Image made by me using iPad's ArtStudio
Somewhere in the space of time
our hearts crossed paths
Mine was red with passion
Yours, dark with desire
And it only took us
a few moments to realize
that while I reddened yours,
you had blackened mine…
**Posted for Open Link Night‘s 30th week here at d’VersePoets – one of my favorite Tuesday afternoon hangouts! **
OH MY GOD .. how i wish you had put this some time back
so I could have used this hard truth …
so very truthful.. but alas now my heart is black tooo, so much for love haaan…
Ouch time eh, Bikram?! Don’t worry, hearts have a way of bouncing back to their effervescent selves..
Here’s some hugs till then…
Take care, pal…
whoa ! whhat a beautiful well crafted post.. both the image and words..
Hehe…thanks, babe! You’re very kind…
<3
short and sweet and awfully nice
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…thankoo, Amira! So sweet of you to say that!
HUGS!! And yes, A very Happy Valentine’s Day to youuuu..
Very nice. I liked the title and the art too. I felt sad on reading this poem.
Thanks, Balu.. no need to feel sad though.. Love is kinda tricky..isn’t it?