, and LOVE being with him this way too 🙂
But yes, I totally appreciate and agree with your point … people do the most weirdest of stuff to gain and maintain control in a relationship … Although that ain’t the case here 🙂
Hope you have a fantastic week ahead!
beautiful images, kavita! very very creative, and well crafted. you know you really are capable of sheer magic with words 🙂
Oh WOW!!! I am flattered, Amz!!! I am very happy you enjoyed this one 🙂 Thank you so much for your lovely words.. they were like music to me 🙂
This poem was special to me, cuz it was my way of wishing my hubby on the 9th anniversary of our ENGAGEMENT! 🙂
So… thanks once again, sweetheart.. you are too kind..
Have a beautiful week ahead!
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Thank you Jingle.. you are too kind.. I will put in my votes/nominations at the earliest!
I can’ t but agree.I always wanted to write in my site something like that but I guess you’ r faster.
Awww… Glad you liked this piece.. thanks for the kind words…
Have a great week !
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