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Conspiration, Paulo Coelho's words - in experience, Pleasant surprise, Surprisingly true, Uncanny, Unexpected, Wishful thinking
The moment I caught her sneakily cheating on that game
I knew we were to be two best and crazy friends forever
Like we are now, madder than ever!
The moment I heard the track on that old cassette player
I knew it was to be an all-time chartbuster
Like it has been, be it now or yesteryear!
The moment I first set foot on these grounds five years back,
I knew this was totally THE place to be for me
Like I feel even now, living in this people-sea!
The moment our eyes met in that office corridor as we crossed,
I knew we were to spend a lifetime together
Like we do now with each other!
The moment I read that book by that new author the other day
I knew it would get etched in many a mind across the world
Like it is now, and will probably continue to, in gold!
The moment I had my first Nutella crepe in that mega mall
I knew this HAD to get more popular than just be my favorite
Like it did today, with this store opening here, selling it!
So if something occurs at some point in my life time
Of which I might have ever had a passing thought,
It may actually be what I have always sought!
Strange are the ways… Keeps me hopeful though…
Validator said:
Your uncanny abilities to set trends and trails are indeed supreme. Go ahead paint the Big Apple in your favorite color.
Satyakam said:
I can simply say Wow!!!
A very alert person… š
Kavita said:
Thanks! Glad you liked it..
As for the alertness, well, sometimes you just “know” š
Jingle said:
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/19/thursday-poets-rally-week-23-poetry-awards-special-notice/
pick all 5 awards from the post.
thank you…
Kavita said:
gee.. thank you so much, Jingle, for the awards!!!
Will pick all 5 right away!!! Only, I do not know how to do it š¦ Will try though…
And once again, my sincerest thanks!!!
robot cupcake poetry said:
Nice structure, I love the repeats. That’s an interesting way to build a poem, “The moment…”. Also I love, “this people sea!” I know just what you mean.
Kavita said:
Thanks a ton… Am glad you liked it… š
And I get a feeling that your interpretation of ‘people sea’ is exactly what I intended it to be š LOVE this place!!!
onesurvivor said:
Very interesting ideas in your poetry. I don’t have a lot of time to read, but I did put your blog on my RSS list…just in case. You have quite a way with words.
Kavita said:
I am honored!! Read them at your leisure… š
Your comments mean a lot to me.. Thanks once again
Jingle said:
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/agreement-between-jingle-and-thursday-poets-rally-participants/
in case you plane to participate Rally week 24, please sign in with this link first.
Thank you in advance!
Kavita said:
Hullo Jingle,
Thank you for letting me know. I have now signed in at the link you’ve sent.
My poems and I will be ready in a bit š
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